This made me laugh. It was just so... well... Ron. You really did his characterisation fantastically - particularly the part when he doubted himself. I think it's really interesting that you chose to focus on his thoughts leading up to proposing, rather than actually proposing itself, it really gave insight into Ron. I loved the last line, too. It finished this off nicely.
Like some other reviewers, I am hoping you'll write the story of Harry's proposal to Ginny, I'm sure it could be equally as interesting.
Anyway, thanks for a great read.
Thanks for the review.
I think Ron gained a lot of maturity and confidence in DH. But regardless of that, this is a situation where confidence fails unless you have an ego the size of a planet.
Harry? Possibly, but not soon, unless inspiration strikes.-N
You know, I was never really a big fan of Ron/Hermione fics until I "discovered" your fics-now I can't get enough of them!
I don't know if you remember my question about "The Missing Fanfic" but, I found it! I may be intelligent, but, unfortunately, I still am blonde. I did not even THINK about google-ing it! It turns out MuggleMomma has quite the following; she's posted the same story on about seven other sites. So, as you can imagine, I'm ecstatic!
Once again, thank you for responding promptly, updating regularly, and have fun!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I write more Harry/Ginny than Ron/Hermione, but sometimes an idea arrives almost fully formed (this one did). Next updates (in the queue already) - M.I.T.:Muggle Interface Team and E.C.C.E.N.T.R.I.C., then "Tales", and "Strangers", and "A&S" at last. -N-
Yay!! U wrote another story!! And it's one of ur best:) yayayayay!!
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm beginning to get a backlog of stories. There are two more in the queue. -N-
Loved this, very cute.
Author's Response: Thank you. -N-
OH MY GOODNESS. That was adorable. But wait! What about Harry? Well, we know she says yes eventually but I would very much like to see how it goes.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. This is one of those few stories that arrived in my head, was written straight through in one sitting and then polished a little. Harry's story is proving more difficult. -N-
This is the best proposal fic ever! What's to critisize? Loved it, really.
Author's Response: Thanks, I think that, on balance, Ron would agree. -N-
Oh my gosh! That was totally Ron all over! Great job! I love it!
Author's Response: Totally Ron was the effect I was trying to achieve. Thanks. -N-
Oh I loved this! So them, and so sweet! Can we be expecting Harry's side of this too?? :D
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm gald you enjoyed Ron's panic. :-D Harry's side is a possibility, certainly, but I haven't written it yet. -N-