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Reviewer: lovelle
Date: 01/03/12 14:21
Chapter: Why couldn't he say just it?

Really nice! I mean, I can imagine Ron really choking the words on what to say to Hermione! And it's so canon that Hermione would be upset that he can't say anything! I really like it!

And you should ship them! Romione's the best!

Reviewer: HermionesLittleSister
Date: 08/01/11 22:27
Chapter: Why couldn't he say just it?

It was funny and really sweet at the same time it was really well written
Good job!

Reviewer: weasley_is_the_queen
Date: 07/10/11 13:59
Chapter: Why couldn't he say just it?

Thank you so much for this story. I am a hard core R/Hr shipper and this is one of my favorite stories. Ron is amazing; you have certainly done him justice! His reaction to Krum at the wedding was spot on. I can imagine his temper rising and his determination overpowering his insecurity when he said " Not this time, mate." you really captured the awkward relationship between Ron and Hermione as they are dancing especially when she tells him to stop gloating. I loce that part! They know each other so well and yet they can't express themselves to each other...especially when fred interrupts haha! That actually was a pretty realistic situation. You really caught onto Ron's humrtoo with the "biscuits" and the line "Deah ters ruin everything". The last scene at Grimmauld place really put the cherry on top. It was so Ron to just blurt something stupid without thinking evenwith Hermione encouraging him to say what hreally feels. I know that you don't ship them but you really portrayed their characters really well :) great job!

Reviewer: AmeliaWeasly
Date: 06/24/11 21:44
Chapter: Why couldn't he say just it?

That was a great story. It was well written, made me laugh, and threw every part of it I was like "AWWWWW." Great job!!!!!!

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 04/28/11 14:41
Chapter: Why couldn't he say just it?

Adorable story! I think one of the most endearing aspects of Ron and Hermione's relationship is the fact that they so obviously love eachother but they try so hard to hide it. You portrayed that very well in this story-thanks for sharing!

Author's Response: Thank you, dear! I'm glad that I managed to portray that aspect of their relationship, because it is one thing about the ship I like. Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 04/20/11 9:23
Chapter: Why couldn't he say just it?

I think this is wonderful, I really do. It was lovely to read and I smiled the entire time. If you are not comfortable with this couple, it really doesn't show. I think what is so strong about it is how you wove in several scenes from the book/movie and fleshed out Ron so well. I had forgotten about that book he had, great detail! They are so in character here, it's beautiful: Hermione reacting with ire and irritation, Ron thinking about food and stumbling over his thoughts until something else pops out. Great appearance by Fred (I'm so glad you chose him considering his sad fate later.) Really well done. The end was really sort of heartbreaking, when they drop hands. I felt so bad for Ron. The last three sentences tied it up perfectly. Think you'll write the story when he finally gets those words out? ;)
Really nice story, Chante!
~Gina :)

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing this story. I'm very flattered that you liked it so well. I don't write Ron or Hermione very often, so I'm glad that you thought I kept them in character. Will I write a sequel to this? No...yes...maybe... I don't know. I have been writing Ron/Hermione more, but I don't know if I could manage something quite like that. But we shall see. Again, thanks for reviewing and I'm really glad you liked it.

Reviewer: RonW
Date: 04/20/11 4:43
Chapter: Why couldn't he say just it?

You know I loved every bit of your story.. but your author's note has disappointed me ..
being a R/Hr lover, i cannot bear words like these.. :(

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the story, and I'm sorry if the author's not offended you. But it is the truth. I'm not a Ron/Hermione lover, though I'm more fond of it then I was. Thanks for reading and reviewing the story.

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