Reviewer: ravenclaw1997
Date: 01/10/11 13:30
Chapter: The Only Chapter That Exists

That was a great story! You're right; it is sad, but it's very good, too. I only have one nitpick- instead of Weasley's Wizard Wheezes, it should be Weasleys' Wizard Wheezes. Putting the apostrophe before the 's' says that there's one Weasley; it should be after, because there are two.

Great job! I look forward to more from you!

~Manda

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! Also, thanks for mentioning the apostraphe problem. I have fixed it now!

Reviewer: iwishicouldwrite
Date: 01/10/11 13:29
Chapter: The Only Chapter That Exists

awww that was adorable! You're definitely right about George being proud of his ear, it's what Fred would of wanted. nice job and keep writing fanfiction :)

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