Different type of story. I like it so far. Keep up the good work
Author's Response: Thanks, I hope you continue to like the story.
Well written chapter, curious to see where this is going.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm always glad to know people are liking the story.
Not typically something I would read, but I think it is starting to grow on me... :-)
Author's Response: Thanks. I've got a lot of people saying that to me, so I hope it is a good sign.
great chapter...i like how you kind of still have lily hate james like in cannon and i am absolutley loving your portrayal of lily :)
Author's Response: Well, Lily did hate James in the beginning in canon, and I don't think either of them would have changed much yet, not without the influence of each other to make Lily loosen up and James start thinking about what it is like for people who *aren't* wealthy purbloods.
Hmm very interesting first chapter...I think I am going to see where this one goes
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you'll like where it is going...
amazing chapter :) your characters are so well written despite this being au the characters still act cannon...and all the characters even minor characters are really well written. please update soon :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you think the characters act like canon. I know it is AU but I'm trying really hard to keep everyone in character.
Oh my gosh. I just realized--Remus is dead :o I think I just died a little
Author's Response: Well... someone had to die otherwise it wouldn't be a very good murder mystery. But yes, I was sad to have killed off Remus, too.
i like your writing style =) the way you ended your chapter is very powerful.
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you continue to enjoy the story.
Ooooooohhh ohhhhhhh oooohhhh how I love this so far. You should update soon cuz it's amazing. And it got me hooked. In one chapter. Awesome. It's different too. Obviously AU, but I was wondering. Is it set in the seventies or early eighties or is it current or does it not really have a time frame? Or is it a surprise? I was just curious. Anyways, that totally rocked! Can't wait for the next ch
Author's Response: Thanks! I always like getting people hooked. I hope you continue to like it as the plot unfolds. It is set in the late 80s (Lily and James are both in their late 20s). That becomes more clear as the story progresses.
wow this is sooo different than anything else but its really good so far...please update soon :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, it is pretty different from other things (probably because it is so AU), but I hope people like it anyway.