Reviewer: Ruchira_M
Date: 12/27/12 22:25
Chapter: Chapter 1

Lovely end. And I liked Stella.

Reviewer: Ruchira_M
Date: 09/25/12 14:31
Chapter: CHAPTER TWELVE

Is this the end? It's beautiful- although, really, I would have loved to see Vernon's face.

Reviewer: ILoveHarry 3_14
Date: 09/19/12 22:17
Chapter: CHAPTER TWELVE

Another great chapter, I have enjoyed your story so much. In the epilogue I would love to see Dudley introducing Parvati to his parents and telling them she is a witch. I would also like to see the wedding.

Reviewer: HumanHorcrux
Date: 09/19/12 18:14
Chapter: CHAPTER TWELVE

This is great. I can't wait for the epilogue- maybe a look into the future with Dudley's family and Harry's family? Keep up the good work! :D

Reviewer: glendora
Date: 09/19/12 4:20
Chapter: CHAPTER TWELVE

Sigh. I love happy endings. Now for the epilogue -- I'd like to request an encounter of the senior Dursleys with Parvati and Harry, mediated by Dudley. Perhaps at Dudley's wedding -- can you imagine them having to choose between dealing with magic and not seeing Diddykins?

Reviewer: Lady_Rayne
Date: 09/18/12 20:12
Chapter: CHAPTER TWELVE

Oh wow!!! What a chapter!

Reviewer: Lost_Robin
Date: 09/18/12 19:17
Chapter: CHAPTER TWELVE

I like what you've done with Dudley. Might I suggest for the epilogue flashing forward for their daughter's first trip on the Hogwarts Express? Dudley in Platform 9 3/4 could be hilarious.

Reviewer: baby54boomer
Date: 09/18/12 18:57
Chapter: CHAPTER TWELVE

Very nice. I can see a sequel if you have the inclination: something centered on Dudley and Parvati's life and her introduction to his parents. Perhaps some revelations, courtesy of Parvati, about the wizarding war and life at Hogwarts.

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 09/18/12 17:29
Chapter: CHAPTER TWELVE

I love mushy!! I love this! Hmmm I'd like to see old Vernon reacting to a wedding :-) and maybe Petunia giving the old man a one two!

Reviewer: HumanHorcrux
Date: 09/15/12 1:18
Chapter: CHAPTER TEN

I completely agree with the Hogshead thing, but why would Malfoy tell Dudley anything? Snidgets... :D

Reviewer: HumanHorcrux
Date: 09/15/12 0:55
Chapter: CHAPTER EIGHT

Uh oh, Dudley!!! Oh, and Dudley was stuck inside the cage in the movies. Book-canon, that didn't happen.

Reviewer: HumanHorcrux
Date: 09/15/12 0:40
Chapter: Chapter 7

I am loving every moment this. Very well written, and everything is falling into place!

Reviewer: HumanHorcrux
Date: 09/15/12 0:33
Chapter: CHAPTER SIX

OHHH A cliffie! So, is the idea that once a witch/wizard invites, or tells a Muggle about Diagon Alley, they can see it?

Reviewer: HumanHorcrux
Date: 09/15/12 0:14
Chapter: CHAPTER FOUR

Ohhlala! Yet another great chapter!

Reviewer: HumanHorcrux
Date: 09/15/12 0:03
Chapter: CHAPTER TWO

Exciting! I love how Dudley still retains some instance of his father's ideals "that lot", and such. I see his brain power has gone up much, either. :P

Reviewer: HumanHorcrux
Date: 09/14/12 23:54
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow, this is a great beginning. I love how you started and ended with Dudley's dreams. He's come out as a transformed person. :)

I might be wrong, but I thought that Muggles and Squibs couldn't see dementors? Anyway, I absolutely loved Lavender's sudden appearance, and her reaction to Ron's name. :P

Exactly how many years after the Battle is this? Keep up the good work! :D :D :D

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 09/12/12 17:51
Chapter: CHAPTER ELEVEN

Fantastic!!

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 09/12/12 17:30
Chapter: CHAPTER ELEVEN

A lot going on in this chapter and we leave with Dudley in a spot of bother.

Reviewer: ProfPosky
Date: 09/12/12 13:29
Chapter: CHAPTER ELEVEN

That punch, in it's own way, is as good as watching Hermione punch Malfoy...

Fast thinking for Dudley, but as you are developing the character, he seems to be improving as he moves out on his own, away from his parents, and that makes perfect sense in context. I'm really glad he was able to rescue himself, and I am assuming he doesn't die from the venom...

I really like this chapter in particular. Not only is there a lot going on that is not over-explained, but I can see the action, and while dramatic, it isn't melodramatic. Nice fine line you've walked there.

Reviewer: Ruchira_M
Date: 08/23/12 12:24
Chapter: Chapter 1

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