Aaawwwwww, poor Lily, poor Sev, poor Potter (not even a date with Lily yet!). Everybody seems to be having bad luck. I hope to see more chapters because I enjoyed reading the first four.
Author's Response: I feel sorry for Sev too. Perhaps things for him will improve... if I ever find time to write another chapter! Thank you for your review. Made my day! :-)
i would never expect that lily would talk about snape like that
and also wouldn't sirius ruin it for james if he fought with lily like that
This is a great story! I can't wait for the next chapter. I kinnda feel bad for Peter (see how I said kinnda) ya he turns out horrible but maybe if people had been nicer to him the maybe he wouldn't be a coward. I like how u made siris and James stick up for him. Keep up the good work
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
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My God, this is just awful. I mean, the story is lovely, and you've done a great job, but what I mean is that it's really sad :( Lovely!
Author's Response: My heart skipped a beat at first, but thank you! Snape's story is certainly a sad one, but thank you for the review!
I love it! You will soon be one of my favorite authors. You did an amazing job but... yes theirs always a but. Their was just one spelling mistake that I caught you spelled clothes cloths. But other than that amazing. I love Lily and James fics or even their era! I hope you will update soon. But don't worry about it so much because life is way more important than this! Bye!
From the happy& excited
Rene Luna Smith
Author's Response: Ha ha thank you for the review and advice! "Clothes" is one of those words that always confuses me. Thank you for the review!!
Yay! A Marauder Story! These are definitely my favorites. Please tell me it will be a nice long one. This chapter was a little lacking in plot, but it was just a prologue, and it gave me a nice little cliffie at the end to enjoy. I love cliffies. They can make my least favorite characters die in my imagination. Okay, well, I've gone on far too long, so please continue and tell me it will be a nice long story just to make me happy! Oh, yeah, I forgot in the midst of all my rambling: I really did enjoy the chapter.
Okay, have a nice day and all. Don't forget to update!
Author's Response: AHH! I'm so excited for my first review on this story, and a nice one at that! Yes, I think it will be a long story. I already have a few chapters written, and lots of ideas for more! Thank you, thank you, thank you for the wonderful review!!