Reviewer: Potter_head_13
Date: 04/22/13 22:58
Chapter: Chapter Nine: Quidditch

This was a really great story!!

Reviewer: silvertree
Date: 08/16/12 19:07
Chapter: Chapter Nine: Quidditch

Hey Olivia, it's been a while since i wrote a review! but i've read part of chapter ten and it's really good! i hope you put it up soon :)

Reviewer: Fifth
Date: 08/02/12 21:22
Chapter: Chapter One: Runaway

Very nice! I like the intensity of the fight between Walburga and Sirius :)

Reviewer: Luna432
Date: 07/05/12 1:44
Chapter: Chapter Nine: Quidditch

This is so great! I love how it's a mix of action (which I love) and fluff (which I REALLY love). I'm interested to see how Remus's crush on Lily plays out, I don't not like it it's just hmm. Keep it coming! :D

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Chapter Ten is actually almost done. ~Olivia

Reviewer: Midnight Storm
Date: 06/09/12 3:35
Chapter: Chapter Nine: Quidditch

I'm still here. D; I messaged you on the Beta Forums and responded to your review but i dunno if you got it so I'll try here as well. :D

My old e-mail terminated itself without my knowing, my current one is midnighter18@hotmail.com if you haven't given up on me ...

Love and infinite apologies xxxxx

Author's Response: Omg! I thought I'd sent you an email ages ago, but I checked my sentbox and I don't think it ever went through! I've emailed you now though. :) yes, of course, I'd love to still work with you!

Reviewer: ThatHPFan
Date: 05/12/12 12:26
Chapter: Chapter One: Runaway

This is really good so far, I liked the beginning though. It made me laugh when you said he grabbed some jewlery! Great work!! :D

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked the beginning; I wrote it such a long time ago that I think my writing style has changed. :)

Reviewer: Cassandra Lane
Date: 03/31/12 3:03
Chapter: Chapter One: Runaway

I love this story ! You're an incredibly talented writer and I hope you'll post more of this story soon :)

Author's Response: Honestly, you don't know how much reviews like this mean to me. Thanks! Chapter Ten will hopefully be up soon. ~Olivia

Reviewer: TheInvisibilityCloakOwner
Date: 01/30/12 5:07
Chapter: Chapter Eight: Rumours

Heyy!
Awesome Story!
Please Please Write Fast!

Reviewer: Lyra Loveless
Date: 12/12/11 17:39
Chapter: Chapter Eight: Rumours

I sincerely hope that you will be writing more to this story! You have a 'Sirius' talent! - See what I did there! XD

Author's Response: Hey, thanks! :) Hmm... Chapter Nine... yeah this might be a while. I'll try to get it done, though! ~Olivia

Reviewer: crazyhead109
Date: 11/19/11 23:09
Chapter: Chapter Four: Lion's Lake

good story so far loved chapter 4

Reviewer: Rene4hp
Date: 10/26/11 21:24
Chapter: Chapter Eight: Rumours

I love it! Post soon!
R.L.S

Author's Response: Thanks! I will- hopefully, :) ~Olivia <3

Reviewer: PerfectInTheEyesOfErised
Date: 09/29/11 1:13
Chapter: Chapter Seven: Letters and Flying Lessons

What?! That's it? Done. Ended. It can't be. Please don't leave me with a cliff hanger! I'll be checking in for updates and expect (hope with all hope, actually) to see an end to this consuming short story.

Author's Response: Wow! Thanks! I've decided to respond to all your reviews in one, just to avoid redundancy. (Redundance? is that a word?) I'm extremely happy that you enjoyed it. I was kind of getting worried and freaking out that nobody liked it, but now I'm ok. *Sigh of relief*. ~Olivia

Reviewer: PerfectInTheEyesOfErised
Date: 09/29/11 0:52
Chapter: Chapter Six: Professor Angela Madison

James Potter- a cheerleader! Priceless.
I hope to find some funny and romantic exchanges in the next chapter as James attempts to teach Lily Evans to play Quiddich.

Reviewer: PerfectInTheEyesOfErised
Date: 09/28/11 19:17
Chapter: Chapter Five: The Hogwarts Express

Yet another amazing chapter, you're on a roll! I especially enjoyed the gay twist, interesting and original. To the next chapter!

Reviewer: PerfectInTheEyesOfErised
Date: 09/28/11 19:03
Chapter: Chapter Four: Lion's Lake

You have a talent at telling stories! I am amazed how awesome this story is getting, James and Sirius carrying Lily is the ULTIMATE! I shall, most definitely, read on.

Reviewer: PerfectInTheEyesOfErised
Date: 09/28/11 18:49
Chapter: Chapter Three: Goodnight

Good, loved the part where Lily saw Sirius and James with the howler. You painted a sad yet lovely scene of acceptance and understanding in my mind.

Reviewer: PerfectInTheEyesOfErised
Date: 09/28/11 18:36
Chapter: Chapter Two: Godric's Hollow

I am REALLY starting to like James Potter now! He and Black are so hilarious!
P.S. Where can I get a pair of those PJ's?!

Reviewer: PerfectInTheEyesOfErised
Date: 09/28/11 18:26
Chapter: Chapter One: Runaway

I really like the first chapter and I'm going to the next after this review.
I sort of have this obsession with the Marauder era and you just brought the characters to life for me. Thanks!

Reviewer: Cally Pinkle
Date: 09/24/11 15:28
Chapter: Chapter Four: Lion's Lake

i love lily lol

Author's Response: I'm glad you do. :) ~Olivia

Reviewer: Cally Pinkle
Date: 09/24/11 15:12
Chapter: Chapter Three: Goodnight

ok now i really like it!

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