Reviews For The Other Potter
Reviewer: Hplover0695
Date: 06/08/11 12:39
Chapter: The Annual Battle of Good Vs. Evil

This story is great! Sorry I haven't reviewed until now, but I just found this story this morning and have spent my day reading it...yay lazy days :) Please keep this story up-I like that it's fairly canon, but with a twist, and really enjoy reading it. I just have one nit-picky correction for this chapter-about a third if the way in, It says "I saw Luna and Harry leave, looking for something in Gryffindor Tower." In Deathly Hallows they actually go to Ravenclaw's common room. Sorry about being nit-picky, an keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Oh, right! I kind of wrote that chapter at like, two in the morning, but thanks for telling me! I'm incredibly nit-picky myself, since I reread the sixth and seventh HP books about five times to make the story work. I'm glad it's summer too... but after June's over, I'm going to be pretty busy. Lucky I have a laptop and a hotel with wireless, huh? Thanks for the review! :)

Reviewer: lunar-eclipse
Date: 06/08/11 12:34
Chapter: In Hiding, BRB

(I would have reviewed last chapter but I wasn't logged in so I'm reviewing this one)
I luv your story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I thought it would be all stereotypical and clichč but it isnt. It's super unique and REALLY good!!
I am now making it a favorite story
(sorry I'm spaz-tacular. I get it from my... Well, everyone in my family basically)

Author's Response: Don't worry- I'm spaz-tacular too, sometimes, depending on how much coffee I've had. I'm also glad you think it isn't stereotypical, since I HATE stereotypes... :)

Reviewer: hpgploversforever
Date: 06/08/11 10:04
Chapter: The Annual Battle of Good Vs. Evil

Wow that was amazing. Cant waitto see what els happens.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: grangergirl35
Date: 06/08/11 8:42
Chapter: The Annual Battle of Good Vs. Evil

Really good chapter!! keep up the hard work!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 06/08/11 6:45
Chapter: The Annual Battle of Good Vs. Evil

Spine tingling! Sad and wonderful at the same time! Can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: Thanks! More is on the way!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 06/08/11 5:48
Chapter: The Annual Battle of Good Vs. Evil

Great chapter! I really wish that Snape didn't have to die though :-/ Cannot wait for the next chapter

Author's Response: Thanks! And don't we all? :'( I honestly think the JKR picked who died out of a hat.

Reviewer: Jessabelle
Date: 06/08/11 1:00
Chapter: The Annual Battle of Good Vs. Evil

ooooh! i was almost expecing her to just blurt it out and tell harry she was his sister. Im glad she still cares for snape and that he took her out of the battle because her cares about her.
when she though he as going to turn her over i was just thinking no he wont silly no he wont!!!!
As always I cant wait for more.
your storys no 1 fan :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I tried to fit all of the battle in one chapter, but it just seemed better to leave off where I did. I'm really glad you liked it, because even though it's one of my favorite chapters, it was very difficult to write! :) Snape is amazing!!

Reviewer: HP_fangirl97
Date: 06/05/11 17:50
Chapter: The Truth About Me

ahhhh, well im addicted to Orange Fanta, (i know, it's a soda, but its better than coke

Author's Response: And there's nothing at all wrong with that. My parents are Diet Coke People, but they provide Dr. Pepper, so we live with it. Well, tolerate it. You should have seen my dad at the movies when he discovered that the only theater in town was a Pepsi Only Zone... I have incriminating pictures of that. :)

Reviewer: HP_fangirl97
Date: 06/02/11 22:21
Chapter: The Time at Shell Cottage

I love hermione's part in Voldemort is going down! And I wish I liked coffee, but sadly, no.

Author's Response: It is kind of an acquired taste... I'm addicted, though. :)

Reviewer: arnold_the_pygmy_puff
Date: 05/31/11 19:33
Chapter: The Time at Shell Cottage

I'm so excited!! Update soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! Updating now!

