I absolutely love it! I saw the second part to Deathly Hallows last night and have been unhappy about these two not ending up together ever since (although it didn't hit me after reading the book). I can't tell you how much I love this fiction! You should write a long one that's Neville/Luna!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I loved that they added that into the movies too, ha ha. And I just may write a longer one, but for now I have too many long ones started but not finished, lol. Thank you for the review!
cute :) you characterized everyone really well but i think your luna was a little too... normal. i always expected that her train of thought would be really strange. but i love neville he's adorable
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Aren't they just too cute together!? And I know, she's less odd, but I think Luna's a little more sane than people give her credit for, ha ha. She believes a lot of odd things, but for good reasons. She is a Ravenclaw afterall. At this point in her life, I think she would have grown up a little, too. But that's just my interpretation.
I loved it! Of all the females in the Potter universe, Luna is my favorite. And I always thought Neville needed someone like her, someone who could tell him what he needed to hear.
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad to know someone else likes the pairing. I think they were perfect for one another. X)
This is a cute chapter. It seems a little rushed though, you seemed to have crammed a lot in this chapter, but other than that it is very well written. :)
Author's Response: Yeah, it was supposed to be a cute little one shot but it grew larger. So I guess I did pack a lot of information into each chapter :). I wanted to show both her PoV and his too, so it goes back and forth a lot. I'm glad you liked it though! TY!
Well, this is definitely unlike anything I've come across on this site! Hannah is usually really sweet, but for this story, you made her seem far from that :) It was interesting to see her act that way. I want to know why Neville fell for her...? Hm. ;)
The beginning was really nice, a little cliched, maybe, but well-written all the same. Please continue!
Author's Response: Ha ha. Yeah, I know it's cliche, but it's supposed to be. This was meant to be fluff from the start. Glad you like my version on Hannah, lol. Of course she's normally sweet, but don't we all get a little defensive around our man's ex? ;)
