Reviews For Princess
Reviewer: Evangeline_DeMore
Date: 05/02/11 14:13
Chapter: Princess

nice

Author's Response: Thak you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Proserpina
Date: 05/01/11 12:07
Chapter: Princess

Great idea for a story! Super-cute. I love the prince-princess idea, but I think you should have spent more time detailing the character's reactions; more adjectives! ~Olivia

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad that you liked it. I know that I didn't really spend much time on what happens at the wedding, but I'm writing another story about their wedding, so I didn't want to give much away, but I will consider putting in a few more details!

Reviewer: armagod679
Date: 05/01/11 11:39
Chapter: Princess

This is a really cute story! I love the idea of Arthur thinking about his princess. The only thing is that Arthur's thoughts seem a little too matter-of-fact and more narration. Some more emotion would give this story a little more shine. But it's a good idea and you should keep writing.
Julie

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm really glad that you liked it! I will really think about adding in a few more "Arthur-like" thoughts. Thanks for the input!

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