Reviews For Eyes Wide Open
Reviewer: Monana
Date: 09/24/11 7:18
Chapter: Chapter 7: The Snatchers

More, more, more, more, more, more, more, more!!
Great writing and exciting plot, I really wanna know what happens next :)

Author's Response: YAY!! I'm so glad you like it. And thank you for the lovely compliments, too- they mean a lot!! The whole story's already written; I'll get the next chapter up for validation ASAP. Keep reading and reviewing! Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: Alice Mac
Date: 09/24/11 2:34
Chapter: Chapter 7: The Snatchers

Yay for Hermione being at Malfoy Manor! Probably not great for her, but I''m looking forward to some Hermione/Draco interaction. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review, and thanks for hanging in there with me for some Draco/Hermione stuff. It really builds slowly because I don't want it to be like he sees her and now they're in love with each other and blah blah blah. It WILL happen, I promise! Keep reading and reviewing! Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: DramioneFelton
Date: 09/18/11 13:23
Chapter: Chapter 6: Two Different Lives

i love this so far :D waiting for the next chapter!

Author's Response: THANKS!!! My next chapter got kicked out of the queue for some reason; I just resubmitted it so hopefully it will be up soon. Thank you so much for your review- it makes my day!! Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: ravenfaire
Date: 08/31/11 4:36
Chapter: Chapter 6: Two Different Lives

When are you coming up with a new chapter? It's a riveting tale....nicely written, good flow of story. Im on pins andneedles waiting! ;)

Author's Response: Eeep! Thank you soo much!! I'm so very glad you like it. The whole story's actually been written- finished it last week- but I have to get each chapter Beta'd and validated. I have chapter seven in the queue!! Thank you for the feedback on the actual writing as well- it's such an encouragement. Keep watching for Chapter 7, and let me know what you think of it!! Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: queenofserpents
Date: 08/29/11 21:41
Chapter: Chapter 4: The First Training

I loved this chapter, it shows nonmatyer how we try to bury the want for it we are constantly seeking our parents praise and approval. One quick not though, Lucius was not in school when Snape developed sectumsempra. He was a prefect when Snape was a first year so we would have been graduated.

Author's Response: Thank you! That's exactly what I wanted to portray between Draco and his father. I'm glad that it came across! Oh, and thanks for the note on Lucius and Snape- after doing a little more research, I discovered my error. I still assume that, at some point, Snape's curse would have become a Death Eater weapon used by all. I appreciate you pointing it out! Please continue reading and reviewing! Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: WolfishMoon
Date: 08/28/11 9:39
Chapter: Chapter 6: Two Different Lives

EPIC!!!! Great detail, interesting plot. Im rather lacking in creativity today sooo, thats all I can really say...

Author's Response: THANK YOU!! I've never been epic before! *runs around doing a happy dance*. I'm so glad you like the story- it means a lot to hear your words of encouragement. Feel free to make me feel like a queen after every chapter! ; ) The plot's about to get even more interesting... Luv, Stef : )

Reviewer: Dreaming-of-Draco
Date: 08/24/11 6:22
Chapter: Chapter 6: Two Different Lives

I loved loved loved it! nice to see Hermione relaxed and enjoying herself for a change...not that it's for long by the sounds of it!

Author's Response: Thank you thank you thank you- I'm grinning from ear to ear right now!! Yep, here it comes...poor Hermione! I'll get the next chapter up fast! Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: dungbombs
Date: 08/23/11 19:05
Chapter: Chapter 6: Two Different Lives

Ahhhh! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I'm trying to get it up fast! It's gonna be a bumpy ride from here! : ) Thanks as always for reviewing; I do a little happy dance when you do! Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: Dreaming-of-Draco
Date: 08/16/11 6:45
Chapter: Chapter 5: Friends, Foes, and Festivities

LOVED IT! Draco is such a player! and after all these years Hermione still is affected by Draco's taunts! I can't wait to see how the story progresses! You truly a fantastic writer!

Author's Response: Hee-hee, I like Draco as a bit of a player,, ; ) Your encouragement means the world, hunny! THANK YOU SO MUCH!!

Reviewer: iwishicouldwrite
Date: 08/16/11 4:59
Chapter: Chapter 5: Friends, Foes, and Festivities

Great chapter again! Your depictions of the weasley and malfoy Christmas were perfectly contrasting, and the grangers were so sweet :) I also like happy Harry

Author's Response: Thanks sweetie! This was absolutely one of my favorite chapters to write. : ) Next chapter coming soon!

