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Reviewer: Elpeciss
Date: 03/05/15 1:16
Chapter: Chapter 12: Betrayals

Yaayyy *cheering*

Reviewer: Elpeciss
Date: 03/05/15 0:48
Chapter: Chapter 11: The Last Straw

I actually have some constructive criticism for you. The paragraph where Bellatrix is describing to Hermione the progress of how the Cruciatus curse causes a person to lose their mind....it seemed too scientific for her. Too lengthy and detailed. I don't see her like that. That's just my interpretation of her though.

Reviewer: Elpeciss
Date: 03/05/15 0:09
Chapter: Chapter 10: A Crack in the Wall

I love the direction of the plot! Man, I particularly enjoy the complexity of emotions going on inside of Draco.

Reviewer: Elpeciss
Date: 03/04/15 23:45
Chapter: Chapter 9: The Ministry of Magic

It's all so suspenseful! I'm loving this story!

Reviewer: Elpeciss
Date: 03/04/15 23:29
Chapter: Chapter 8: Malfoy Manor

Whoa! So intense!

Reviewer: Elpeciss
Date: 03/04/15 22:43
Chapter: Chapter 5: Friends, Foes, and Festivities

I enjoyed how you briefly described little excerpts of each of the character's holiday. :)

Reviewer: Elpeciss
Date: 03/04/15 22:43
Chapter: Chapter 5: Friends, Foes, and Festivities

I enjoyed how you briefly described little excerpts of each of the character's holiday. :)

Reviewer: Elpeciss
Date: 03/04/15 22:20
Chapter: Chapter 4: The First Training

Such great writing! I love it so far.

Reviewer: Elpeciss
Date: 03/04/15 22:06
Chapter: Chapter 3: Family Matters

I love how true-to-character this is! For everyone.

Reviewer: Elpeciss
Date: 03/04/15 21:57
Chapter: Chapter 2: Plans for the Night

Oo la la! Is all I have to say. :)

Reviewer: Elpeciss
Date: 03/04/15 21:57
Chapter: Chapter 2: Plans for the Night

Oo la la! Is all I have to say. :)

Reviewer: Elpeciss
Date: 03/04/15 21:56
Chapter: Chapter 2: Plans for the Night

Oo la la! Is all I have to say. :)

Reviewer: Elpeciss
Date: 03/04/15 21:42
Chapter: Chapter 1: Always the Same

Amazing chapter! My question though, why did Draco have to throw the pieces away? Why didn't Lucius just use magic to repair the vase?

Reviewer: beaflower114
Date: 12/08/13 10:51
Chapter: Chapter 18: Endings and Beginnings

pleaseee put the squeal up soon! I've really loved this story and would love to her what happens next

Reviewer: beaflower114
Date: 12/08/13 10:50
Chapter: Chapter 18: Endings and Beginnings

pleaseee put the squeal up soon! I've really loved this story and would love to her what happens next

Reviewer: Halona Smiles
Date: 11/29/13 21:05
Chapter: Chapter 10: A Crack in the Wall

This is the best chapter yet. It's exciting to see Draco's compassion and the way his mind struggles between right and wrong. Great job!

Reviewer: Halona Smiles
Date: 11/29/13 21:05
Chapter: Chapter 10: A Crack in the Wall

This is the best chapter yet. It's exciting to see Draco's compassion and the way his mind struggles between right and wrong. Great job!

Reviewer: Halona Smiles
Date: 11/29/13 21:05
Chapter: Chapter 10: A Crack in the Wall

This is the best chapter yet. It's exciting to see Draco's compassion and the way his mind struggles between right and wrong. Great job!

Reviewer: Halona Smiles
Date: 11/29/13 21:05
Chapter: Chapter 10: A Crack in the Wall

This is the best chapter yet. It's exciting to see Draco's compassion and the way his mind struggles between right and wrong. Great job!

Reviewer: Halona Smiles
Date: 11/29/13 21:05
Chapter: Chapter 10: A Crack in the Wall

This is the best chapter yet. It's exciting to see Draco's compassion and the way his mind struggles between right and wrong. Great job!

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