Reviewer: Fearthainn
Date: 02/25/11 20:21
Chapter: Chapter 5

I really like your story when are you gonna update it because I really want to know

Author's Response: I'm really glad you're enjoying the story. I'm updating sporadically, trying to get a new chapter up at least every couple of weeks, but I've been a bit stuck on this one. A new chapter should be up within the next couple of days though.

Reviewer: madhumakhi
Date: 02/13/11 19:43
Chapter: Chapter 5

Nice story so far. BTW have you given Remus Harry's destiny? It'll be fun to imagine Remus as harry.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Remus isn't taking Harry's place, but he definitely has an important role to play in the future.

Reviewer: Fearthainn
Date: 02/07/11 15:46
Chapter: Chapter 1

When are you updating

Reviewer: L A Moody
Date: 01/18/11 21:03
Chapter: Chapter 1

Very captivating twist, can't wait to see where the next chapters take us. Lots of great detail to ground the reader in the canon timeline and bond with the Remus we already know before being plunged into the alternate reality. Using the term “too” to illustrate Remus at the opening was sheer genius. Unsaid, it also poignantly echoes the way in which life as a werewolf was often an overwhelming experience for him. Adored the way in which he noted that Tonks was smiling even as she kissed him; it's just the sort of detail that Remus would cherish. Uncertain about all the changes from past tense to the present, though. Are the memories/flashbacks supposed to be in present tense while the main narrative is in standard past tense?

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