Reviews For Fatnesia
Reviewer: FwooperFeathers
Date: 10/25/11 1:53
Chapter: If you give a rat a reason . . . .

Clever :P

Author's Response: Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Seer_Witch
Date: 08/03/11 12:31
Chapter: If you give a rat a reason . . . .

HAHA I love this so much. It's hysterical. And true. I read the little author's note and I suffer from that...At first I thought that this was going to progress into Peter betraying Lily & James because of "fatnesia." The ending kinda suggested it but I wasn't sure--it was hella funny anyway. :)

Author's Response: Ta, thanks! This is set in school, so it isn't meant to be foreshadowing as much as a look into Peter's thoughts and personality, the little rat. :D

Reviewer: EatMyPixieDust
Date: 07/18/11 15:30
Chapter: If you give a rat a reason . . . .

Great job! Very original and very true. My sister does that all the time, looks into her crisp bag, sees it is empty, and demands to know who ate them. :) Bravo.

Author's Response: Thank you! Fat cells trick animals, too. Sometimes I have my black lab do tricks for kibbles, and when I say "all gone" he'll sniff my hand and give me a look that says, "What? Who ate them?" :D

Reviewer: loveismagicharry
Date: 04/21/11 18:27
Chapter: If you give a rat a reason . . . .

Ha! This is funny. I'm quite hungry now, though! Keep writing, you did a great job!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! It doesn't matter if you've only got two meagre fat cells, they'll conspire to make you eat absentmindedly. This is almost a public service warning. :P

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 04/21/11 10:56
Chapter: If you give a rat a reason . . . .

That was pretty funny. I think I know people who have fatnesia. I don't think I have it though. i seem to remember with painful honestly every last, damn, thing I eat. I also seem to pick up every calorie that other people eat but don't remember. I wasn't going to read this but the idea was so intriguing that I couldn't resist.

Author's Response: You've just proved the importance of titles and summaries. :D Thank you for reading! I was blocked at a part in the next Lost chapter, distracted myself with this, and now I know how I'm going to write what I didn't before. Poem therapy, heh.

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