Reviews For Skydive
Reviewer: hpgploversforever
Date: 07/19/11 11:02
Chapter: Full Moon

Just read all ten chapters. This is a wonderful story can't wait to see what else you come up with.

Author's Response: Aww thank you so much! I'm flattered that you sat through and read then all! Thank you : D

Reviewer: StarsApartlover
Date: 07/16/11 20:00
Chapter: Full Moon

SOOO good!!!!!! I loved hp and the deathly hallows! It was so good. I have already seen it twice. I would love you to write a sequel! That would be great! You are such an amazing author. I love how you bring everything ( I mean everything) to life. I hope James is ok. Please have the next chapter up soon ( it's no rush). I know you have lots going on. Good luck with your festival! :)

Author's Response: Thank you! Dude, I was crying my eyes out during Deathly Hallows. The smallest things made my eyes burn with tears. Seriously, and Neville Longbottom killed me. He is my favorite from the Trio era, Neville is amazing. And I was sobbing throughout the Credits. No more new book or movies to look forward too. I haven't seen it twice yet, but I plan on going at least a million more times. Thank's for the well wishes for National Dance Day! It's my last big dance hoorah before college unless I can organize some sort of dance company....I keep myself WAY too busy! Don't worry, James' injury is nothing huge and I shall post whenever I can! Thanks for the lovely review. As for a sequel...we'll see.... ; )

Reviewer: potterboy11
Date: 07/16/11 19:01
Chapter: The Journey Back

Definitely one of my favorite James/Lily story s can't wait for an update.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! That really means a lot!

Reviewer: bananaz13
Date: 07/16/11 16:57
Chapter: Barbie Boy

Did you realize that when you were talking about how they were seated at the table you put "Remus, Peter and Peter" instead of "Remus, Peter, and Sirius?"

Author's Response: No, I did not! Good catch though. That will be taken care of right....NOW!

Reviewer: whorecruxes
Date: 07/08/11 6:52
Chapter: Hyde Park

Please update soon! I can't wait till James and Lilly get together!

Author's Response: I will update as soon as I can. I've been super busy getting ready for National Dance Day, my dance company that I dance and teach for rented out a park for it and we're doing an all day thing, so things have been just a little bit crazy right now. Also, I've been trying to find time to organize a Harry Potter movie marathon with my friends before the final movie comes out nest week. But do not worry, I'm still working on this story and will update ASAP.

Reviewer: Snowlily
Date: 06/29/11 13:36
Chapter: Hyde Park

I loved the ending of that chapter. So, so much. =)

Author's Response: Aw, thank you!

Reviewer: StarsApartlover
Date: 06/28/11 20:49
Chapter: Hyde Park

I love frank and Alice. I love how you make the passages sooooo detailed. One quick question... Will there be a sequel? Keep up the great work and I can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thank you! As to a sequel....I'm still debating if I should split this story into two, like a Horcrux, or just make it into one longer one. If I did split it the sequel would be much shorter than this one. So I guess I should ask everyone what they think, should I split it or keep it as one?

Reviewer: locanena
Date: 06/28/11 14:37
Chapter: Hyde Park

I have a question is Fabian still in Hogswart? And if he is why isn't his twin brother Gideon in school. So far I really like it

Author's Response: When I started adding Fabian in I did lots of looking to see if he and Gideon were twins and everything I found was only theory, so I took the liberty of making Gideon older. So yes, in my story Fabian in still at Hogwarts in his sixth year.

Reviewer: Siriusblack_tonks
Date: 06/28/11 11:45
Chapter: Hyde Park

This was good! I loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you : )

Reviewer: StarsApartlover
Date: 06/19/11 6:07
Chapter: Quidditch Talk

Love this chapter! I can't wait for the next one. Ur amazing at writing :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much : )

Reviewer: PongOTongTongERong
Date: 06/16/11 14:51
Chapter: Quidditch Talk

I first of want to apologize for not reviewing the last few chapters , they have been excellent like the rest (: I want to say that I truley appreciate this story and you as an author . I love that you have an easy plot that seems to flow .

