Reviews For Eyes Wide Open
Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 02/10/12 4:12
Chapter: Chapter 13: Aftershocks

Yeah for updates! I'm a little surprised that you mentioned at the end that Draco kissed Hermione's lips but you wrote it so casually, like it wasn't a big deal. He just saved her life, it most definitely is a bog deal! I hope the Order finds them soon and I'll be interested to see everyone's reaction to Draco. I am loving this fic, keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks so much, sweetie! And thanks for your note about Draco kissing Hermione's lips; I didn't realize that it would come across that way. I tried to make their first kiss in the previous chapter really special; in this chapter, he kisses her quickly, because they have no time to spare- it's like 4 kisses on her face in quick succession, like a compulsion. I didn't mean to make it sound so casual, but I went back and read it and I can see how it could be interpreted as such. I'll see if I can go back and re-word it a bit because, you're right, it IS a big deal! Thank you for pointing that out, hunny! Keep your reviews coming- they are helpful and very appreciated! Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: Envy_I_May_Be
Date: 02/03/12 15:02
Chapter: Chapter 12: Betrayals

Gorgeous! I'm on edge for the next chapter. I simply love this story :)

Author's Response: Thanks, hunny- That means a lot! Hope I continue to do it justice for you. Next chapter's up! Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: E-Biff
Date: 01/25/12 20:34
Chapter: Chapter 12: Betrayals

Wow, read this fix in one sitting. Completely amazing, cannot wait for Chapter 13.

Author's Response: In one sitting? Wow! I'm so glad you found it that engaging! I really appreciate your review. Chapter 13 is in the queue, so it'll be up shortly. When it does, please let me know what you think of it. I hope you enjoy the rest of the fic as much as the part you've read so far. Thanks!!!! Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: ooCathrynoo
Date: 01/21/12 22:03
Chapter: Chapter 12: Betrayals

AMAZING chapter! So glad that he is (hopefully) getting her out of there.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I always look forward to your comments. Keep your fingers crossed for our hero and heroine! Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: Alice Mac
Date: 01/19/12 0:48
Chapter: Chapter 12: Betrayals

Wow Stef! That was incredible! You perfectly showed how Draco was receiving a rude awakening when he saw what his parents were really made of. The bit with him and Narcissa was particularly sad, considering how much he loves her, but it was good for him to really open his eyes, even in regards to her. Lucius is a nasty piece of work! I'm so glad Draco finally took the revenge that he Lucius so long had coming to him. The moment between Draco and Hermione was so tender and sweetly innocent - it was perfect. I can completely understand every reaction throughout the chapter - he must have been so completely broken by the disappointment in his family members. And yay for Snape coming through with a plan! He's my second favourite Slytherin after all! Well done again - you did an amazing job :)

Author's Response: Awwww, Alice! You sweetie!! Thank you so much- your review shows that I got exactly what I wanted to come across in this chapter. This chap is the foundation of the title "Eyes Wide Open". Oooooohhh, don't you just hate Lucius? I was so happy to have Draco beat the crap out of him. It means the world that you would say that you understood every reaction in the chapter. I remember when you weren't sure Draco could redeem himself to Hermione. What do you think now? ;) Can't wait to hear from you for the next chapter (your second-favorite Slytherin has a big part to play!). Luv ya lots, Stef :)

Reviewer: Flaxiie
Date: 01/18/12 13:32
Chapter: Chapter 12: Betrayals

omg!! so awesome! I was looking forward to this chapter, and I am ABSOLUTLEY not dissapointed. Nope, not at all. This is perfect. and so well written! any thoughts of being an author? sorry if my grammar is fucked up, but im from Sweden, and my school sucks at teaching English ._. but i love this, so much :D looking forward to next chapter, so keep it up, I trust you! ;D

Author's Response: You made me laugh out loud about your grammar!!!!!! ROFL! Your grammar is better than some of the idiots at my University, seriously. Your kind words just send me through the roof with happiness- this is the first story I've ever written, and so I've been nervous as to what people would think of it. You better review each chapter- I need the overwhelming encouragement you bring me! I'm so glad you love it so much- I do to! ;) Next chapter's being Beta'd right now, and then I'll post as soon as I can. See you soon! Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: guptadips
Date: 01/18/12 11:14
Chapter: Chapter 12: Betrayals

seriouslyy great chap. loved itt!

Author's Response: So happy you loved it! There's more to come- let me know what you think of the rest. Thanks so much! Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 01/18/12 3:26
Chapter: Chapter 12: Betrayals

Yeah for updates! It's a shame that Snape's plan didn't quite work...but I hope Draco and Hermione still escape. I think this is the most realistic portrayal of what would happen to Draco after dealing with this psychological damage his family has caused. Keep it up...loving this story to pieces!

