Reviews For Eyes Wide Open
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/01/12 20:22
Chapter: Chapter 10: A Crack in the Wall

I really like the longer chapters. Keep up the excellent portrayal of both Hermione and Draco's emotions :-)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/01/12 20:15
Chapter: Chapter 9: The Ministry of Magic

I am very happy that I found such a interesting story to read :-) Thanks again

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/01/12 20:11
Chapter: Chapter 8: Malfoy Manor

Fantastic bit of excitement in this chapter. :-)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/01/12 20:06
Chapter: Chapter 7: The Snatchers

Loved it!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/01/12 20:04
Chapter: Chapter 6: Two Different Lives

Oh no! Great cliffie though, Cannot wait to see what happens!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/01/12 20:02
Chapter: Chapter 5: Friends, Foes, and Festivities

Ugh, Ron is such a jerk. Fabulous chapter though :-)

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/01/12 19:57
Chapter: Chapter 4: The First Training

Thanks for sharing your story with us! So far very entertaining.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/01/12 19:54
Chapter: Chapter 3: Family Matters

Wonderful chapter!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/01/12 19:51
Chapter: Chapter 2: Plans for the Night

Interesting chapter. I look forward to seeing more of Draco and his interactions with his "friends" LOL

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/01/12 19:47
Chapter: Chapter 1: Always the Same

So I just discovered this story and already cannot wait to read more. I do not usually ship Draco/Hermione but I have slowly started reading a few...

Reviewer: lilit829
Date: 04/25/12 13:08
Chapter: Chapter 16: Taking Sides

This chapter was really great! I loved the interactions between Draco and the adults. I am really excited to see when Hermione is recuperated what's going to happen. Please don't take very long in updating!! =)

Author's Response: GAH! I certainly didn't give you what you asked for, as far as waiting too long for the next chapter! But I have been trying to get the queue to accept Chapter 17 for nearly 2 months! I've rewritten, and rewritten, and I hope to heck that it's going to go through this time. I have no earthly idea why it keeps getting kicked out. Keep your fingers crossed!! Thank you so much for your lovely words- I always take my reviews to heart! Please let me know what you think of Chapter 17 when it posts! Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: DragonFlower90
Date: 04/25/12 9:04
Chapter: Chapter 16: Taking Sides

I hate everytime a chpter ends. I haven't read such a well written story in a long time. You give me hope for the world of fanfiction. Keep up the good work :)

Author's Response: Awww, that is so sweet!! It means so much that you would take the time to say such wonderful things, and I am humbled and elated by what you've said. Thank you, thank you, thank you!!! Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: Envy_I_May_Be
Date: 04/23/12 12:00
Chapter: Chapter 16: Taking Sides

Beautiful! This chapter was just beautiful. Love it!

Author's Response: Sorry it's taken me so long to respond! I really appreciate your comments, as always. You always give me encouragement!! I'm so glad you loved this chapter. I've been trying for two months to get the queue to accept Chapter 17- I don't know what's going on. Hopefully it will be up soon! Looking forward to your thoughts on it when it posts! Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 04/21/12 16:31
Chapter: Chapter 16: Taking Sides

I was so giddy to see an update YEAH! But now I'm sad to hear that there are only a few chapters left : ( I enjoyed your quote about the Dark Lord baking biscuits LOL classic. My favorite part was when Hermione screamed for Draco and Hermione's parents thanked Draco. Can't wait for the next chapter...I hope Hermione and Draco get time alone to talk out what has happened. Great job!

Author's Response: Eee! I'm glad you loved it, and that you told me your favorite parts! Draco and Hermione don't get a lot of time to sort out their feelings (though they will in Book II), because now Draco has to deal with his peers- especially Harry and Ron. You can only imagine how well that's going to go! Please let me know what you think of the next chapter, which should finally be up SOON!! Thanks, hunny! Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: ooCathrynoo
Date: 04/21/12 0:26
Chapter: Chapter 16: Taking Sides

Loved this chapter! Glad that others were able to see that Draco isn't the cookie-cutter type marked by dark wizarding families.

