That was rock and roll all over, right from the start. The very idea that Harry and Ron propose en sync. It's a highly provable idea! And Ron's uneasiness was quite adorable, very in character too. I was particularly fond of his lengs-brain relationship. "Legs, keep walking, ignore that stupid brain."
Impeccably written and in a very suitable way for Ron to propose; coming fully determined, nearly blowing it but making a sound, sensible safe in the last minute. Liked it very, very, very much!!!
Thanks for the review.
As Iíve said in other review repliess, the idea for this, and the fact that it had to be Ronís inner monologue arrived pretty much fully formed. Ronís panic was (I hope) only natural. He really should have fastened that shoelace!-N-
This made me laugh. It was just so... well... Ron. You really did his characterisation fantastically - particularly the part when he doubted himself. I think it's really interesting that you chose to focus on his thoughts leading up to proposing, rather than actually proposing itself, it really gave insight into Ron. I loved the last line, too. It finished this off nicely.
Like some other reviewers, I am hoping you'll write the story of Harry's proposal to Ginny, I'm sure it could be equally as interesting.
Anyway, thanks for a great read.
Thanks for the review.
I think Ron gained a lot of maturity and confidence in DH. But regardless of that, this is a situation where confidence fails unless you have an ego the size of a planet.
Harry? Possibly, but not soon, unless inspiration strikes.-N
You know, I was never really a big fan of Ron/Hermione fics until I "discovered" your fics-now I can't get enough of them!
I don't know if you remember my question about "The Missing Fanfic" but, I found it! I may be intelligent, but, unfortunately, I still am blonde. I did not even THINK about google-ing it! It turns out MuggleMomma has quite the following; she's posted the same story on about seven other sites. So, as you can imagine, I'm ecstatic!
Once again, thank you for responding promptly, updating regularly, and have fun!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I write more Harry/Ginny than Ron/Hermione, but sometimes an idea arrives almost fully formed (this one did). Next updates (in the queue already) - M.I.T.:Muggle Interface Team and E.C.C.E.N.T.R.I.C., then "Tales", and "Strangers", and "A&S" at last. -N-
Yay!! U wrote another story!! And it's one of ur best:) yayayayay!!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm beginning to get a backlog of stories. There are two more in the queue. -N-
Loved this, very cute.
Author's Response: Thank you. -N-
OH MY GOODNESS. That was adorable. But wait! What about Harry? Well, we know she says yes eventually but I would very much like to see how it goes.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. This is one of those few stories that arrived in my head, was written straight through in one sitting and then polished a little. Harry's story is proving more difficult. -N-
This is the best proposal fic ever! What's to critisize? Loved it, really.
Author's Response: Thanks, I think that, on balance, Ron would agree. -N-
Oh my gosh! That was totally Ron all over! Great job! I love it!
Author's Response: Totally Ron was the effect I was trying to achieve. Thanks. -N-
Oh I loved this! So them, and so sweet! Can we be expecting Harry's side of this too?? :D
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm gald you enjoyed Ron's panic. :-D Harry's side is a possibility, certainly, but I haven't written it yet. -N-