Reviews For Fool Me Twice
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/10/11 6:46
Chapter: The Prosecution's Case

Wonderful chapter! :-)

Reviewer: Tazzy1029
Date: 05/09/11 8:24
Chapter: The Prosecution's Case

Yayyyyy!!! I love this chapter, it's probably my favourite one in the story, I cant wait for next one. I like how you turned it around at the end especially. I also like the hints that you put in that James cares more for Lily than he lets on. :) Update soon :)

Author's Response: Thanks! There will be a lot more interaction between James and Lily as the trial progresses (and a few more witnesses to be called to the stand) so you'll get to see how James' feelings for Lily progress. Unfortunately, it's not all be sunshine and roses ahead.

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 05/08/11 15:59
Chapter: The Prosecution's Case


Reviewer: wauwabee
Date: 05/08/11 15:11
Chapter: The Prosecution's Case

Yay the trial has begun! I love reading trial scenes in stories, and you did a very good job with it! Lestrange is a douche...I'll leave it at that and I'm glad James was able to one-up him. Great chapter, I can't wait for the next one!

Author's Response: Thanks! Unfortunately, Lestrange still has several more witnesses to call, so the trial is far from over and James will have his work cut out for him.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 04/29/11 18:18
Chapter: The Search

Hmm Cannot wait to see how this trial goes... ;-)

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 04/29/11 17:35
Chapter: The Search

Oooooo! Love it very much!!

Reviewer: wauwabee
Date: 04/29/11 15:16
Chapter: The Search

Ahh! I really, really wan to know what this object is. I keep imagining something that could be a Horcrux, but I have no idea why. I really liked this though, I love how everything is changing for James, his perspective and how he views Lily. I'm really excited to read about the trial too! Good work on this!

Author's Response: Thanks! The object is going to remain a mystery for a while, but I'm always happy to hear guesses. Not that I will confirm your guess one way or another, though... :) I always thought that James probably had no idea what it was like for Muggleborns before dating Lily (kind of the the same way Ron knew nothing about the Muggle world before befriending Hermione), so I'm trying to keep that aspect of canon in this story. The beginning of the trial should be coming soon (that chapter is now in the queue).

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 04/29/11 15:09
Chapter: The Search

great chapter :) frank is making me suspicious...

Reviewer: Livigurl101
Date: 04/26/11 13:10
Chapter: A Man I Used to Love

Hahahahahha he's JEALOUS!!!! I LOVE jealousJames, in case you didn't know. I'm guessing the next chapter will be the trial... and I've read enough books and such to know that Lily will be guilty as charged. But then, BAM! There will be a retrial or rebuttal or whatever and she'll be cleared of all charges! Ha! I still loooooove this, in case you couldn't tell.

Author's Response: I'm glad you still love the story. And don't give up hope on the trial quite yet, it might go well for Lily. Or it might not. It's really anyone's guess at this point.

Reviewer: Livigurl101
Date: 04/26/11 12:48
Chapter: The Rising Dark

Dun dun duuuuuuuunnnnn Moldy-Voldy's back! I liked this chapter, except for Marlene. I dunno, just, I feel like she liiiiiikkes James, and that's just not okay with me. Because, then, I get worried abt oh no! What if this is the kind of story where they'll (James and Lily) will be uber stupid and not see that they're in love with each other and then James will go somewhere with or start dating Marlene and then Lily will be hurt and then i'll be angry. And yeah. That's how my brain works...

Author's Response: Yes, Voldemort is back. Or, at least, he's behind a lot of the bad things that have happened and will happen. I don't usually like to give things away, but I will tell you not to be worried about Marlene. She and James are just friends.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 04/18/11 5:09
Chapter: A Man I Used to Love

Very interesting...Wonder how this trial is going to work out! Looking forward to the next update :-)

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 04/17/11 19:08
Chapter: A Man I Used to Love

Great!! Love it!!

Reviewer: wauwabee
Date: 04/17/11 19:01
Chapter: A Man I Used to Love

So, I really like Lily, and I really like James. And I like that Lily is beginning to trust James. I HATE Lestrange, and I think Bellatrix attacked Frank....because she's a bitch and that sounds like something she would do. Also, I really like this story because it's so different!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like Lily and James and the story. I was so worried about writing it because it is so AU and different from all the things I've read. But I'm still trying to keep it as canon as possible (which is an odd thing to say about an AU).

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 04/17/11 12:04
Chapter: The Death of Remus Lupin

great chapter. i liked that you included lily's memory of seeing Remus and how she described her relatonship with Remus. I also like how lily is beginning to finally trust james :)

Author's Response: Thanks! There will be several more flashbacks from Lily's POV as the story progresses, so you'll see more about her relationship with Remus and Frank.

Reviewer: jamlil
Date: 04/10/11 10:30
Chapter: The Rising Dark's gr8.keep writing

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 04/08/11 16:15
Chapter: The Rising Dark

Yay for updates!! As always looking forward to the next one :-)

Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter is in the queue so hopefully it will be up soon.

Reviewer: SimpleMinds
Date: 04/08/11 15:30
Chapter: The Rising Dark

Well! I'm really enjoying this so far, it's perhaps one of the most truly original fics i've read in a long time, and i really like some of the little tics your characters have, particularly the Mckinnons.

And i do like that you killed Lucius Malfoy off too.

I await the next chapter with baited breath!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked the little oddities of my characters. I like writing about characters we don't know anything about (like the McKinnons) so that I can add such details.

Reviewer: wauwabee
Date: 04/07/11 20:12
Chapter: The Rising Dark

I loved this chapter! The back story Dumbledore gave was very interesting. And I really liked the slight cliff hanger at the end! The plot thickens!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! The plot is thickening, and Dumbledore will continue to show up every now and then.

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 04/07/11 14:36
Chapter: The Rising Dark

Wow!!!!! W. O. W. !!!

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 04/07/11 13:27
Chapter: The Rising Dark

nice to see dumbledore in this :)

Author's Response: Thanks! He's going to continue to show up every now and then.

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