The first Five chapters of this story is excellent really i couldn't stop reading it!!!! can wait for more
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Update in queue! :)
Darker than what I usually like, but it's so good I just have to overlook my preferences and take the plunge-and I'm glad I did try this is story. It's fantastic! I love the way you've developed the character of Al-different than he's usually portrayed, but still similar to the stereotype. Also... What is up with Ian? Great plot twists.! :-) :-)
Author's Response: I'm glad you like my story! And Al-- yes, I read through his thread on the character clinic in the Beta Boards and realised how a lot of people tend to place him in Slytherin (and Scorpius in houses other than Slytherin) and I decided to stick with the Al-being-in-Gryffindor plan. As for Ian... awh, the poor fellow! :( Thanks for your review!
Di, wow! This fic's great! I love your characterisations, its really awesome. And Ian and Abby remind me of me and you know who :p. lol. Keep it up, hon, and can't wait to read more!! :D :D :D --Nadia
Author's Response: Thanks, sis! I promise more of the story very, very soon! I'm glad you liked it so much, hon! *huggles*
Abby's dead? Was it Scorpius? No, that's too obvious. Maybe it's Bri. Poor girl got teased a lot by Abby. :( But what I want to know is this backstory between Rose and Scorpius. What did Abby do to break them up? Hmm. Curious, curious.
Author's Response: It maybe very obviously Scorpius because he might actually be the killer. :D rOSE AND Scorpius will come later and maybe you may not feel sorry for Abby or Bri in the next few chapters. :) Thanks for the review!
Ooh, Abby sounds pregnant. I'm very curious where this mystery will go and why Brianna is screaming. Did Abby pass out?
I have a few nitpicks, but they're only with word choice:
Finally, she sat up on her bed and buried her face in her eyes for a while...
I think you mean buried her face in her hands for a while... ;)
Chances that she was pregnant were really dim.
Do you mean slim here instead of dim?
Onto the next chapter! :)
Author's Response: Maybe she is pregnant... maybe she isn't ;). Hehe, and you'll know why Brianna screamed. :D I have taken your nitpicks to heed and I'm correcting them right now----> Thank you for your review!
I need chapter 3!!!:) This is good so far. I'm excited to see what happens next. Small correction: I believe "Pomphrey" is supposed to be "Pomfrey."
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! And Pomfrey... LOL. I actually knew something was wrong, but wasn't able to put a finger to it. :p Thanks! I'll correct it. Chapter 3 is in progress... :)
That's so sad! I was really hoping Abby wasn't the student who dies that's mentioned in the summary. Can't wait to see how Ian reacts to her death or how the whole school reacts actually. Update soon! :)
Author's Response: Abby's death... hmmm... I was sad to kill her off too but I had actually created her for killing her off. O.o Does that sound weird? And Ian? You'll be shocked. I finished writing most of the third chapter... should be up soon. *crosses fingers*.
I love this so far!!! Can't wait to read more. Very well written, and easy to follow. I love the story line, I always love Rose/Scorpious, and I can't wait to see what twists and turns will happen in the next chapters! Keep writing!!!
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! And I do promise you a good number of twists and turns throughout the story. :) I'm glad that you are enjoying the story. :D
And the plot thickens! im interested to see where this goes. keep going! :)
Author's Response: Thank you for your review! :)
Loved it so far! I think this is going to be an awesome fic. I love all the characters that we've gotten to meet too and I totally think Abby's preggers. Can't wait for the next chapter ;)
Author's Response: So you think Abby's pregnant? :D Well, we'll see, won't we? ;) Thank you for your review! It totally made my day. :)
Wow I love this fanfiction it's one of the best i've read so far. I am really enjoying the plot so far and the story description makes it look like the rest of the chapters will be good too. I also really like your style of writing and the title is clever as well. Hope you update this soon!
Author's Response: Well, for starters, I'll be cheating if I accept praise for the title. It was actually suggested to me by isadora duncan in the MNFF Beta boards. I was at a loss for titles. :( But thank you, anyway. I'm flattered that you like the writing and the characters. :) *dies*. Anyway... Update coming soon!
This sounds really good so far! I like how you started the chapter with the POV of another character other than Rose,as this made it different to other stories.I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you for being the first reviewer for this story! *squees and throws confetti* I'm glad you liked the PoV change. Update coming soon! Take care! :)