Reviews For Fool Me Twice
Reviewer: StarsApartlover
Date: 02/24/11 21:26
Chapter: The Death of Remus Lupin

Different type of story. I like it so far. Keep up the good work

Author's Response: Thanks, I hope you continue to like the story.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 02/18/11 15:22
Chapter: First Impressions

Well written chapter, curious to see where this is going.

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm always glad to know people are liking the story.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 02/18/11 15:17
Chapter: Prisoners of Madness

Not typically something I would read, but I think it is starting to grow on me... :-)

Author's Response: Thanks. I've got a lot of people saying that to me, so I hope it is a good sign.

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 02/18/11 15:10
Chapter: First Impressions

great chapter...i like how you kind of still have lily hate james like in cannon and i am absolutley loving your portrayal of lily :)

Author's Response: Well, Lily did hate James in the beginning in canon, and I don't think either of them would have changed much yet, not without the influence of each other to make Lily loosen up and James start thinking about what it is like for people who *aren't* wealthy purbloods.

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 02/18/11 15:10
Chapter: The Death of Remus Lupin

Hmm very interesting first chapter...I think I am going to see where this one goes

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you'll like where it is going...

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 02/13/11 9:18
Chapter: The Death of Remus Lupin

amazing chapter :) your characters are so well written despite this being au the characters still act cannon...and all the characters even minor characters are really well written. please update soon :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you think the characters act like canon. I know it is AU but I'm trying really hard to keep everyone in character.

Reviewer: Livigurl101
Date: 02/10/11 17:33
Chapter: The Death of Remus Lupin

Oh my gosh. I just realized--Remus is dead :o I think I just died a little

Author's Response: Well... someone had to die otherwise it wouldn't be a very good murder mystery. But yes, I was sad to have killed off Remus, too.

Reviewer: littlewolf
Date: 02/08/11 19:47
Chapter: The Death of Remus Lupin

i like your writing style =) the way you ended your chapter is very powerful.

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you continue to enjoy the story.

Reviewer: Livigurl101
Date: 02/07/11 19:12
Chapter: The Death of Remus Lupin

Ooooooohhh ohhhhhhh oooohhhh how I love this so far. You should update soon cuz it's amazing. And it got me hooked. In one chapter. Awesome. It's different too. Obviously AU, but I was wondering. Is it set in the seventies or early eighties or is it current or does it not really have a time frame? Or is it a surprise? I was just curious. Anyways, that totally rocked! Can't wait for the next ch

Author's Response: Thanks! I always like getting people hooked. I hope you continue to like it as the plot unfolds. It is set in the late 80s (Lily and James are both in their late 20s). That becomes more clear as the story progresses.

Reviewer: lily_death_flower
Date: 02/07/11 14:01
Chapter: The Death of Remus Lupin

wow this is sooo different than anything else but its really good so far...please update soon :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, it is pretty different from other things (probably because it is so AU), but I hope people like it anyway.

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