Chilling. Never thought about that constant reminder everytime Molly looked at George, and that was silly of me - an ache and relief whenever a loved one looked at him or thought of him.
Glad they were able to work it out.

Author's Response: Thank you!

Julie, this was just a lovely story.

The opening/summary was gripping, interesting and thoughtful, and just so perfect for these two characters. I think George and Angelina's relationship is interesting, because she did go out with Fred at one point... though in canon it's never quite clear how serious that was. Anyway. The way you interpreted it was beautiful and at the same time heart-breaking.

The style of writing was really new and different. You developed both their voices so distinctly and I could always tell which one was 'speaking'.

This was beautifully written and a great, though heart-breaking, story.

~Katrina

Author's Response: Katrina, I'm glad you enjoyed this story. I thought that, regardless of how "serious" Angelina's romantic attachment to Fred was, it would still be sad to be married to his twin. Thank you for the compliment on style. Many thanks for reviewing. Julie