Reviews For Players Rites
Reviewer: bk64
Date: 05/25/11 15:54
Chapter: The Changing Room

hahaha!!!! that was great! especially because I play hockey and I become very superstitious leading up to finals time, right down to refusing to associate myself with the colours of the other team (if you continue with this feel free to use it!) and i have a prematch routine too but not as bad as that!! loved it, loved harry too!

Author's Response: Thanks All sports people seem to be superstitions. Many professional football players seem to be obsessed by ritual and others simply turn to complete nonsense (like a rubber band with hologram embedded in it). Thanks for the idea, refusing to wear the colours of the other team… -N-

Reviewer: edyeb
Date: 05/25/11 15:43
Chapter: The Changing Room

Another long awaited title, and a goody at that!!!

I was thinking that the title was referring to --not hazing exactly--but ways to welcome new members to the team.

I love that Ginny thought she was above pre game rituals, but kissing Harry at this point in your storyline is second nature.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. This little bit of fluff was a lot of fun to write (and I probably did far too much research into pre-match rituals) I’m certain that Ginny suffered a little when she first joined the Harpies, but no one messes with Ginny for long. -N-

Reviewer: Luah
Date: 05/25/11 15:31
Chapter: The Changing Room

I laughed so much during this , it was very easy for me to be able to see how Ginny was feeling during this somewhat akward and bizarre scene! Your titel is Brill - its really clever! Fab as ever!! :)

Author's Response: Thanks. Even Ginny gets nervous and her first professional game would qualify. Sometimes titles come easily to me, I had to work on this one, glad you liked it. -N-

Reviewer: iwishicouldwrite
Date: 05/25/11 15:24
Chapter: The Changing Room

yay 1st review! this story was adorable!! I loved the personalities of the harpies team members (Gillian's comments were hilarious)! As usual the harry/ginny interaction made me sigh, you write their relationship so perfectly. I love the fact that Ginny's pre-game ritual is kissing Harry, so cute! As usual, your stories make me smile, so please keep writing more :D

Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.

This story is a nod back to both Grave Days and Aurors and Schoolgirls, where Ginny’s ritual begins. There will be more H/G stuff, but first I have 2˝ mysteries to complete for the Mysterious May challenge (the half is “Unspeakable” which will not be a bundle of laughs).

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