Reviewer: Flaxiie
Date: 01/15/12 21:34
Chapter: Chapter 1: Always the Same

I LOVE IT !! Started to read this awesome story today, and I just couldn't stop! But when I took a break to eat lunch, I could barely wait until I was reading again! This is the best fan fiction I ever had read! :D I looking soo much forward for the next chapter, but still never want it to end. Keep it up, I love you! ;D (WHAT, ARENT YOU JK. ROWLING?! I bet you are ;) )

Author's Response: Oh, my- I am so incredibly humbled and grateful for your words. I've read fanfics (and other types of stories) that I couldn't put down (read Deathly Hallows in less than 48 hours), so your remarks about my story are about the highest praise there is. That, and your JK Rowling remark!!!!! I might as well have won the Pulitzer! That was soooo sweet of you. I could only dream of being as good as JKR! :D Please keep reading, and let me know what you think of the chapters to come. The next chapter is already in the queue, so hopefully it will be posted soon. Thank you, from the very bottom of my heart. xoxo Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: Envy_I_May_Be
Date: 01/08/12 2:20
Chapter: Chapter 11: The Last Straw

This story is insanely amazing. I forgive you for the long break in between posting because of how good this chapter was. Intense? Very much so. But I love it. I love everything about this story. You have an amazing talent; the emotions are raw and powerful, and the story itself is brilliant. It really could have happened in the books. But this story... amazing. And it has brought tears to my eyes more than once. I can't wait for the rest!

Author's Response: Wow. Wow. Wow. That's all I've said for the past minute over and over after reading your review. I cannot express my gratitude enough for your wonderful words. This story is the first one I've ever written, and it just came out of my soul and begged to go on paper. I love Draco, and there is so much to him if you really look at his life. That you feel it really could have happened in the books is a HUGE compliment!!! I'm touched that this story has brought tears to your eyes. Your revew just brought tears to mine. I welcome your words anytime for the remainder of the story. Thank you so very much!! Lots of luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: ooCathrynoo
Date: 01/03/12 2:10
Chapter: Chapter 1: Always the Same

Great update! Very intense! Love that we are seeing a new side of Draco.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you like the new side of Draco. I think he'd gotten so screwed up by his family, their beliefs, and their loyalties to Voldemort that he didn't know how to handle it. He's 16 and growing up, and for the first time he's discovering his own beliefs, his own convictions, and noticing how they are growing farther apart from those of his family. Hermione is challenging everything Draco ever believed in and he's having his eyes opened for the first time. I always thought that Draco was a product of his environment and that, given the right set of circumstances, he'd find the goodness within him and let it out. Thanks for your wonderful words, hunny! Can't wait to hear what you think of the chapters to come!! Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: DragonFlower90
Date: 01/02/12 13:07
Chapter: Chapter 11: The Last Straw

This is great! You're building up Draco perfectly, not too slow, but not rushed either. I;m looking forward to finishing this fanfic. Very nice :]

Author's Response: Thank you so so much! I'm glad that Draco's transformation is coming through the way I intended. It has to be real, to be believable. That's why I spend a lot of time in Draco's head- it's important to understand his psychological process as Hermione basically turns his whole world upside down. I'm glad you're going to see this through to the end! Please let me know your thoughts on the next chapter! Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 01/02/12 3:29
Chapter: Chapter 11: The Last Straw

Wow the scene with Draco, Bellatrix and Hermione was intense. I am so glad that Draco decided to step in...but now what are they going to do without a wand?? Can't wait to see how they survive this situation...and if Hermione is rescued, I hope her bond with Draco is not forgotten. Considering I am a huge Ron/Hermione shipper, that is saying a lot! More please : )

Author's Response: I really appreciate, no HUGELY appreciate your praise as a Ron/Hermione shipper- that's high praise indeed! There is so much more coming in the story, but let's just say that somethings get worse and somethings get better. It's gonna be a bumpy ride for our couple, and I'm so glad you're taking the journey with them. Let me know your thoughts anytime, hunny! Thank you so much! Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: sirius pink
Date: 01/02/12 0:00
Chapter: Chapter 11: The Last Straw

awwsss, i started to cry twards the end :(

Author's Response: Oh my gosh, really? That makes me so sad and happy at the same time! A writer always wants to evoke strong emotions from her readers; you've made my wish come true. Please keep reading and reviewing- what you said here is VERY appreciated! I'm sorry you had to cry, though. I want to give you a hug.

Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: IceyFyre
Date: 01/01/12 4:26
Chapter: Chapter 11: The Last Straw

This chapter was great! It was so full of action, I wanted to keep it going. The end of the chapter was so sweet but so sad, I loved every bit of everything that happened. Bellatrix was very well written in her crazy torture and totally POed feeling after Draco Stupified her. I wander though, did she lock them in together, or will they be able to escape. And how will Snape play into all of this? Very well written!

Author's Response: Thank you so so much for giving me such wonderful encouragement, hunny! It's always nice to hear what you think! : ) You wanted the chapter to keep going- that is so fabulous and made me do a happy dance around my computer! You ask many excellent questions as to the fate of our young couple...they will all be answered soon. That being said, there's still a lot of story to go!! And we most certainly have not seen the last of Snape! Again, thank you so much!! Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: Alice Mac
Date: 12/31/11 11:49
Chapter: Chapter 11: The Last Straw

Wow - that was an amazing and full chapter! I'm do glad that Draco finally stood up to Bellatrix! The description of the tortures she inflicted upon Hermione were so heart-breaking - in my eyes, Draco is most definitely redeeming himself for his earlier behaviour towards her. I only hope, now he has no wand, they manage to find a way out in time (perhaps with Snape's help - glad we're getting to see a bit of him by the way as one of my favourite Slytherins). Keep up the great work, Stef! This was a wonderfully powerful chapter.

Author's Response: Alice- thank you from the bottom of my heart; as I am a fan of your wonderful writing, your words are particularly special to me. This was an intense chapter to write, but I want to portray Draco breaking down systematically as he opens his eyes (hence the story title) to what his family truly is, and what he could become. Hermione is the catalyst of his transformation from bullying coward to selfless hero. His transformation comes at a great cost, though- which you will see in the next chapter(s). And Snape? Oh, we might just see more of him... ; ). Again, thank you SO much, sweetie!! Luv, Stef : )

Reviewer: guptadips
Date: 12/30/11 14:46
Chapter: Chapter 10: A Crack in the Wall

Hey
I am a great fan of yours... so please update soon...!!! :)

Author's Response: Oh my goodness, thank you!!! Wow, I have a fan!! *does happy dance around room* That's a huge compliment and it means the world to me. It's lovely people like you that give me the fuel for my passion of writing! The next chapter's in the queue, so hopefully you'll see it soon. Oh, and since you were so sweet, I'll let you in on something I haven't told anyone else- *whispers quietly in your ear* there is a sequal to this story in the process of being written! It's a lot more romance between Draco and Hermione, and also danger and excitement and other good stuff. Please review the next chapter and tell me what you think- I really appreciate it. Thanks again!! Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: sirius pink
Date: 12/29/11 2:18
Chapter: Chapter 10: A Crack in the Wall

I seem to have a liking for stories where Draco is involved. It makes things more dangerously exciting! A lot of torture. Poor Hermy, hard to read. But I liked it! Update soon Please.

Author's Response: I agree- Draco is dangerously sexy! In this fic, though, he's the scared 16-year old we know from the books. I think he's very vulnerable underneath that arrogant, snotty, bullying brat he shows to the world. I know, lots of torture- I don't know why my fic turned that corner, but the extremeness is necessary to the plot. I'm actually a very sunny, upbeat person! Torture ends in the next chapter, which is in the queue- hang in there!! Looking forward to your comments about the next one! Thanks so much! Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: Lulupie
Date: 12/08/11 13:09
Chapter: Chapter 10: A Crack in the Wall

I knew he wasn't purely evil!! Thanks for showing that ;) keep on writing, waiting for the next chapter with excitement! :)

Author's Response: Me too! He's so not evil- he just grew up in a family that was horrible and learned to be horrible from them. I believe in showing that side of him, and I'm so glad you like it! Next chappy's in the queue! Please let me know what you think of it!! Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: Alice Mac
Date: 11/26/11 17:01
Chapter: Chapter 10: A Crack in the Wall

Great chapter - I love the description of how torn Draco's feeling. The fact that he healed her was lovely but I'm interested to see what more he'll do to redeem himself in her eyes after everything he's done to her. You still manage to make Draco a sympathetic character, however - in spite of the terrible things he's done. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Hey Alice! Thanks, sweetie, for your comments as always! I really wanted to get inside Draco's head and see how he doesn't understand his feelings for Hermione, and also knows that he really doesn't want to be a Death Eater like daddy. Even in the books (and films) you see him starting to pull away from all that- not killing Dumbledore, not revealing Harry's identity at Malfoy Manor, refusing the call the Dark Lord with his mark after he was told to. If I have kept Draco a sympathetic character, then I consider this story a success. Thanks again, hunny- keep reading and reviewing!! Luv, Stef :)

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