An amazingly intense first chapter, and I'm very much looking forward to the rest. Your character is fascinating, and as a mystery it works very well and definately hooked me!
Author's Response: Thanks. I hope that you enjoyer the resto f the story. -N-
Amazing take on a vigilante taking out the remaining Death Eaters. Especially impressed by Jugson's last moments when he is forced to realize that he is in the very position he put others in and that no one will mourn him. Rather grim how Toni merely serves Justice, but that's his character I guess.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. This was C_A_Campbell's chapter, not mine, she certainly got inside Toni's head. -N-
Wow, this is a really interesting concept, and your character fascinates me. This seems like it's going to be an intense story, looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Suddenly, I'm able to respond to these reviews. Thanks for your comments. -N-