Reviewer: hpgploversforever
Date: 05/31/11 17:56
Chapter: The Time at Shell Cottage

Can't wait for the next chapter. Please post as fast as you can. I'm dieing to hear how the next chapter goes.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm enjoying this myself... Posting today! Sorry about the wait last time, it took three weeks to get through the queue. Anyone have any ideas why? :) Ah, well, at least it's up now!

Reviewer: MaraudingMarauders
Date: 05/31/11 15:42
Chapter: The Time at Shell Cottage

Oh wow, I cannot believe this fic is almost over! Love it :-)

Author's Response: I know! I'm having trouble with that myself... but I am starting another one, so when Rose's story is finished, keep your eyes peeled. :) Thanks!

Reviewer: Jessabelle
Date: 05/31/11 14:58
Chapter: The Time at Shell Cottage

wow what a gret chapter. It was brillently written. you fit Rose in with the story line so well.
the little bit about missing simon was great and her feelings about again not telling harry who she was.
i cant wait for the next chapter. i can tell it will be a big one! Battle of hogwarts!!!!!!!!!!!
PLease get her and simon togather, and i hope you dont let her tell harry who she is until after he defeats vodlie wont it be dramatic when she thinks he's dead?!
excited for more!!!!
i cant wait!!!!!!!!
ps. pease dont take to long!

Author's Response: I'll try not to take tooooooo long. I'm submitting the next chapter on Thursday- no wireless where I am at the moment. :( Thanks!

Reviewer: Twiilight HP
Date: 05/31/11 11:17
Chapter: The Time at Shell Cottage

I lurrve how you incorporated the books in ur story.. it feels so natural. Rose is like 'been there, done that.'
This story also shows Snape's sensitive side convincingly.
I love your story, and update soon..

Author's Response: Thanks! I will update about Thursday! Thanks!

Reviewer: AbberGadabers101
Date: 05/31/11 9:32
Chapter: The Time at Shell Cottage

Great story!!! Wow, wow, and yet another wow!! Please post the next chapter soon!

Author's Response: I will post the next chapter sometime around Thursday evening... Until then, doing time at the grandparents'. They dont have wireless and their computer is from, like, 1912. Soooo.... yep. Thanks for all three wows!

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 05/31/11 5:27
Chapter: The Time at Shell Cottage

Pins and needles! I can't wait!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Ravenclaws-Angel
Date: 05/22/11 11:43
Chapter: The Truth About Me

Wow! I never thought of this! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Great story!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: ReginaPotter
Date: 05/17/11 15:50
Chapter: The Truth About Me

Hey:D I was thinking about adding another character to my story, Voldemort's child. Do you think I will succed with a story like that?
BTW this story is cool, I really like it!

Author's Response: Giving Voldemort a kid? Go for it! Your limit is only your nerve and your creativity- as I'm sure Fred and George would say. I have, on several occasions, pondered giving Voldemort offspring. I think it would be pretty interesting. BTW Thanks! And good luck!

Reviewer: ooCathrynoo
Date: 05/17/11 13:31
Chapter: The Exodus From Malfoy Manor

I don't mind having the repetition. Plus, it's great having Rose added into the mix! :)

Author's Response: Yeah, that was fun! It was definitely intense to write, though, because I was rereading the chapter and typing at the same time... and you guys were lucky, because originally, she was going to escape- that is, until I realized that she would never ditch Luna and Ollivander. So, yeah. Heehee.

Author's Response: Yeah, that was fun! It was definitely intense to write, though, because I was rereading the chapter and typing at the same time... and you guys were lucky, because originally, she was going to escape- that is, until I realized that she would never ditch Luna and Ollivander. So, yeah. Heehee.

Reviewer: Sassy508
Date: 05/14/11 15:32
Chapter: Then Fall Ceasar

WOW. .......that left me speechless

Author's Response: Mission Accomplished.

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