Reviews For Heat of the Moment
Reviewer: bekkahtee
Date: 01/24/11 10:05
Chapter: Chapter 1

I love this story, i keep reading it over and over again. I cant get enough! Its just perfect. Are you going to be writing anymore storys? If so you can bet I'll be reading them(: keep up the amazing work deary.

Author's Response:

It's safe to say I'll keep writing. This is only one of 41 stories I have posted, one of which is a chaptered Harmony story (in-progress). I hope to see you again, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story. :D

~Jess

Reviewer: MrBamforth
Date: 01/11/11 5:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is really good. I hope that you write another part of it because I would love to find out what happens next :)

Author's Response:

Haha, the beauty of the ending is that you can let your imagination wander. Considering the connotations of letting their respective spouses know about the slip-up, I would go so far as to say that this would fall into the 'no one will ever know' category. In my own perfect world, it would happen again at some point. :D

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Jess

Reviewer: andrew_mega
Date: 01/09/11 13:01
Chapter: Chapter 1

It was a great story, i only wish it would have went on longer lol thanks so much

Author's Response:

Glad you liked it. It's a little smutty, but not as smutty as the original version, lol. :D

Thanks for reading and reviewing. Have a lovely day!

~Jess

Reviewer: bollywoodrecord
Date: 01/03/11 16:01
Chapter: Chapter 1

‘This product has been specially designed for the safety of both parties. It is only activated by a specific pheromone, which solely comes from pre-existing sexual attraction to prevent unlawful use on unwilling participants.'

Harmony!!!! Ah, I love this pairing so much... Thanks for writing, it was wonderful. I love that last paragraph. :)

Author's Response:

Hehe, I'm glad you enjoyed.

What I wanted throughout the story is that Harry and Hermione think themselves victims, only to find out at the end that the spark was there in both of them all along, or it never would have happened. Plus, it was a good excuse to write some nice Harmony smut. Nothing wrong with that, lol. :D

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Jess

Reviewer: sammygurl
Date: 12/30/10 5:27
Chapter: Chapter 1

super like

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Jess

Reviewer: MuggleMom28
Date: 12/19/10 6:42
Chapter: Chapter 1

Excellent story. Really enjoyed it. Very believable way for them to get together after the epilogue. Are you sure it's a one-shot?

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the story. I personally like my Harmony to be as canon-compliant as possible, so when I can fit some decent smut in and make it believable, it's been a good day. And this story will be a one-shot, because it's supposed to make the reader wonder what happens next and maybe hypothesize about it on their own... draw your own conclusions, so to speak.

Thanks for reviewing. I really appreciate it!

~Jess

Reviewer: the opaleye
Date: 12/19/10 2:32
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh Jess. I really needed to re-read this tonight. I can't even express how much better this made me feel! You managed to write one of the best Harmony fics I've ever read. Ever. Your humour and chemistry and smut-skills and the little clif-hanger at the end are just perfect. I love it so much, especially the ending XD Thanks so much for writing this for me. I'm so glad that it's up on the archives so I can favourite it!

Author's Response:

Nothing like a nice little smutty pick-me-up, n'est-ce pas?

This story was so fun to write, and I'm glad that I could bring you that level of enjoyment on your birthday. We both enjoy our little seeds of Harmony, nestled into canon, which make one doubt what we think we know.

As you've seen, I added a bit at the end, because I personally had the properties of the potion in mind with the failsafe warning, but I realised that there was no way that the reader would know it. So I added that bit at the end to make one think: are there feelings between them that Harry and Hermione have buried for everyone's sake? I feel like it's my mission as a Harmony shipper to make as many people as possible think that there are. :D It's just a shame that I had to remove various anatomy bits from it, hehe.

I'm glad you like it, dear, and I can't wait until next November 22 to write another little piece of Harmony heaven.

~Jess

Reviewer: Marsprincess
Date: 12/18/10 16:34
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh my gosh. My mouth literally fell open after I read that. I was a little confused since he was married to Ginny and she to Ron since I thought it was Harry and Hermione. And then I was like uh oh they're going to do it. lol. But that ending was like perfect. Like you said to the others, you still wanted it to be a Harry and Hermione feel to it. You should definitely continue this, I think it'd be a good story. Really enjoyed reading it =)

Author's Response:

Haha, I'm glad the confusion was cleared up. My favourite type of Harmony is the type that fits into canon without openly defyingit. They're just fine and dandy until the potion commotion, and then the whole world is turned upside down.

I won't be writing any more of this story, as I've already got a giant Harmony fic in progress, but I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reviewing. :D

~Jess

Reviewer: Whitlie
Date: 12/17/10 22:18
Chapter: Chapter 1

That's awful! I mean super good, but sad. :(

Good stuff, keep writing.

Author's Response:

Hehe, I couldn't resist some angsty smut. It's the best kind. :D Glad you enjoyed it.

~Jess

Reviewer: dahtonen
Date: 12/17/10 22:06
Chapter: Chapter 1

Jess, this is great!! Really enjoyed it! The warning label...wow! Great job as usual!

Author's Response:

Well, as you know, I tend to want my Harmony pieces to fall into the realm of canon-compliance, or at least plausibility. This is, to me, something that could actually happen. I'm glad you liked it, and I put that sort of warning on everything I write that is borderline. If only I could have posted the uncensored version... *sigh*

~Jess

Reviewer: CoolCatElly
Date: 12/16/10 15:36
Chapter: Chapter 1

JESS. I love this. Heeheeee

Author's Response:

Thank you, dear. i added some backstory to the end so it wouldn't seem so much like Harry and Hermione were victims in this. Plus, I took the edge off the smut.

Heart you. :D

~Jess

Reviewer: abovelevel
Date: 12/16/10 13:38
Chapter: Chapter 1

HAHAHA! Oh my gosh, I think I'm laughing too hard to leave a proper review, but ahhh this was too funny.

"This product has been specially designed for the safety of both parties. It is only activated by a specific pheromone, which solely comes from pre-existing sexual attraction to prevent unlawful use on unwilling participants."

That was too, too funny. And just the whole situation with the Mary-Kay like party at the beginning and Hermione being the one who didn't even want to use the potion in the first place...

Just perfect.

Author's Response:

Well, the potion was designed to only work for people who are already attracted, kind of like reverse Amortentia, so I just wanted that little seed of true Harmony in there, but also for it to continue being canon compliant, because I didn't want either of them to tell and for it to be their little secret, so to speak.

The end part wasn't even in the original draft, but I had already had to explain to quite a few people about the nature of the potion, mainly its failsafe, so I decided when I posted the story here to add that last bit just for clarification.

I'm glad you enjoyed the story, and thanks for the review. By the way, you have just completed the first level of being a Ravenclaw House Elf. Fourth Class for you. Now, three more to go! :D

~Jess

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