Author's Response: Thak you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it.
Great idea for a story! Super-cute. I love the prince-princess idea, but I think you should have spent more time detailing the character's reactions; more adjectives! ~Olivia
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad that you liked it. I know that I didn't really spend much time on what happens at the wedding, but I'm writing another story about their wedding, so I didn't want to give much away, but I will consider putting in a few more details!
This is a really cute story! I love the idea of Arthur thinking about his princess. The only thing is that Arthur's thoughts seem a little too matter-of-fact and more narration. Some more emotion would give this story a little more shine. But it's a good idea and you should keep writing.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad that you liked it! I will really think about adding in a few more "Arthur-like" thoughts. Thanks for the input!