I really like your story so far! Update soon! :)
Author's Response: Thanks!! I plan to!! I think i have the chapter ready for submission, but it's a matter of when the mods get around to approving it :D
I'm going to keep it simple, too. In tears, emotional, story-love-struck-tears. *snif*
Great *snif*snif* story!*snif*
Author's Response: I'm sorry it made you cry! When writers make me cry I hate them for a few minutes, I hope that wasn't the case!! Keep this on the down low but you might be my favorite review so far!! because this review nearly made ME cry!! :D
That proposal was so sweet! You're really talented. (actually, it sounded sort of like my parents' story of their proposal- minus a castle in ruins and a dead evil overlord, obviously). Keep writing!
Author's Response: I said "awww" really loud when I read this review!! You made a girl real happy :) I'm curious as to how your parents' proposal was like this . . . :) but life is full of delicious mysteries and one young teenage author can hardly hope to know the resolution of all of them!
Your summary was drawing. I liked how you delved head first in the story. "Ron was still". Half of my attention only was actually on the story and I went down reading three sentences and then I snap and think, 'what?' I start reading again and oh, Ron is dead. I say aw. It was a nice read.
Author's Response: I'm sorry you said "aw" but I'm glad it was a nice read!! The whole "Ron was still" was just a way for me to start the story . . . it only dawned on me that by starting this way Ron was going to be dead, and that was going to be the story.
luv it so far
Author's Response: You're my first review!! Ahh!! And I luv ur response!!!! :) thank u soo much day made . . . Will update soon;)