Reviews For My Brave Face
Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/05/11 16:48
Chapter: I'm Happy (Both of Us Are)

I think that's the most shocked I've ever been when reading fanfic. I thought at first that Ron had gone to the afterlife and was thinking back to how he died. I think I was also shocked that Goyle had pulled something this complicated off. So, kudos to you. I don't shock easily. Great chapter.

Author's Response: I love shocking people . . . in fact I shocked myself when the idea for this chapter popped into my head. A lot of my friends were curious enough to read the story and were majorly pissed at me for killing off Ron. Even my mom was a bit ashamed. :D So I decided to pull a stunt and make everyone doubt the next turn the story would take. And making Goyle smart just added to the unnerving side of things, didn't it?

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/05/11 9:48
Chapter: The Article and the Abduction

I guess I never thought of Blaise Zabini as being a Death Eater. I know he was Slytherin but he seemed too aloof to be involved in any cause. I thought you were going to reveal what Goyle said to Ron:D I was so focused on Hermione's grief that I didn't consider his mother's. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Blaise Zabini - quiet, brooding, perfect candidate for undercover Death Eater, and attractive and creepy, perfect combination for sadistic villain. What Goyle said to Ron is a mystery I'm not sure if I want to divulge :D His mother's grief would be exponential, don't you think?

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/05/11 8:48
Chapter: Morning at the Grangers'; Evening at the Burrow

I loved Hermione's response at the end of this chapter. I can never remember who is with whom in the Weasley family. I do like it when authors go through the family though. It gives the impression that it is a large, close-knit family. Poor Hermione--she's probably going to be going through memories for a long time, They bring comfort and it seems like your heart gets broken all over again. Great chapter.

Author's Response: I love detailing the extensive next-generation Weasley names :) and ud think that these memories keepmgoing . . . :)

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/05/11 8:36
Chapter: What the Knight Bus Brought; What the Stork Was Going to Bring

I'm so sorry--I started reading this wonderful story and then got busy with life and have been trying to get back to it. But, here I am. In the end, I liked how Hermione broke the news to her children. Sometimes it's best to blurt out the information and see where it goes. I really like the flashbacks. I think you've got the characters down perfectly. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Your reviews continue to inspire much confidence in me! And that dragged life always gets in the way, doesnt it? And blurting it out has always worked best for me :) -Joy

Reviewer: ronhermione15
Date: 07/01/11 20:28
Chapter: In St. Mungo's

That was great!! I can't wait to see what happens next!! And I hope none of the kids die!! :(

Author's Response: All I can say is patience!! :)

Reviewer: BraveAtHeart706
Date: 07/01/11 17:55
Chapter: I'm Happy (Both of Us Are)

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I actually cried during those last couple of chapters. Now that is a true shocker.

Author's Response: This will sound really awful, but I love it when readers cry! :)

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 07/01/11 5:30
Chapter: Bella Notte

Yes the survey is a little morbid lol but I'll answer anyway. I hope Goyle dies of course, but not until they know where Hermione is! And I want Rose and Scorpious to stay alive, their romance is so sweet! I love how Rose wants to have an adventure like her parents did, very interesting quote! Lily's jealousy is hard to understand...I guess she must be used to getting all of the attention as Harry Potter's daughter. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks for doing the survey!! Goyle . . . Good answer? Yah, the whole Scorose isn't very origninsl but I'm trying to make it as mine as possible. And if your parents had a grand adventure every year of school, wouldn't you be a tad jealous? And I REALLY REALLY don't like Lily as a character but her attitude towards life is fun to add to the plot. I will be on vacation for the 4th of July so the next chapter may be a little while, but keep your eye out for it!! -Joy

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 06/29/11 16:39
Chapter: In St. Mungo's

I've seen this story before and i saw it in the recent offerings so I thought I'd check it out. That was very well done, realistic. It was typical Hermione, sad but already planning ahead. My thoughts are moving ahead too--I'm wondering if Hermione remarries and if so, to whom. How old are Rose and Hugo? I'll just have to keep reading:D Great chapter.

Author's Response: all your questions shall be answered . . . please do keep reading!! -Joy

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 06/29/11 15:25
Chapter: Bella Notte

Okay that took a weird turn! Crabbe back from the dead and goyle dead!