Reviewer: Dreaming-of-Draco
Date: 08/13/11 8:41
Chapter: Chapter 1: Always the Same

I am eagerly anticipating your next chapters!! you are a very talented writer I am hooked constantly checking for an update!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Hearing that is a writer's dream! I have four chapters up now, with a fifth awaiting validation. I can't wait for you to read the next ones- please review them for me as well. Again, thanks from the bottom of my heart. Oh, and I love your username. :)

Reviewer: iwishicouldwrite
Date: 08/09/11 14:04
Chapter: Chapter 4: The First Training

For some reason my review when I originally read this story didn't work...I loved this chapter, his emotions perfectly mirror a child in his position. The line "father-shaped hole in his heart" was heartbreaking! You have his motivations set up for a very interesting story...I love reading your descriptions of the malfoy family dynamic, can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Eeeep! I'm so glad to hear from you- I was actually thinking about you- you are always so positive with your feedback, sweetie! So glad you loved this chappie- it's nearly the end of setting up Draco's characters and motivations. Hermione enters next, so in a few chapters we're going to take off! As always, thanks hunny- keep reading and reviewing! Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: StephanieShirley
Date: 08/05/11 12:03
Chapter: Chapter 4: The First Training

You left me wanting more! You're a brilliant writer, the sympathy and pity I'm feeling for Draco is incredible! Poor boy:( I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you so very much!! It's heaven to hear the things you say, especially because of how hard I've worked to tell Draco's story the way I see him. I am so glad you like my story this much. :) The next chapter's just waiting to be validated- please read and give more awesome feedback! Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: radioblahblah
Date: 07/27/11 20:37
Chapter: Chapter 1: Always the Same

Oh my god. This brought up some really bad memories for me, I couldn't finish it after he did the thing with Draco's hand and the glass and the oh my god..

Author's Response: Oh, I'm so sorry!!!!! I grew up abused myself and I think a bit of that was cathartic for me, but I know what it's like to get hit in the face with a bad memory when you never saw it coming. If you think you can, the rest of the story is NOTHING like the first chapter- I only use it to set up the relationship between Draco and his father, which is pivotal to the rest of the story. I never meant this to cause anyone unnecessary pain, I swear! Again, I am so sorry! :(

Reviewer: Weaselredhair
Date: 07/08/11 1:34
Chapter: Chapter 1: Always the Same

Draco was a bastard cos he was spolit he was never punished for lying. Otherwise he would of been scared of his father and he wouldn't bully his father into smugling a broom in his first year.

Author's Response: Ooooh, I can see you're not a Draco fan! Thank you for reviewing- it's good to get feedback from every point of view. Yeah, he was a little bastard, no doubt. However, he only told Harry he was going to bully his father, and bullies like to put on a tough facade to others. I'm a Marriage & Family counselor and I've read and seen for myself that most bullies are either bullied themselves at home, or are indulged to the point of feeling entitled to everything. My fic is examining the what-if-scenario that his father was indeed a bully while his mother told him he could do no wrong? That'll screw a kid up! To me, Draco is a sympathetic character,but I appreciate your opinion as well. Thanks! Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: JaspersLittlePixie
Date: 07/06/11 8:41
Chapter: Chapter 3: Family Matters

Love it, can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks, hunny! I'm so glad you love it! *does a little happy dance* Chapter 4 is in Beta-land, so as soon as it's validated I'll have it up. Keep reading and reviewing!!! Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: iwishicouldwrite
Date: 07/02/11 6:20
Chapter: Chapter 3: Family Matters

wow you're doing an amazing job with this! Bellatrix especially in the chapter was described perfectly. I look forward to reading more!

Author's Response: Thank you thank you, my friend!! :D Glad you liked my work on Bella. I liked putting in the Dementor reference because I think she would still see them and be completely freaked about the idea of them. Almost makes her a teeeeny bit sympathetic, but not really. Just wait, she'll be NOT sympathetic at all as the story unfolds! Thanks a lot- looking forward to your next review. You keep me going!! Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: miya97
Date: 06/29/11 18:12
Chapter: Chapter 3: Family Matters

Wow this is really good,very well written and the plot seems interesting. Im eager to find out what happens, please carry on writing, cant wait for the next chapter :-)

Author's Response: Thank you- I appreciate that SO much!!! :D So glad you like it; the next chapter is still Draco-centric but Hermione enters the picture in the following one. Keep reading, and write a review anytime- it's the best feeling to receive one. Thanks again!!! Luv, Stef :)

Reviewer: MaidenMist
Date: 06/28/11 11:54
Chapter: Chapter 2: Plans for the Night

I really like it, please continue with it!:D

Reviewer: slytherinsocks
Date: 06/24/11 11:11
Chapter: Chapter 2: Plans for the Night

Make another please oh please

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