Reviewer: Sly Severus
Date: 05/21/12 19:14
Chapter: The Toad in Pink

A lovely hate on Umbridge poem. I’m surprised I haven’t seen more of these. After all, she is the most hated character in the HP universe. I’ve heard of a few people who think Voldemort is worthy of pity, but none who have a kind word for Umbridge. What does it mean to be more hated than the most evil wizard of all-time?

Your poem was very cute. The flow is nice. Everything is very simple, which isn’t a bad thing.

So many poems are all serious, full of gloom and doom. That’s usually the kind of poems I write. But this is actually pretty light, and even funny, which the title suggests.

Thanks for sharing this.

Reviewer: Eleanor Lupin
Date: 01/01/12 3:16
Chapter: The Toad in Pink

Ha! That was great! I actually really like HP poetry, and I liked this a lot!
Nearly Headless Nick isn't crazy, though ... he's just lovably eccentric! :)

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