Reviewer: Jupiter13
Date: 06/14/11 14:46
Chapter: Alone

Haha poor Lily...

Reviewer: lilyginnylily
Date: 05/04/11 21:21
Chapter: Alone

Ur story is great but please write more

Reviewer: StarsApartlover
Date: 04/08/11 13:04
Chapter: Alone

I like this chapter! When will the next chapter be up? This is wonderful so far!

Reviewer: LILY_ISTHEBEST
Date: 04/03/11 3:54
Chapter: Alone

Awsum story!

Reviewer: lilyfan
Date: 03/30/11 16:14
Chapter: Alone

i as well am confused, but i do love how you started it with action. i'm assuming you'll explain the whole situation in the next chapter. i am curious to what happens next. why did james unconsiousize lily evans...?

Author's Response: Yeah I've mostly got the unconsciousness thing planned out. It's going to be a sort of subplot for the next few chapters, although the proper plot is, of course, Lily/James stuff. The next chapter should be a bit more clear.

Reviewer: Padfoot11333
Date: 03/29/11 9:07
Chapter: Alone

I'm a little confused, but please continue so I'm not.

Author's Response: Yeah, the first chapter's pretty weird. It's just an odd way to introduce everything that's going to happen later.

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