Reviewer: Phoenix Song114
Date: 06/24/12 7:06
Chapter: In The End

Whoa.....sad and a little freaky but cool.

Author's Response: Ooh, thank you so very much! Glad you seem to have enjoyed it!!!

Reviewer: jeel
Date: 12/27/11 16:06
Chapter: In The End

i simply loved this! i mean, WOW! it was a very good fanfic. our golden trio, rose, albus and scorpius. awesome. and the new characters were very well evolved. just perfect!

Author's Response: Whoops! Sorry for such a late response! I'm so glad you liked the fic! And I'm really glad you liked my OCs too! *squee* Thank you for the review! :)

Reviewer: Gabriella Hunter
Date: 10/10/11 2:29
Chapter: In The End

Very good ending! Good story and all that, I've read all of it and enjoyed it very much.

Author's Response: Thank you so very much! I'm glad you liked the story in all. :) The sequel is in the making and two chapter plus the Prologue are up. You can check it out on my page! The name is 'Transcendent Affection'. :)

Reviewer: Gabriella Hunter
Date: 10/10/11 2:09
Chapter: The Hand That Rocks The Cradle

I'm lowering my suspicion to Scorpius and Brianna now. I like the interactions with the mothers and the kids, i love my mom very much as well so it was a very sweet thing to read.

Author's Response: :D :D :D I think Mum's can do it all! I'm glad you liked that pasrt! As for Scorpius and Brianna... ;)

Reviewer: Gabriella Hunter
Date: 10/10/11 1:56
Chapter: The Straw that Broke the Camel's Back

So...did Scorpius do it? God, I'm confused! I like it though, I must keep reading!

Author's Response: Hmm... Maybe? You never know! :D

Reviewer: Gabriella Hunter
Date: 10/10/11 1:47
Chapter: Out Comes the Dirt: Part 2

Everyone seems to have hated Abby in some weird way, its kind of hard to tell who did it. Which i like, i can't see through this at all, its a major relief.

Author's Response: Haha, that was what I was going for. Thanks. :D

Reviewer: Gabriella Hunter
Date: 10/10/11 1:36
Chapter: Out Comes the Dirt: Part 1

Brianna shouldn't have any respect for hreself either! Girls are so weird, adn this is coming from a girl, but anyways, nothing negative to report.

Author's Response: Haha, I agree with you! We girls are pretty weird. :p

Reviewer: Gabriella Hunter
Date: 10/10/11 1:26
Chapter: A Day in the Past

Good chapter. Some spelling errors and some words are repeated twice but that's just about it. Otherwise, its fine.

Author's Response: Thank you so very much for the review!

Reviewer: Gabriella Hunter
Date: 10/10/11 1:11
Chapter: Disturbing Secrets

Oooh, its getting really interesting! I love murder mystery stories and no matter what I've thought, Al always gave me the impression as being really insecure. I wonder why that is? There were one or two very minor grammar things but I barely caught them.

Author's Response: Thank you so very much! Yes, Al strikes me as an insecure kid too. I think it might have something to do with being a part of a famous family. :p And I'd love to know my mistakes and correct 'em! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Gabriella Hunter
Date: 10/10/11 0:59
Chapter: A Tragic Beginning

Oh, no! What a shock, but the foreshadowing was really good, you weren't able to tell who was going to get sick or die. Good pacing and all that as well.

Author's Response: :D I'm glad to surprise you.:p About the pacing, I didn't have much choice. I had a deadline for the story, so I moved the plot as quickly as I could. ;)

Reviewer: Gabriella Hunter
Date: 10/10/11 0:46
Chapter: Looming Danger

Oooh, I've done a thousand reviews on here so far but have yet to put my own fic up here yet, i keep forgetting. Anyway, nice flow, no mistakes and good story so far! You will see more of me!

Author's Response: Thank you so very much! All those reviews got me jumping up and down! :D

Reviewer: locanena
Date: 08/14/11 18:47
Chapter: In The End

Wow! OMG awesome.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)

Reviewer: Prongs_Luver
Date: 07/29/11 5:35
Chapter: In The End

Wow! Amazing story! I love happily ever afters so I'm glad that (almost) everyone got one! You are a very talented author!

Author's Response: Ahh, yes, poor Ian! And Abby too. Abby was silly, though. :p Thank you so much for all of your wonderful reviews!

Reviewer: macheel
Date: 07/28/11 10:17
Chapter: In The End

I really liked this story! I think your next should be based on BWHR.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! And yes, I was thinking of basing it on BWHR too. Let me just get a few more opinions...

Reviewer: Prongs_Luver
Date: 07/26/11 6:03
Chapter: The Hand That Rocks The Cradle

Oooooh! I love mysteries! You really have a gift, ya know. Amazing story!

Author's Response: Thank you! OMG... Your reviews have made my day... :)

Reviewer: Prongs_Luver
Date: 07/25/11 5:12
Chapter: Out Comes the Dirt: Part 1

You are an amazing author! Thumbs up!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's so cool that you've reviewed almost all the chapters. :)

Reviewer: Prongs_Luver
Date: 07/25/11 4:59
Chapter: A Day in the Past

I love mysteries and it is so great to see one in a Harry Potter story. You are a really awesome author!

Author's Response: I love mysteries too! Most of the stuff I write is mystery. I just love all the mind-boggling plot and details and research! It's awesome! Thank you for your compliment and your review!!! :p

Reviewer: Prongs_Luver
Date: 07/25/11 4:46
Chapter: Disturbing Secrets

Wow. You are genius to come up with these things. This story it really captivating.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I do love that you're enjoying this! :)

Reviewer: Prongs_Luver
Date: 07/25/11 4:28
Chapter: A Tragic Beginning

Whoa! That is scary! This is really interesting! I will definitely keep reading!

Author's Response: Ooh, thanks! I'm really happy that you're starting to enjoy the story. :)

Reviewer: harryjoanweasley
Date: 07/19/11 7:14
Chapter: The Straw that Broke the Camel's Back

so scorpius did kill Abby then great story keep it up

Author's Response: Hmm... :D Scorpius... yes. :) Thank you for the review!

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
Severus's Prince by DestinyMoonStar Professors
What does Severus Snape do when a one night stand turns into a baby boy? ...
The Youngest Death Eaters: Year III by DestinyMoonStar 6th-7th Years
Year 3 A year of hard choices and tough talks: Destiny learns about...
Allegiance by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor 6th-7th Years
During his final year at Hogwarts, Draco Malfoy had few illusions about where...
FEATURED
The Pretender by littlebird Professors
She feels the familiar pang of disappointment that they've never been better...
A Light in the Gap by WeasleyMom 3rd-5th Years
When Harry woke that first morning in Grimmauld Place, he wondered if Ron and...
Tapestry by Equinox Chick 1st-2nd Years
As Walburga Black stitches, Sirius rebels. Two poems written about the infamous...
The Weird Sisters - B-Sides and Rarities, Vol. 2 by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor 1st-2nd Years
The Weird Sisters are back for an encore. Ten more tracks from your MNFF authors.
CATEGORIES