Reviews For Fire
Reviewer: iwishicouldwrite
Date: 01/11/11 7:25
Chapter: A Slytherin's Sense of Self-Preservation

that was great! I love how you highlighted her inner battle between slytherin self-preservation and her envy of gryffindor courage. i like how the greengrass sisters seem different from the other slytherins, it makes me glad that draco ends up with astoria.

Author's Response: Oh, thank you!! Draco marrying Astoria is what led me to wanting to write a Greengrass story in the first place! I personally think he changed (at least a little bit) after the Battle at Hogwarts. So, I wanted Daphne and Astoria to be a little different. I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: xxbabewithbrainsxx
Date: 01/10/11 23:21
Chapter: A Slytherin's Sense of Self-Preservation

At last! I really like the last sentence--particularly as you had a lot of problems with it and everything--and I also really love the title. It was lovely beta'ing your work and I'd love to do it again.

One thing, though: isn't it complete already? Because the status on Mugglenet says that it's a WIP. Not that I mind--I can't wait to read more if there is more. And if there isn't, well done on a very well written oneshot.

~Soraya~

Author's Response: Thank you and I was so glad to finally settle on a last sentence that I was ok with!! Well, I decided to make it a WIP because I started writing another one shot that I think would go really great with this one. Thanks again.

Reviewer: KatieDaly
Date: 01/10/11 23:19
Chapter: A Slytherin's Sense of Self-Preservation

Wow i absolutely love it! It's so nice reading stuff from Daphne's point of view. That's exactly how I imagined her aswell! I can't wait to read more! well done!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! :)

You must login (register) to review.
Information
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.


We have stories and authors in this archive.

:

RSS
Choose Theme:
SOCIAL MEDIA
     
MOST RECENT
Autumn At The Castle by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
The 'treat' of autumn's glorious beauty is inevitably follow by the 'trick'...
The Youngest Death Eaters: Year III by DestinyMoonStar 6th-7th Years
Year 3 A year of hard choices and tough talks: Destiny learns about...
Out of the Blue by Secret Marauder 90 1st-2nd Years
This story weaves the tale of James and Lily from the day they met right up...
FEATURED
Five Christmases by hestiajones 1st-2nd Years
It took four Christmases for Andromeda Black and Ted Tonks to get together...
Coming Alive by The owl 6th-7th Years
Leanne Gamp hadn't wanted to be at that party, even though it was Christmas...
Graves by Oregonian 1st-2nd Years
In December of 1997, Harry visits his parents' graves in Godric's Hollow and...
CATEGORIES