Reviews For Swimsuit Quidditch
Reviewer: welshdevondragon
Date: 01/21/11 7:14
Chapter: Swimsuit Quidditch

That was brilliant. Laugh out loud funny, and very, very Ginny to be that daring in front of her siblings and for Harry to have to go along with it and not let her win, as it were. And also bless you for mentioning Humphrey Lyttleton. He was a great man and certainly master of this particular genre. He is very, very sorely missed.

Author's Response:
Thanks. I can see Ginny constantly pushing her brothers buttons, and Harry is another way to do it.

I was trying for the fine traditions of Humph. In the words of the great man himself: "So, while Samantha nips out to enjoy a portion of winkles in cider…”

Reviewer: macheel
Date: 01/20/11 10:44
Chapter: Swimsuit Quidditch

This story made me so angry........angry that there was not more. I loved the story. It made me laugh out loud. I think Ginny would be just like that. She tough and does what she wants dispite what her brothers say. That sound like a fun little game that I will have to try. I love all of your writing.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I find humour extremely difficult to write, making even one person laugh is an achievement. Ginny is tough and quick witted and Harry has displayed a wry, dry, and often self mocking sense of humour. He’s smart enough to verbally spar with Ginny. -N-

Reviewer: acs09
Date: 01/20/11 9:08
Chapter: Swimsuit Quidditch

I really liked your story! I think you did stay true to the characters and I agree with what you responded to one of the reviews. Since time has passed I do think things would be more relaxed and happy among them. Overall I enjoyed it and laughed in basically all of the story :D

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I see this as the beginnings of a more relaxed stage in Harry and Ginny’s relationship. Ginny is a Quidditch professional (in the light of this story I hesitate to use those words) and Harry is an Auror and four years after the war life is becoming settled. According to my timeline, they are engaged (as are Ron and Hermione), so I should have used fiancée, not girlfriend. -N-

Reviewer: chaser5
Date: 01/19/11 17:35
Chapter: Swimsuit Quidditch

this was an interesting story. for the most part each character stays similar to the books. the disclaimer was there but i found it to be a tad bit sexual-if one were to look into it.

Author's Response: I’m a big fan of the humour of the double entendre (most Brits are). I’ve heard a lot worse on early evening radio, but I was concerned that this would not be to everyone’s taste. -N-

Reviewer: minervassister
Date: 01/19/11 6:04
Chapter: Swimsuit Quidditch

Wow! This takes Quidditch related humour into a completely new league.
Could have been written by Fred and George!
Well done.

Author's Response: Thanks, after a lot of battle tales, conflict and combat I needed to write something like this. I'm just glad that some people find it funny. -N-

Author's Response: Thanks, after a lot of battle tales, conflict and combat I needed to write something like this. I'm just glad that some people find it funny. -N-

Reviewer: September December
Date: 01/18/11 21:00
Chapter: Swimsuit Quidditch

Awwww! This fic is really funny, and your Harry and Ginny are adorable. :)

Author's Response: Thanks, I’m glad that I could make you laugh. -N-

Reviewer: goldylocks1201
Date: 01/18/11 18:00
Chapter: Swimsuit Quidditch

That made my day. Thanks for that funny story. I really appreciated the innuendos.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Innuendo? They were talking about Quidditch, weren’t they? -N-

Reviewer: iwishicouldwrite
Date: 01/18/11 16:36
Chapter: Swimsuit Quidditch

hilarious!! Love the harry and ginny banter, they make such a nice couple :)

Author's Response: They do, it’s as though they’re made for each other – oh, that’s because they are. (-: -N-

Reviewer: MagicMandy
Date: 01/18/11 15:54
Chapter: Swimsuit Quidditch

This story was very enjoyable and amusing. I found the puns amusing

Author's Response: Thank you. -N-

Reviewer: Lost_Robin
Date: 01/18/11 14:13
Chapter: Swimsuit Quidditch

I LOVED it!!

Author's Response: Thank you. -N-

Reviewer: phillipcrain
Date: 01/18/11 13:42
Chapter: Swimsuit Quidditch

well I thought this was hilarious!!! I was trying not to cry I was laughing so hard!

Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad that I could make you laugh. -N-

Reviewer: DobbyDeath
Date: 01/18/11 13:40
Chapter: Swimsuit Quidditch

hey i liked the story, but you sort of change some of the characters personalitys. like harry and giiyn would never act like that in front of everyone. and ginny wouldnt say that underwaer thing in front of her parents. i also think that if ginny was doing that (ron, percy, bill and charlie) would most likly punch him in the face. js, good story, but dont change the characters.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I don’t think that I have changed their personalities. I deliberately dated this on Ginny’s twentieth birthday. Harry is twenty one and it is over four years since the battle, and five since they first kissed. Ron was (fairly) relaxed about Harry and Ginny during DH, he matured enormously during DH and he, too is in a stable, loving relationship (with Hermione). If anyone can control Bill and Charlie (who weren’t happy) it’s Ginny. -N-

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