Reviews For Fool Me Twice
Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 06/14/11 12:56
Chapter: The Truth Won't Set You Free

Exciting chapter...Always keeping us guessing :-) Cannot wait for the next one

Author's Response: Thanks! Nothing will be quite what it seems, and Lily still has a few secrets she hasn't shared yet.

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 06/14/11 12:32
Chapter: The Truth Won't Set You Free

amazing chapter!

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 06/14/11 12:00
Chapter: The Truth Won't Set You Free

Excellent! On the edge of my seat!

Author's Response: Thanks! Always enjoy getting people excited about the story.

Reviewer: wauwabee
Date: 06/11/11 23:26
Chapter: The Death of Remus Lupin

I knew it! Lily killed Malfoy! I don't know if I;m happy or not though. If it were me I would have castrated the git, but killing is much cleaner i guess....I sound crazy. Anyway, I am interested to read how James reacts to this news. And as usual, I'm interested in what will happen in trial!

Author's Response: Thanks. I agree that Malfoy was a git, but James is going to have some trouble dealing with the fact that Lily actually killed someone. Still, he doesn't have the full story yet (and won't for a while, because Lily has quite a few secrets she hasn't shared yet).

Reviewer: Sdogg
Date: 06/10/11 17:04
Chapter: Believe in Me

I LOVE this story. Quite the cliffhanger, I have no idea what will happen next! And great job with this AU, sometimes they upset me but this one is very believable!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like the AU. I was a little worried about positing such as AU story, so it is always nice to hear that people like it.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 06/10/11 14:26
Chapter: Believe in Me

Hmm Interesting ending...I really enjoy reading this fic now :-)

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 06/10/11 14:00
Chapter: Believe in Me

oh no! did lily really kill him! or is she trying to protect someone! please update soon...great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks! Lily will tell (at least some of) her story in the next chapter, so you can have some idea of what happened. But she's still got secrets.

Reviewer: inessa
Date: 06/10/11 13:15
Chapter: Believe in Me

I KNEW IT! Lily killed Malfoy. I can't wait to know what James is going to do with this information. Update soon

Author's Response: Thanks! James is going to have a difficult time figuring out what to do with this information. And, of course, nothing is quite as simple as it seems, so he's only going to get some of the story.

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 06/10/11 10:49
Chapter: Believe in Me

Clif hanger...........awwwwwwwww post soon!! (^>^)

Reviewer: Lipstickgirl
Date: 06/01/11 21:00
Chapter: As My Faith Begins to Crumble


Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/31/11 15:38
Chapter: As My Faith Begins to Crumble

Very interesting! I cannot wait to see how all of this ties together!

Author's Response: Thanks! The next few chapters should provide a lot of answers... and more questions.

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 05/31/11 12:52
Chapter: As My Faith Begins to Crumble

and the plot thickens :)

Author's Response: Thanks! The plot is indeed thickening.

Reviewer: wauwabee
Date: 05/31/11 11:50
Chapter: As My Faith Begins to Crumble

Ohhhhh dang! So I'm betting Lily did kill Malfoy, bit maybe out of self-defense or maybe she was saving someone else? I don't know. But I'm loving this story even more with every chapter! Keep it up!

Author's Response: Thanks! Well, everything will be revealed by the end of the story, but there is still a lot more mystery left to solve. But I'm always happy to hear your theories!

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 05/30/11 23:00
Chapter: As My Faith Begins to Crumble

Oooooh! I think I know what might have maybe happened sort of! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm always interested to hear people's theories. The next chapter is in the queue, so should hopefully be up soon.

Reviewer: The Kneazle
Date: 05/22/11 6:43
Chapter: The Death of Remus Lupin

This is an excellent story. I can tell you've really thought everything out, and I love where it's going. I cannot wait to read more!

The only thing I would suggest is that you employ the use of a beta/copy editor to catch all the little spelling mistakes. I understand how it happens- you get too familiar with the text and read what's in your head and not on the screen, it happens to everyone. But it does disrupt the flow for the reader and having someone look over it before you submit would make the story much more enjoyable.

But again, amazing story. A really refreshing change in the L/J romance section!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I do probably need a beta. I'm just new to Mugglenet so haven't quite figured out how everything here works. But I'll look into that.

Reviewer: wauwabee
Date: 05/20/11 17:11
Chapter: Motives

Oh my gosh, I loved this. I feel like it was Regulus under the mask. But, there really is no way of knowing...yet.

Author's Response: Thanks! I always like getting guesses about the plot, and don't worry, you'll find out who was under the mask in a few chapters.

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 05/20/11 16:51
Chapter: Motives


Author's Response: You'll find out in a few chapters...

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 05/20/11 12:11
Chapter: The Death of Remus Lupin

great chapter :) i love how realistic the trial sounds! cant wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/20/11 11:33
Chapter: Motives

Cool chapter! I get really excited when I see another update :-)

Author's Response: Thanks! I get really excited when I've finished a chapter and can post it! :)

Reviewer: jamlil
Date: 05/17/11 22:18
Chapter: The Prosecution's Case

it was realy good keep writing.

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