i am very deeply intrigued just from the first chapter. i love how different you have laid out their relationship. it's new and i'm liking it! i like how quickly we get a grasp on the characters. plus the cliffhanger ending always keeps me wanting more...hint hint. hehe.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! The next chapter is in queue and will hopefully be up shortly.
Hey! madhumakhi here and I'm thrilled to see the sequel to Persephone and I'm looking forward for more. Just a question- In which year is Elizabeth?
I also wonder whether we'll see more of Persephone.
Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Elisabeth's in her sixth year--I believe that comes up in the next chapter or the one afterwards. The next update should be here shortly!
As soon as I saw that this was a sequel to Persephone, I had to read it, and I have not at all been disappointed. I'm so excited for this story - please update soon! :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I have almost the entire story written, so the updates should come fairly regularly =]
I quite like how this story started out. Your style of writing is very interesting. While you present lovely stories you also pretend the hurtful side of people, or the facts we don't like to think about. It isn't glossed over and as a writer it is hard to do that to your characters. This story is very promising. Having read all of Persephone I feel somewhat protective towards Elizabeth, and when I started reading about here cheating boyfriend I was upset. Then when I read it was Sirius it became harder to be upset because I love Sirius. That's why I love this take because we all know Sirius is supposed to be a player but we don't often think of the girls he is with. I at least always assume they just wanted the one night stand like he did. I like your perspective it is fresh and honest, and with your way of writing I'm sure it'll be a great story. Please update soon
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you're enjoying reading it!