Reviewer: Chocolate butterbeer
Date: 03/22/13 10:17
Chapter: Chapter 1

Loooved it one of my all time favorites I read it the whole night and stayed up a little too long!
But one thing why did Dudley want Parvati to think he was obliviated? He didnt want to see her again....

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 01/20/13 20:14
Chapter: Epilogue

Yay! Happy Ending!
-Livie

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 01/20/13 0:31
Chapter: Chapter 1

Its really refreshing to have Dudley happy for once!
And I really like it!
He deserves it really, its easy to see that underneath Dudley is quite lonley.
I was really suprised when it was Pavarti though! I was expecting a new made up character, but I think this fits beautify!

Reviewer: Willz123456789123456789
Date: 01/14/13 5:23
Chapter: Epilogue

Hi, I'm new to this site just read this entire story in one night and thought it was great, keep up the good work

Reviewer: Lady_Rayne
Date: 01/07/13 20:41
Chapter: Epilogue

Beautiful ending to a great story!!

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 12/28/12 17:30
Chapter: Epilogue

Brilliant and worth the wait!!!

Reviewer: Dad
Date: 12/28/12 10:52
Chapter: Epilogue

Happy ending.

Reviewer: Ruchira_M
Date: 12/27/12 22:25
Chapter: Chapter 1

Lovely end. And I liked Stella.

Reviewer: Ruchira_M
Date: 09/25/12 14:31
Chapter: CHAPTER TWELVE

Is this the end? It's beautiful- although, really, I would have loved to see Vernon's face.

Reviewer: ILoveHarry 3_14
Date: 09/19/12 22:17
Chapter: CHAPTER TWELVE

Another great chapter, I have enjoyed your story so much. In the epilogue I would love to see Dudley introducing Parvati to his parents and telling them she is a witch. I would also like to see the wedding.

Reviewer: HumanHorcrux
Date: 09/19/12 18:14
Chapter: CHAPTER TWELVE

This is great. I can't wait for the epilogue- maybe a look into the future with Dudley's family and Harry's family? Keep up the good work! :D

Reviewer: glendora
Date: 09/19/12 4:20
Chapter: CHAPTER TWELVE

Sigh. I love happy endings. Now for the epilogue -- I'd like to request an encounter of the senior Dursleys with Parvati and Harry, mediated by Dudley. Perhaps at Dudley's wedding -- can you imagine them having to choose between dealing with magic and not seeing Diddykins?

Reviewer: Lady_Rayne
Date: 09/18/12 20:12
Chapter: CHAPTER TWELVE

Oh wow!!! What a chapter!

Reviewer: Lost_Robin
Date: 09/18/12 19:17
Chapter: CHAPTER TWELVE

I like what you've done with Dudley. Might I suggest for the epilogue flashing forward for their daughter's first trip on the Hogwarts Express? Dudley in Platform 9 3/4 could be hilarious.

Reviewer: baby54boomer
Date: 09/18/12 18:57
Chapter: CHAPTER TWELVE

Very nice. I can see a sequel if you have the inclination: something centered on Dudley and Parvati's life and her introduction to his parents. Perhaps some revelations, courtesy of Parvati, about the wizarding war and life at Hogwarts.

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 09/18/12 17:29
Chapter: CHAPTER TWELVE

I love mushy!! I love this! Hmmm I'd like to see old Vernon reacting to a wedding :-) and maybe Petunia giving the old man a one two!

Reviewer: HumanHorcrux
Date: 09/15/12 1:18
Chapter: CHAPTER TEN

I completely agree with the Hogshead thing, but why would Malfoy tell Dudley anything? Snidgets... :D

Reviewer: HumanHorcrux
Date: 09/15/12 0:55
Chapter: CHAPTER EIGHT

Uh oh, Dudley!!! Oh, and Dudley was stuck inside the cage in the movies. Book-canon, that didn't happen.

Reviewer: HumanHorcrux
Date: 09/15/12 0:40
Chapter: Chapter 7

I am loving every moment this. Very well written, and everything is falling into place!

Reviewer: HumanHorcrux
Date: 09/15/12 0:33
Chapter: CHAPTER SIX

OHHH A cliffie! So, is the idea that once a witch/wizard invites, or tells a Muggle about Diagon Alley, they can see it?

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