Reviews For Moons
Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/27/15 1:32
Chapter: Conjunction

It sounds like quite the job for Lavender to put herself back together after a transformation. I'd probably be too lazy:D

Author's Response: For Lavender, appearance is everything. -N-

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/27/15 1:22
Chapter: Luminosity

I knew Lavender would come to the rescue. I wasn't quite sure how he would kill the hag though. It was nice of her to follow Mark even when she had transformed into a wolf.

Author's Response: Thanks, you were right. -N-

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/27/15 1:11
Chapter: Umbra

I didn't expect Mark and Lavender to end up like they did. Josh is lucky to be alive at this point. Isn't Lavender going to turn into a werewolf soon? Hopefully, she does and is strong enough to get away from the rock she's attached to.

Author's Response: As I’ve admitted before, this story little more than an adult version of Hansel and Gretel. In this case it’s Mark and Lavender captured by the wicked old hag. -N-

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/25/15 1:26
Chapter: Penumbra

Lavender sure likes to take risks doesn't she? Maybe now she should call for reinforcements. Maybe she'll turn into a werewolf and take on the hag.

Author's Response: I love reading your speculations, often they’re remarkably accurate. -N-

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/24/15 0:51
Chapter: Perturbation

Lavender has such a big personality. I'm worried about Lavender getting home in time. Anyway, she's got such a good attitude. We could all take lessons from her.

Author's Response: You’re right to worry. -N-

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 10/24/15 0:42
Chapter: Inclination

I love your stories about Lavender and Mark. You do such a great job with Lavender. And, it's hopeful. If a werewolf can find love there's hope for the rest of us.

Author's Response: Thanks. I’ve been neglecting Lavender recently, and she doesn’t like it. -N-

Reviewer: hanname
Date: 01/16/13 13:29
Chapter: Conjunction

I liked the story. Too tired to analyze.

Author's Response: Thanks
There is nothing to analyse. It's Hansel and Gretel. :-D
-N-

Reviewer: harrys_red_head_girl
Date: 05/09/12 17:49
Chapter: Conjunction

I really enjoyed this look into the life of Lavender and Mark. Those poor boys have no clue what happened, which is a good thing!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. They know something happenned, but they have no idea what. -N-

Reviewer: golden_trio
Date: 05/06/12 22:51
Chapter: Conjunction

Very good! A nice conclusion to another wonderful story from you. :)

Looking forward to more stories from you! Cheers,
Katie

Author's Response: Thanks.
I hope to get the next chapter of H&P into the queue soon, and after that, A&S, probably. Two chaptered stories finished (this and "Haunted House") so I shouldn't start another, should I?
-N-

Reviewer: minervassister
Date: 04/28/12 19:46
Chapter: Luminosity

Glad you got them down at last, being a werewolf does give Lavender a nice edge.
Poor Mark it can't be easy being married to Lavender but there are compensations!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Like Mark and Lavender, this story has been left hanging for too long. Expect the sixth and final chapter soon. -N-

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 04/25/12 5:19
Chapter: Luminosity

Brilliant!!

Author's Response: Thanks -N-

Reviewer: golden_trio
Date: 04/24/12 19:56
Chapter: Luminosity

This was quite good. Mark makes Lavender better and I've enjoyed what you've done with their little family. I wonder what the Auror Office will do.

Looking forward to more...Of any story. :)
- Katie

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
This particular glimpse into the Moons' life is almost over. The next chapter will be the last, and in it, you'll find out what the Auror Office does.
I've just submitted Strangers 15, will that do?
-N-

Reviewer: harrys_red_head_girl
Date: 04/24/12 18:04
Chapter: Luminosity

What a great Chapter! I am so glad that Mark and Lavender are no longer hanging. I was wondering if she was going to transform to help save them. The three muggle boys sure got an eye full, not only with the magical world but also with Lavender, I bet Mark is glad he can Obliviate that part from their memories lol. Great Chapter as always, can't wait to see what the Auror office says.

Author's Response: Thanks
So are they, I'm sure. The boys did get an eyeful, Mark will do his best to sort things out. The next chapter won't take so long to submit. I want to finish at least one of my chaptered stories, and this is it! Thenext chapter will be the last.
-N-

Reviewer: edyeb
Date: 01/23/12 2:48
Chapter: Umbra

While not a fan of Lav in the books, I do like what you have done with her.

Great cliffy here, can't wait for more on the Moons (as we know we are getting more info on Lav becoming a werewolf in H & P).

Keep it coming!!!
Edyeb

Author's Response: Thanks. Lavender’s backstory is threaded through a lot of my stuff (starting with Tales of the Battle). She stars (if that’s the right word) in MIT, MLT, Haunted House, Bare and Moon (I’ve no idea if you’ve read them). I have a MIT novel length story (called Exsanguination) planned, but I won’t start it until I finish one or two other stories. -N-

Reviewer: golden_trio
Date: 01/14/12 22:14
Chapter: Umbra

Ohh, this is getting good! Suspenseful and intriguing. :) Looking forward to more!
-Katie

Author's Response: Thanks.
Hopefully you won't have to wait so long for the next chapter.
-N-

Reviewer: hpgploversforever
Date: 10/16/11 19:30
Chapter: Penumbra

Ohhh that was a good chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks. More soon. -N-

Reviewer: Harrypotterlover1
Date: 10/05/11 22:39
Chapter: Penumbra

Finish it soon!

Author's Response: Finish it, certainly. Soon? as soon as possible. -N-

Reviewer: Harrypotterlover1
Date: 10/05/11 22:33
Chapter: Perturbation

Lavender should not leave him on their anniversary!

Author's Response: Thats what Mark thinks, too. -N-

Reviewer: NoTagBacks
Date: 10/02/11 22:55
Chapter: Penumbra

... and your stories always encourage me to research British "culture" (I just watched several Bombardier videos on YouTube).

Author's Response: The Bombadier ads are Rik Mayall (aka Peeves, apparently, though his scenes were deleted) doing a version of his Blackadder character "Lord Flashheart". British humour. -N-

Reviewer: NoTagBacks
Date: 10/02/11 21:25
Chapter: Penumbra

Another new chapter. Good.
I've read a few post-war Lavender stories; your characterization of her is one of the best. Sometimes I love her and sometimes she's an annoying bitch. That makes her real and interesting.
There isn't much backstory here on motherhood for Lavender - is there more coming later? I think it would help fill in the gap between "Moon" and this story, as well as showing her soft side that contrasts with the beast of her transformation.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
I have a timeline for Lavender from the battle to this story. I have similar feelings towards her too.
Lavender the mother will be pretty annoying (I have several ideas) and I feel sorry for little Violet who will be dressed in frills and flounces. I have several Lavender stories part-written. I knew when she gets bitten and when (and where) she first meets Mark.
-N-

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