Reviewer: Dad
Date: 08/12/12 17:34
Chapter: CHAPTER EIGHT

Good chapter, but finish this story before starting another one.

Reviewer: CanisMajor
Date: 08/12/12 9:32
Chapter: CHAPTER EIGHT

Go Dudley - he's racing downhill, still on his feet - though not for much longer, I fear. Looking forward to reading through the wreckage next time. Still a great story.

A Dementor-centric story: first-person or third? To get the full effect, you may have to go for first. Also, how long can you keep it up for? The novelty might wear off after a few thousand words. But go for it anyway - there's bound to be a way to make it work.

Reviewer: Osced
Date: 07/26/12 18:26
Chapter: Chapter 7

Great chapter, I loved Dudley reaction to everything magic in this chapter and his musing about war in the wizarding world was hilarious..looking forward to read the next chapter.//Osced

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 07/22/12 18:43
Chapter: Chapter 7

Excited for an update, even if it was short. I am glad that Dudley had decided to talk to Pavarti again and to be more accepting of the wizarding world. It will be so cute to see them as a couple and to see Dudley attend Harry's wedding. Update ASAP!

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 07/21/12 22:29
Chapter: Chapter 7

Getting interestimg.

Reviewer: Lady_Rayne
Date: 07/21/12 21:48
Chapter: Chapter 7

Nice! So glad to see an update. However, there's a typo, it's in the news article text:
A break-in at Hogwarts School of Wtichcraft and Wizardry shocked students and teachers alike yesterday afternoon,
Should be:
A break-in at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry shocked students and teachers alike yesterday afternoon,

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 07/21/12 21:07
Chapter: Chapter 7

Brilliant!!

Reviewer: ColoradoLunafan
Date: 07/14/12 16:35
Chapter: CHAPTER THREE

loving it so far!

Reviewer: treehugger01
Date: 07/11/12 13:53
Chapter: Chapter 1

Thanks so much for the new chapters! I have kept it in my favorites to see when you would update again. I really like the Dudley angle.

Reviewer: RavenclawRiddikilus
Date: 07/09/12 21:23
Chapter: CHAPTER TWO

I love this!

Reviewer: RavenclawRiddikilus
Date: 07/09/12 21:18
Chapter: Chapter 1

I love this story! You are a wonderful writer, very technical!

Reviewer: crbluvsravenclaw
Date: 07/02/12 23:54
Chapter: Chapter 1

That was a good and interesting read!(:

Reviewer: Lynx by Heart
Date: 06/30/12 5:22
Chapter: CHAPTER SIX

This is so amazing! I got sucked in right from the start and I can't wait to see how it turns out in the end! Your writing is fantastic and you do so well developing the characters and showing other sides to them! Keep up the great work!

Reviewer: FieryGem
Date: 06/21/12 23:56
Chapter: CHAPTER SIX

I found this story today and read all six chapters. I really like it, can't wait for more!

Reviewer: Ruchira_M
Date: 06/20/12 14:30
Chapter: CHAPTER SIX

Cheers, Dudley. Way to show it too ruddy Vernon and Petunia.
By thew way, I think I've reviewed your story before, but I didn't get an update alert.:(

Author's Response: Sorry to hear that, there may have been a glitch with the update alerts... I do have this story posted up at Fanfiction.net as well if you wanted to check it out there, and I believe they do update alerts too. Thank you for reviewing though, it's always great to hear encouraging feedback! Cheers :)

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 06/20/12 12:13
Chapter: CHAPTER SIX

Does Dudley know whether he is coming or going? Good read.

Author's Response: Haha I'm not sure I understand the question. I do see Dudley as a very conflicted character, which would be what drives almost his every action. Thanks for commenting! Cheers :)

Reviewer: Red Vines
Date: 06/20/12 11:18
Chapter: CHAPTER SIX

I LOVE the story so far! Please update soon! I really like how the dementors and a little exposure to the wizarding world has given Dudley some backbone. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm glad you're enjoying the story! I've been really pleased with the general response to Dudley and the fact that other people seem to agree about how much potential he has. Will try to get another chapter up this week if I can. Cheers :)

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 06/20/12 2:35
Chapter: CHAPTER SIX

Hmmm Dudley had run away to the Wizarding World...hope he finds Parvati soon! I enjoyed his meeting with Hermione and him realizing that some witches can be "normal". Write more soon!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I love writing Hermione, so I'm glad that came across well. I've got a lot going on with real life writing but I'll try to get a bunch more updates in before summer's end. Cheers :)

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 06/20/12 2:35
Chapter: CHAPTER SIX

Hmmm Dudley had run away to the Wizarding World...hope he finds Parvati soon! I enjoyed his meeting with Hermione and him realizing that some witches can be "normal". Write more soon!

Reviewer: CanisMajor
Date: 06/20/12 2:27
Chapter: CHAPTER SIX

Who knew Dudley had it in him to be such an engaging character? This is lovely fresh writing. There are a few glitches (Godric's Hollow isn't near London), but it seems ungrateful to mention them, really.

Do you have any non-fanfiction work you can post a link to? Or a title for that might-be-published novel?

Author's Response: Gosh I feel really silly now, I definitely knew that about Godric's Hollow and didn't bother to get someone to beta me. Thanks for the review, and I will try to practice more constant vigilance! I'm glad you're enjoying the story, I didn't think many other readers would be interested in Dudley but it turns out he's quite fun... I don't post any of my original work online, but hopefully someday if I'm lucky you may see some of it on a library bookshelf. My novel in the works is titled The Lighthouse Keeper's Daughter. I do have an agent and an editor but we haven't found a publisher yet so we're working on that currently. Thanks for the support, it is very much appreciated! Cheers :)

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