Reviewer: bellyjeanie
Date: 02/12/11 20:29
Chapter: Throw in a Little Fun...

Very cute. I actually sang it!

Reviewer: FawkesToTheRescue
Date: 01/16/11 15:04
Chapter: Throw in a Little Fun...

Ha, cute, Bella!

:) Megan

Reviewer: the opaleye
Date: 01/12/11 20:52
Chapter: Throw in a Little Fun...

Bella! Wow. You have definitely aced this one. The rhythm and flow of the original nursery rhyme is still in tact and it reads like a charm. I think you picked the perfect subject matter as well xD The twins and their antics certainly match the cheeky feel of the poem. Also, I love the way you were able to work actual narrative into the poem. Well done. This is a gem.

Reviewer: bk6m
Date: 01/10/11 23:02
Chapter: Throw in a Little Fun...

loved it!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 01/10/11 11:46
Chapter: Throw in a Little Fun...

Very cute! You picked the right little song to set for the twins. 'Mischief' is the perfect word for them as well. I would have loved more verses! Nice job! ~Gina :)

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