Author's Response: Hey girl! Nice to hear from you, as always! I really worked to make this chapter believable, because each character views Draco in a slightly different light. It would have been too fake to have everyone just forgive him immediately and envelop him in hugs. Many of them need time to adjust to this new Draco. I'm glad that you liked how I handled it. I look forward to hearing what you think of the next chapter. Thanks, hunny! Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: baby54boomer
Date: 04/20/12 14:22
Chapter: Chapter 16: Taking Sides

Applause, applause!!!! This was very much worth waiting for...full of tension, revelation, and intrigue. The heightened emotions are captured well and expressed crisply. The myriad of responses are spot-on per character. I especially appreciate Draco's brokenness, humility, and repentant confession, aided by Dumbledore. You correctly place our Headmaster in the position of counselor/guide and you do not disappoint in the interchange between him and Draco. Draco's self-doubt is so very real...not foreign at all to the reader who is truthful with himself.
Thank you for focusing on the Order's concerns and interactions with Draco. You have nicely set up the next big hurdle (his peers) with Ron's outrage, hurt, and anger. I kept waiting for him to show up from his run...but the fact that he is away from Grimmauld Place and no one has noticed is quite intriquing.
Great chapter...I await the next one with great anticipation!

Author's Response: I wait on pins and needles for your review after each chapter! I am so humbled and grateful for your words of encouragement. This was one of my favorite chapters to write- I love getting into the characters' heads!

As an amateur writer, I take your critiques to heart every time (though now I'm putting pressure on myself for the coming chapters to live up to the former ones!!!! ). The next chapter should be up within the week, and we will indeed see a showdown between Ron and Draco. Can't wait to hear what you think! Thank you for everything!! Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: HP13ljstrec
Date: 04/20/12 2:46
Chapter: Chapter 16: Taking Sides

Fantastic once again! So glad I decided to log on before bed :)

Author's Response: So glad you liked it! The next chapter should be up within the week. Thanks so much!!! Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: RozeDelImperator
Date: 04/14/12 9:05
Chapter: Chapter 15:Action and Reaction

I have to say, this is by far the best fanfic I have ever read. I beg you WRITE MORE SOON!!!! I want to find out what happens soooo badly! Your story caught my eye, and I'm so happy I decided to read it; I went through it all in one sitting it was so amazing. You have a very unique way of portraying the characters, and yet they are still their recognizable selves from J.K.'s original series. I really can't wait for your next update, and want you to know that you now have a very avid fan in me. :) your story is incredible, and I can't wait to read more. Thank you so much for getting your ideas out there, you're so talented and I feel very honored to be able to read your works. You're amazing!!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!

Author's Response: Ok, I'm ready to tear up; actually, my eyes are watering. Your, just wow. *blushes profusely*. You've nearly rendered me speechless, and that is a very difficult thing to accomplish!! Thank you, thank you from the bottom of my heart for your words of praise and encouragement. I will never forget them. This story had been swirling around in my brain for some time, because I adore Draco and like digging around in his head. I was so nervous to submit this story- this is the first story I have ever written. Ever. I like to write, but I'd never attempted anything like this before. So imagine little old me with my first fic getting a review like yours. My heart is about to burst *holds chest, trying to keep heart intact*. The next chapter is in the queue- please comment again because your words are powerfully uplifting and humbling all at the same time. You have a fan in me!! :D Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: tiffile
Date: 03/31/12 20:47
Chapter: Chapter 15:Action and Reaction

First, thank you. Great story love the concept and I am very glad you decided to put it paper. There is sooo much; want to know what happen to Bella, Cissa, Lucius, Snape but not as much as watching what’s happening at Grimmauld. Then there the questions of will they or won’t be caught will the scars really go away (Harry’s lightning bolt didn’t) what’s going to next?! GIVE US MORE PLEASE!

Author's Response: First, you're welcome! :D I'm so grateful that you like my story this much!!! Let me thank you right back, for reading it in the first place and then being wonderful enough to leave me such a lovely comment. Unknowingly, you have just played a critical role in my story. I had not written anything more about those still at Malfoy Manor (I was saving it for Book II, which is currently in the works), but after reading your comment I believe that I do need to put some closure on Bella/Narcissa/Lucius/Snape. I'm going back into my story and writing a new section. All thanks to YOU!! *does victory dance for you*. Always believe writers when we say we really DO take your comments to heart. Thank you, and I'll be sure to put a note in my Chapter Notes about you in the respective chapter! Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: bjrit92
Date: 03/31/12 7:48
Chapter: Chapter 15:Action and Reaction

I absolutely love your writing. It's so eloquent, and it makes me believe your words. I look forward to you updating all the time, and check frequently to see if you have or not. Keep writing! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so very much for your kind words; they mean so much and are a huge encouragement for me. I appreciate that you took the time to tell me! I have another chapter in the queue right now. I'm so grateful that you commented! *hugs you* Luv, Stef :)

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