Reviews For My Brave Face
Reviewer: Arial Felchem
Date: 08/23/11 20:43
Chapter: Building Tension, Mounting Turmoil

Really good story, can't wait to read what happens next!

Author's Response: Thanks!! I can't wait to write it!!

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 08/23/11 19:26
Chapter: Building Tension, Mounting Turmoil

Go Hermione, go! I know she can do it : ) I can't believe this story is almost over. I absolutely love reading Scorpius' POV and seeing how much he loves Rose. I am not going to take any quesses because I have no idea what is going to happen next. Can't wait to see in the next chapter!

Author's Response: Of course she can!! I can't believe it either!! I love writing Scorpius' POV!! Wise individual :) -JOY

Reviewer: ravenclaw1997
Date: 08/23/11 14:04
Chapter: Building Tension, Mounting Turmoil

Oh, I love this story! But I hate how you're hurting everybody. But I love how Rose and Scorpius are together! But I hate how Ron's dying. Grr, mixed emotions. >.<

Anyhoo, this story is amazing, no matter how many people you kill/seriously injure/switch POV's while they're lying in Scorpius' arms. Ah, it's just so great! Definitely keep writing; you're wonderful!


Author's Response: Mixed feelings. . . I've done my job well :) By the way love your stuff :) Enjoy the end!! I will kill/seriously injure/switch POV's while they're lying in Scorpius' arms whenever I WANT. :)-Joy

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 08/23/11 13:11
Chapter: Building Tension, Mounting Turmoil

Excellent!! I'm on the edge of my seat!!

Author's Response: You'd better be!!

Reviewer: hjpotter731
Date: 08/10/11 14:33
Chapter: In St. Mungo's

When are you gonna post the next chapter cuz I really love this story and im anxious waiting for it! Please post soon!

Reviewer: hjpotter731
Date: 08/10/11 14:27
Chapter: In St. Mungo's

When are you gonna post the next chapter cuz I really love this story and im anxious waiting for it! Please post soon!

Author's Response: I will post ASAP!!

Reviewer: ravenclaw1997
Date: 08/04/11 8:01
Chapter: Na´vetÚ

This is a really amazing story! I always have a hard time finding good next-gen stories that involve more of the adults as well as the kids, if you know what I mean. I've always loved Ron and Hermione, and I love Rose and Hugo too, so I'm glad this story kind of centers on them. I also ship Rose/Scorpius, and I love how they're portrayed in this story.

You'd better not kill off anybody! That's all I have to say on that subject... Just don't do it.

Keep writing!

~ Manda

Author's Response: This story is a Post-Hogwarts that includes the next-generation, rather than a Next-Generation that includes the trio and everyone else. But I know what you mean :D I love Ron and Hermione also, and I despise it when people ship Harmione. Rose/Scorpius is kinda inevitable . . . it's also really fun to show how they aren't their parents through their affection. I'll try not to :P I will! -Joy

Reviewer: Abalaihon
Date: 08/03/11 22:53
Chapter: Na´vetÚ

This is definitely a favorite series of mine! Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Series? But thanks! I will!

Reviewer: ronhermione15
Date: 08/03/11 21:41
Chapter: In St. Mungo's

Really liked this chapter!! Liked the different POV they made it interesting to read :)

Author's Response: I'm glad! And the different POV is exciting.

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 08/03/11 19:16
Chapter: Na´vetÚ

One of my favorite chapters so far with amazing POVs from the Weasleys...Ron, Hermione & Rose : ) Can't get enough of Scorpius' devotion for Rose and the love between Ron and Hermione. I loved Hermione's inner dialogue after she met her daughter's boyfriend. More, more, more...pretty please!!!

Author's Response: I'm really glad that you're enjoying the POVs. I enjoy writing the contrast between young love and lifelong romance, so thanks for the compliment! I also figured that even the situation couldn't prevent Hermione from having a typical mother moment over her daughter's relationship. I will satisfy your cravings for more of My Brave Face, trust me!

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 08/03/11 16:45
Chapter: Na´vetÚ

Holy crow! This is getting intense!

Author's Response: I hope so!

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/19/11 17:21
Chapter: Mother and Friend

If it weren't so tragic, Ginny's chronology would be funny. If I were the Potters, I'd hate to see an owl coming. The fact that Crabbe was as cunning as he seems to be would be funny also but he's downright dangerous. I was confused about a couple of things. Why does Scorpius call his father by his first name? And, did you give Rose a sister? It was the very last sentence that threw me--had me going 'Huh'. Great chapter.