The way that you treat James as a character is probably the best part of this story . You do not have him falling over Lily every second and faking a personality that will get Lily to like him . This is a common cliche which I am glad you've avoided ! I also love that you have James described as "careful, critical , and strong" and not just a huge goofball (for lack of a better word) .

So there is my long review as an apology for not review the last few chapters ! I live this story and cannot wait for more and the growing relationship between Lily and James ! (:

-kelsey !

Author's Response: Thank you so much! James is probably the easiest one to write about as I've taken several traits from my brothers and friends to make him. I'm the only girl in my family, with three brothers, and if there is one thing I've learned is that guys don't fall over girls the same way that girls do for guys so I can't write James that way because that is not how a teenage boy would do about wooing a girl. I'm glad you're eager to read more Lily and James but I hope you don't mind meeting Alice and Frank!

Reviewer: Rene4hp
Date: 06/15/11 18:32
Chapter: Quidditch Talk

A NEW FAN! Oh my GOODNESS. I always skipped your story for some reason but now I'm hooked! Amazing! Well done. Post soon!
Rene Luna Smith

Author's Response: Thank you so much! This means a lot to me, seriously. I'm really glad that you like it!

Reviewer: Snowlily
Date: 06/15/11 17:53
Chapter: Hogsmeade

Wow. Very nice. I liked the snow part...=) New Yorker through and through, even though I moved....=( But I love snow! =) Snowlily....connect the dots... =)

Author's Response: Haha thank you loads! I love snow too, I used to to live in Alaska so I kinda had to. Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: Snowlily
Date: 06/15/11 17:44
Chapter: Confessions

Oooh.... Sirius is up to something....=)

Author's Response: Ohhh is he now? Hahaha.

Reviewer: Siriusblack_tonks
Date: 06/15/11 13:27
Chapter: Quidditch Talk

That was good, update as fast as you can please :)

Author's Response: I will, I think I will have lots of time to really work on this story tomorrow actually.....hmmmm. Thank you for reading and reviewing! It makes my day!

Reviewer: AReader
Date: 06/15/11 11:32
Chapter: Guys Like Potter

Strange how I was just listening to a Darren Criss song at the moment! ...He tried hitting himself with ...HEXES? Wow, I now officially believe Snape is insane, whether or not this is a fanfic!

Author's Response: I love Darren Criss, I will marry him. Haha I'm not sure why I had Snape do that but I figured that hexes might be more effective than hitting yourself. Thank you very much!

Reviewer: Jupiter13
Date: 06/12/11 6:58
Chapter: Hey Jude

Awww. Well, it was cute. Good job on the chapter! Post more soon :)

Author's Response: Thank you : ) I just submitted the next chapter!

Reviewer: potterboy11
Date: 06/10/11 21:42
Chapter: Hey Jude

Loved it so far can't wait for more. I really like the way that you develop the characters and give them depth. Plus props on the Beatles reference they are definitely one of the best bands ever.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I give everyone some kind of story because everyone HAS one. I would get so bored if I didn't write it this way anyway. I'm glad you liked my Beatles reference. They are my all time favorite band of all time and I will be sliding them in often. "All You Need Is Love" is the perfect anthem to Harry Potter anyway!

Reviewer: StarsApartlover
Date: 06/05/11 18:21
Chapter: Hey Jude

Hello again,
I am soooo sorry I have not reviewed in awhile, but I have been reading this story. It gets better and better every chapter. It is one of my favorite stories! Thank you for a wonderful Lily and James story. I hope the next chapter is up soon. :3)

Author's Response: Aw thank you! I feel really special that this is one of your favorites! Especially since you seem to really love "Stars Apart" because that one is REALLY good! I will try and have the next one up asap, but i'm super busy at the moment. I just graduated and I started work...haha. But I will have it up as soon as I can!

Reviewer: FlightlessBird
Date: 06/02/11 18:05
Chapter: The Journey Back

I love this story! I'm a sucker for James and Lily but the way you involve the other characters and develop their stories around the main focus of the J/L romance is great. It's also nice to see someone writing James and Lily as friends before they get together. People have the general idea that they go straight from Lily hating James to her loving him. It seems more real the way you write it. Can't wait for future chapters!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Reviews like this make my day! Cheers!

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