Good story, can't wait to read more:). Hope you write more soooon!
I LOOOOOVED THIIIS! BTW, I'm Claraowl, and if I ever figure out how to submit a story and it gets approved, Promise me you'll read it! PROMISE!!!!!!! Okay, thanks!
Author's Response: I'm glad you loved it! I will DEFINITELY read your story whenever you do end up submitting it (and i think that mugglenent has some links on their website that can help you with that process.) Thanks for the kind words. :D
“Ron” he thought as he turned around and headed back to his compartment. “I hope he’s in Gryffindor…”
Oh my god that made me squeal
Author's Response: oh, thanks for the compliment... i think! :D
This is my second time reading this story and I fall in love with every time. You did a awesome job.
Author's Response: I'm so flattered by the lovely review, I really appreciate it. Thanks so much for the kind words. Between you and me, I'm in the works for another ron/hermione fic...but it'll take some time. I'm really excited to get it all down on paper, and eventually flesh it out on a computer screen. :D
This is my second favorite story on Mugglenet!!! I absolutely adore R/Hr fics because they are my favorite couple and favorite characters! Please write more because you are a fabulous writer!!
Author's Response: YAY!! thats awesome though, i'm so glad you loved it. :) yeah, they're definitely my fav too, as you can probably tell. i'm working on something right now, but i had lost my flashdrive so now i have to start over. sad times....but i'll get to it eventually, i promise. thanks for the review :D
Awww! Perfect way to end it. You should definitely write more R/Hr fics. Great job! :)
Author's Response: yay, thanks for the compliment, much appreciated. :D
This was definitely the best chapter! Although the quote "Where else am I going to go?" made me giggle because it sounds like the Twilight movie. Very sweet morning after the proposal/flashback...thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: umm, im afraid to say this for fear of being jumped by certain people...but i sort of "borrowed" that line from that unmentionable movie, because i liked it so much. i thought it fit for it, though, so i guess it really doesnt matter where i got it from...thanks so much for the compliments too, im glad you liked it. :D
Just found this story, it is great. Please keep writing.
Author's Response: thanks much, and i definitely will. :D
... aww! This was so adorable, and intense, and... wow. Just wow. I'm crying and grinning all at once! If this had been your hundredth HP fic, this story would be amazing; seeing as it's your first, it's mind boggling. You're style is engaging, your characters are on par, and your emotional connections are... well, see the wow's above. It was a bit confusing at times, but that was a great way to portray their thoughts, since so rarely do people think linearly to begin with. All in all, great story! I hope to see more of your writing in the future.
Author's Response: wow, i can't begin to say my appreciation for that lovely review. its great to hear, it really is encouraging to a budding writer like me. thanks so much, thats just amazing of you to say. :)
Loved that Ron thought that their interlocked fingers was the most intimate experience he had ever experienced. Very romantic.
Please please please write more :)
Author's Response: thanks so much, i really, really appreciate it. i definitely will, i do have a couple more ideas, i just have to get them on paper first. :D
Love it! :)
Author's Response: thats awesome, thank you very much! the review is much appreciated. ;)
oh.. its end?? :(
i really loved it.. hope you'll come up with great story next time too.. very good job :)
Author's Response: i've got a couple more ideas up my sleeve, but first i've got to write them, and that might take a while. thanks for the review. :)
I really loved your story!! Thanks for taking the time to write it!! :)
Author's Response: Thank you guys for reading and reviewing, i wouldnt have done it if it wasnt for any of you in the first place. This was really fun to write overall, i loved really getting inside their heads and really just writing them from the heart....good times. ;D
Author's Response: oh thanks so much, i'm glad you like it. :D
Author's Response: oh thanks so much, i'm glad you like it. :D
Sooo if they are at shell cottage a year later, Ron bought the ring and kept a secret for a year??? Doesn't seem likely. Cute chapter, but again it is all over the place and isn't making sense. Hope that as more chapters are added it will all come together, thanks for sharing!
Author's Response: no, i don't think that he kept it secret for that long, it all depends on when he and hermione were planning on going to austrailia to set her parents memories back, and i leave that time period to the readers imagination. even though i really didnt touch on this point, i could see hermione going back to finish school, (after the summer though, so theres a chance to rebuild.) so during the summer (maybe) would be when they go, but its entirely possible that they went some other time before their spring holiday, so im not entirely sure on that one. i hope it makes sense later, but i've only got one more chapter left, so we'll see how that goes. thanks for the review. :)
How sweet! Enough with the dark chapters, right? Really enjoyed the "fluff" in this one, nice break from the intensity of the others. The "take it off" bit was great!
Only one more chapter..... :(
Author's Response: yeah, i do like to sprinkle a bit of fluff in there every now and then for good measure. :) thanks, i'd have to describe the last chapter as very bittersweet, and near the beginning of the "end", i'd have to emphasize the bitter part. dont worry, i really dont think i ended it on a depressing note or anything, just a realistic one. i hope u guys like it though...
I loved it.
Author's Response: thanks much for the kind review. :D
That was really good!! loved it!!
Author's Response: awesome, that's great to hear, thanks a lot. :)
awww.. this was loveliest chapter of this story.. you've done great job.. well done !
im glad you went against the tradition in the scene where Ron asks Hermione to take off and she takes it in wrong way.. and Ron clarifies her.. see I dont like when people put smut in the relationship of R.Hr.. I really appreciate you for this.. keep it up :)
Author's Response: thanks! tee hee, smut. :) i definitely agree with you though. i just dont think that ron/hermione would be doing that at this step in their relationship, you know what i mean? thanks again for the awesome review. there's still one more chapter to go, and we'll see how that goes. :D
I read this as soon as it came out but I decided to wait to give my review.
It is awesome. Really emotional, bringing all those scenes back.... the Manor, the first time they met (nice touch, by the way), the dance at the wedding etc. But all of that was a bit confusing. Too many thoughts, too much emotions in such a short chapter (although it is the longest so far).
Maybe you could have just developed Hermione's with this one, described more their feelings with in the memories and after it was over.
Just a thought. It was great, though.
Can't wait for the next one!!!
Author's Response: thanks for the suggestions, i could defintely add more of hermione's thoughts to it, and i'll be sure to keep that in mind when i go through it again. yeah, at first when i was looking this chapter over before i submitted it, i was wondering if there was too much stuff in it, but then i realized (just in my opinion of course) that it was supposed to be all crazy and confusing, because at the moment (in the manor that is,) everything is just happening at once, and there's all of these emotions then all of these memories come flooding forth.... and its just chaos in general. :) but then again, thats just me, and i know that there's always room for improvement, and reviews are meant to present suggestions to the author in order to make the writing better, so thanks again for the great review!