Author's Response: Umm . . . Goyle isn't dead . . . And u didn't do the survey!! :(

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 06/22/11 19:53
Chapter: Enter Rose

So excited to see an update!!! There were a few things I wasn't quite sure about. I don't think Hermione would want Harry to feel guilty about their situation or hope that he could fix everything for them, its not in her nature. What did you mean by Rose's betrayal?? By leaving Hogwarts? I liked the part about Scorpius going with Rose so he could prove himself to Ron. Hope Draco makes an appearance, that would be interesting! Good luck with your writer's block!

Author's Response: Your criticism is helpful!! And you're right, but do keep in mind that Hermione has been through a lot of emotional stress at this point. She won't be the same person she's been in the past. She and Harry have been relying a lot on each other through Ron's death. And Rose is considered to have betrayed her cousin Lily by going out with Scorpius, as Lily liked him, and also she has betrayed her father, by going out with a Malfoy. It would be awesome to bring in Draco, you're right, but at the moment I don't see how it would fit in with the storyline. I'll keep all your comments in mind, and thanks, I need all the luck I can get! -Joy

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 06/22/11 10:11
Chapter: Enter Rose

ooooooooo so short! AWWWWW! But good! (That's my little rant!) (^>^)

Author's Response: I knew you'd be the one to complain but yes I'm kinda really busy lately :) next one will be longer I promise!!!

Reviewer: ronhermione15
Date: 06/22/11 9:17
Chapter: In St. Mungo's

Great job!! Looking forward to what will happen to hermione and ron!

Author's Response: Isnt everyone? Hehehe. Thanks for reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Kaiserin
Date: 05/27/11 10:22
Chapter: Disappearances Are Bloody Bothersome

Rock and roll little Potters and Weasleys!
This is bound to be fun!!
Poor Ron though, now Hermione's missing... again!
And little Rose went to the rescue! I certainly hope Scorpious is trustworthy! It's the first chapter you've mentioned him! Yikes!
Gosh!! Soooooo much information and possibilities!!

Author's Response: How will Kaiserin ever survive? You make me feel bad . . . :D

Reviewer: Kaiserin
Date: 05/27/11 8:52
Chapter: I'm Happy (Both of Us Are)

This is sooooooo massive!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't believe this just happened!! You evil, evil, evil author!!
I was soooooo off the mark!!!! Ages off the mark!
Eons off the mark!
I don't know what less likely, Goyle with brains or Ron back from the dead!?
Great call on Shakespeare 'creating' the potion BTW. Funny.

And a very naughty thing to do that 'fake' cliffie! Naughty, naughty writer! LOL! But quite funny nevertheless. Kudos!

Author's Response: :D :D Is someone mad at me, or mad at themselves?

Reviewer: panda_patronus
Date: 05/26/11 14:39
Chapter: In St. Mungo's

Hmmm...interesting! I have to read more to find out what happens next!! BTW: Love the chapter end notes! Made me laugh! thanks for making my day a little more magical! ;)

Author's Response: I'm glad to! Keep reading, PLEASE keep reading!! :D and yes, I am a bit quirky, and where else to show that than my chapter end notes?

Reviewer: ronhermione15
Date: 05/26/11 13:36
Chapter: In St. Mungo's

I really liked this chapter!! I like ready in Hermione and Ron's POV but this is good too!

Author's Response: Ron and Hermione will have spotlights again, trust me. And these POVs will be less serious, as they are teenagers, etc, etc.

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 05/26/11 13:16
Chapter: Disappearances Are Bloody Bothersome

Definitely more than just a's a cliff hanger! Excited to hear information from the "next generation" but im going to miss reading from Ron and Hermione's POV...hope you still include that from time to time! Can't wait for the next chapter! Loved the part about the soulmates...just how I imagine R/H!

Author's Response: There will be POV's from everyone . . . this story has far to go yet! Ron's fake death was a catalyst for what will happen to everyone now . . . and yes, I couldn't help but throw in next generation. The soulmates part I got off of Bones, an awesome tv show. :D

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 05/26/11 11:26
Chapter: Disappearances Are Bloody Bothersome

Yes short, but still very good! Can't wait!

Author's Response: :D im now on summer break . . . rapid update time!!

Reviewer: lunaginnypotterw
Date: 05/11/11 17:03
Chapter: In St. Mungo's

swe-et i like the note i might use it in my end of year speech if u don't mind

Author's Response: what note? I don't mind!! It's like you're quoting me . . . :P flattered!

Reviewer: PoP97
Date: 05/11/11 9:54
Chapter: In St. Mungo's

It's a WOW happy! It's great!! But words, of the bestestest on MNFF!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Bestestest? :D :D :D :D Goyle is gonna just get creepier, TRUST ME.

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