Author's Response: I imagined that Scorpius would find his father, an ex-Death Eater pureblood wealthy Slytherin with a lot of bad fame, far from an ideal father figure. I imagine that he'd have a better relationship with his mother. I'll expand on that dynamic a little in this story, but this isn't a next-generation story an it accidentally became one, so I aim to focus more on the original generation. My other story, What Winning Won, will not comply with the plot lines an even facts of this fic but it will touch on that more. And oh shoot I meant brother! Damn I need a Beta . . . I will fix that!!

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 07/17/11 14:36
Chapter: Mother and Friend


Author's Response: :)

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 07/17/11 11:07
Chapter: Mother and Friend

Yeah! So excited for a new chapter and Ginny'd POV was interesting! The last sentence is bothering me though...why did Scorpius say "Draco" instead if "My father"?? If you're worried readers wouldn't know who you're referring to I don't think you would have a problem. Praying that Ron gets better and finds his lovely Hermione : ) Can't wait for more!!! PS- Love to see Scorpius' devotion to Rose!

Reviewer: BraveAtHeart706
Date: 07/16/11 20:24
Chapter: Mother and Friend

This is really good... I loved how u put it in Ginny's perspective. Keep writing!! : )

Author's Response: Thanks! I plan to! :)

Reviewer: PoP97
Date: 07/15/11 23:50
Chapter: Mother and Friend

Cumonnn! You're killin' us here, stop cutting across the best part! Still the best work on MN, though. :)

Author's Response: cutting across the best part? ?? And I'm really proud that you say that!! Thanks :D

Reviewer: ronhermione15
Date: 07/15/11 19:12
Chapter: Mother and Friend

Wow!! I really liked this chapter, it was great!! I hope everyone will be okay! Keep up the great job :)

Author's Response: When will the new POV's ever end? :D :D and who knows? And I will, thanks!

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/06/11 10:47
Chapter: Bella Notte

It seems that Crabbe is still alive. The kids have found out some interesting, additional information. I think Crabbe should die for sure and for real and Goyle should too. I don't think any of the kids should die. Their parents have suffered enough. I don't think the survey's too morbid. You're just gathering information. So far, the story line is interesting and believable. For the life of me though, I couldn't figure out who was speaking in the beginning. I didn't figure it out until closer to the end. I'm not sure if Goyle should be dealing with the Malfoy heir. He's liable to get his butt kicked. I doubt the Malfoys are any better to deal with after the war. Great chapter.

Author's Response: It does seem like that, doesn't it? I agree that they should both die, but that may or may not happen. Again, with the kids, tragedy haunts all good deeds, and I don't want any of them to die either, but we'll just have to see. And you may be the only one on that survey thing. :D And recall that the Malfoys are probably very diminished after the war. They've had all of their importance and pride stripped again and again. Goyle is probably convinced that if he kills Scorpius, there will be no retaliation. He's being rather cocky.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/06/11 9:25
Chapter: Enter Rose

I'm with Hermione. You'd think that after Voldemort's defeat and with Harry Potter as Head Auror, the world would be a safer place. And, after all that time of depending on Harry, I'd start to over depend on him. Did I mention that I really like Scorpius as a Ravenclaw? Aren't he and Rose a little young to be dating--or did you say she's a fourth year already? Great chapter.

Author's Response: The world will never be completely safe - that is why we have many heroes in our reality, mythology, fantasy, etc. Harry is just one of them, just like Voldemort was just another danger. And over-depending on a hero is never rare. I like Scorpius as a Ravenclaw too . . . it gives him another dimension, rather than just being an attractive Malfoy that simply didn't end up in Slytherin. Rose is a third year - but she found Scorpius in a time of extreme emotion, so their relationship probably isn't very stable.

Reviewer: Fynnsmom
Date: 07/05/11 17:15
Chapter: Disappearances Are Bloody Bothersome

That was a shocker too. Are you saying that Scorpius Malfoy has been kidnapped too? This is soooo intriguing. I can't wait to see where you take it. I love 'Mini' as a nickname:D I always find other people's perceptions of beauty to be interesting. It is true that beauty is in the eye of the beholder. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Scorpius Malfoy has not been kidnapped. Rose, his girlfriend, has persuaded him to accompany her as they search for her mother. Mini has nickname made me smile :D And I'm trying to make Lily a little too full of the need for beauty to see things clearly. Not all the children of the heroic Potter can be perfect, right? And most people assume the troublemaker from that bunch will be James for his namesake. Why can't the little girl be the one to cause problems?

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