Reviews For Fight With Me
Reviewer: Princess_of_Wales7
Date: 05/07/11 13:23
Chapter: Chapter 1: One Change at a Time

I very much liked the suspense. It was a good story, truth be told. I like ow George becomes a more serious person, and this Valerie person helps him overcome his loss.

Reviewer: Proserpina
Date: 04/30/11 13:27
Chapter: Prologue - A Journey to the Past

Great story so far! The part that I liked the best was when he was disgruntled because Valerie had sat on his bench. :) Keep writing! ~Olivia

Author's Response: You know, when you have your old habits, your reaction when they're disturbed can surprise you! And I thought it would be fun to watch George's reaction to Valerie's presence on the bench. I'm happy that you liked it! Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 04/27/11 11:21
Chapter: Prologue - A Journey to the Past

I was intrigued by the summary and I'm even more intrigued now that I've read the prologue. This seems to be an interesting story and I can't wait to read the rest. There aren't many George centric stories once he's married with kids, most seem to deal with his grief straight after the battle (and that gets a bit dull to read after a while).

I have a query/nit pick. His son is Fred, yes? Now if his wife is Angelina, then I find it unlikely he'd have red hair because Angelina Johnson was black and her genes would be dominant. Sorry, that's a bit picky but it was a bit jarring - unless he's not married to Angelina ... in which case you can shoot me down.

Look forward to further chapters, Viv. ~Carole~

Author's Response: If you're intrigued just by the prologue, now wait until Chapter 1! :P This story will certainly not be what people expect. Yes, Fred is George's son... now, if he's married to Angelina or not... I guess I'll let you find out by yourself! *is being evil* Thanks for the review Carole!

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