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Reviewer: Heiress of Marauders
Date: 04/14/11 20:26
Chapter: One-Shot

That was adorable!
I usually don't pay too much attention to Hermione/Ron fics, but this brought their relationship past screaming at each other all day. I like how your story showed how they can tolerate each other's habits by now (after knowing each other for so long!).
The dialogue was absolutely hilarious and witty. I kind of love it. :)

Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed this story and their dialogue. It was fun. Thanks for reading and leaving such a nice review, I really appreciate it! ~Gina :)

Reviewer: WeasleyMom
Date: 04/14/11 19:39
Chapter: One-Shot

I am sitting here grinning from ear to ear!! What a wonderful proposal, and you even surprised me... I think Hermione caught on faster than I did. Ha! I love that he has not shared any of this with Harry and I love that Hermione did not actually make that tart. The whole thing being over breakfast was lovely, and I could sort of see the whole thing even without the information about setting and what they were doing, etc. Well, done.

You are so sweet to take time to write this for me and I just adore it, Gina!

Oh, I forgot... I love that he proposed just by talking to her, and that he kept blurting stuff out but still never came off as if he was messing it up or being unintelligent. And three cheers for Hermione loving the proposal... she gets him, and so its all good with her.

LOVE IT! *squishes*

Author's Response: You are quite welcome, Lori! I'm glad you liked it, even if was short. It came to me rather quickly. I can "see" it all as well, and of course whenever I do these dialogue things I can "hear" them too. I think they are fun to try so I'm glad it worked. I hope you are having a great day! One more happy birthday - and thanks for the lovely review!! ~Gina :)

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