Reviews For Heat of the Moment
Reviewer: Holly_and_PhoenixFeather
Date: 10/27/12 12:13
Chapter: Chapter 1

This story is so good! I read it twice! Well done, and well written! :)

Author's Response:

Hehe, I hope it was as much fun to read as it was to write. The person for whom it was written (Julia/the opaleye, whose own Harmony work is fabulous and worth a gander) still reads it here and there. I'm glad I could bring a bit of Harmony joy to the archives. ♥

~Jess

Reviewer: Akeelah98
Date: 09/19/12 22:58
Chapter: Chapter 1

a good story

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for dropping in!

~Jess

Reviewer: XxHermioneLuvsHarryxX
Date: 08/17/12 15:32
Chapter: Chapter 1

IS THERE NO WAY THAT ANYONE CAN TOTALLY PURSWAY YOU TO CONTINUE THIS STORY??? IT'S LIKE THE FUNNIEST AND BEST THING I'VE READ SO FAR!!!!

Author's Response:

Alas, this is all there is to the story. To be honest, there is no way that this can end well, so I left off where I did so anyone who wanted it to end well could at least imagine it themselves. However, I thank you for reading and am glad you enjoyed the story.

~Jess

Reviewer: miksjavier
Date: 06/10/12 1:11
Chapter: Chapter 1

Can you write the next chapter. I'm so excited will reading it. :))

Author's Response: Alas, there is no second chapter, but I'm glad you enjoyed the story nonetheless. Thanks for drooping in and reviewing. :) ~Jess

Reviewer: Harmthuria
Date: 05/12/12 16:16
Chapter: Chapter 1

Good warning at the end. I laughed out loud (because it's these two).

Author's Response:

Thank you (I think). Have a good day/whatever.

~Jess

Reviewer: magiccarpet
Date: 03/10/12 19:15
Chapter: Chapter 1

I forgot I had left this review...the reply is the best! I have to give you credit for using the word "ejaculate"...it fits the reply and the theme of the story.

I also have to comment on the irony of your use of the word vitirol, seeing as how your reply both utilizes it and castigates me for it.

Perhaps the tone of my reviews will lead me to the principal's office...but you'll be in the seat right next to me :). I'm sure the moderators would be interested to read your epithet and profanity-laden reply, 2 things which even I, in my sin-stained review, did not use.

I didn't like the story, and pointed out some major holes...what is wrong with that? I won't leave any more reviews because you don't want me to, but if I did rest assured that I would only tell you how great your stories are...you seem unable to deal with anything to the contrary.

Cheers!

Author's Response:

You're not very good at this, are you?

Pointing out things you didn't think worked for the story is fine, provided they are actually valid points of criticism. However, your comments simply showed your utter lack of base understanding of the story, and your tone left something to be desired. Simply put, if you can't take it, don't dish it out. MNFF is all about a supportive environment for authors, and it is a REQUIREMENT for reviewers to treat authors and their work with respect, either by use of tact or silence. If you had bothered to read the terms of service upon the creation of your account, you would know that.

It's funny you should mention the moderation staff. As it happens, I already know they're not happy with you. Why don't you just mosey on over and check out the list of administrators for the site...you'll see what I mean.

Sincerely,

Still Amused Author

P.S. - OH! And for the love of Merlin's burning ureter, will you PLEASE stop using numerals instead of writing out whole numbers under one-hundred. It's considered bad form and frankly makes my eyes bleed a little bit.

Reviewer: magiccarpet
Date: 01/31/12 3:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

I read that you're a Harmonian who believes in canon...if this is your canon I'd prefer you didn't believe in canon at all! lol

Seriously though, while the plot might be able to fit into canon, the characters don't. Harry's main personality trait is guilt; there is no way he would ignore those feelings of betrayal with such abandon. I don't think Harry would even tell Ron...because he'd probably end his own life out of shame first. Harry is unrecognizable in this story.

Also, Hermione doesn't come off much better...she sleeps with Harry because her son likes a new rock band?

Honestly, Harry and Hermione come off more as petulant teenagers who got bored and decided to get stoned and shag, rather than the mature married people they are purported to be. There doesn't seem to be any other reason for their coupling other than they had the opportunity. Given the destruction such a coupling would unleash, that reason doesn't bear much weight, and this story falls flat because there is such a momentous effect, but no cause to generate it.

Author's Response:

Dear Silly Troll,

You should really be a bit more astute in choosing your targets upon which to ejaculate your vitriol. According to your review page, you've 'visited' a site moderator and multiple former moderators. If it's your plan to do battle against anything you remotely disagree with and dismiss it as not worth your time, then you've failed. You see, now you've gone and got yourself noticed. Expect some of your reviews to disappear and your name to go on a list of naughty children who can't behave themselves in public.

I'm going to leave this review up because it amuses me that you completely missed the point of the story. Harry and Hermione didn't get 'stoned' and decide to have sex out of boredom; they inadvertently imbibed a potion designed to skyrocket one's sex drive in regards to the person (or people, perhaps) they are physically attracted to. It's not a flaw in characterisation for someone to periodically fantasise about a good friend in a sexual way. I'd even go out on a limb and say it's pretty normal. These are feelings that, had it not been for the potion, they never would've acted on. And as for ratting themselves out, I think they would've had it not been for the disclaimer label on the potion. Is wrecking two otherwise happy marriages really worth that bit of honesty? It's an age old debate with no right answer, really.

In the future, if you decide to malign someone else's work, try reading the story first and actually knowing what the f*** you're talking about. Or, better yet, just keep it to yourself and go simmer over in your corner to cry over the injustice of a fictional story.

Sincerely,

Amused Author

Reviewer: kimwasherexo
Date: 01/13/12 8:57
Chapter: Chapter 1

Really loved this story, i only wish you added more chapters! D:

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. Unfortunately, I can't really see any ending to this other than misery and badness, so...I left it as-is with a measure of what-if and intrigue. Thank you for the visit. :) ~Jess

Reviewer: guptadips
Date: 12/30/11 15:00
Chapter: Chapter 1

Nice story. I loved itt! this was my first Harry- Hermione ship... and I am sure I liked very much.. :))

Author's Response:

I'm a Harmony shipper who believes in canon (yes, we do exist, hehe). I like seeing how well I can fit it into canon without disturbing anything, and this guilty little tryst is perfect in that respect. It fits into what has been ordained by Her Majesty Rowling but with a little twist to suit my ebil desires, hehe.

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm glad you enjoyed it. If you'd like more great Harmony stuff, definitely check out the opaleye . She is definitely one of the best.

~Jess

Reviewer: Hermnikki15
Date: 12/24/11 7:05
Chapter: Chapter 1

I am new to the site and would like to say that this story was excellent.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked it. Though it's a non-canon ship, I still try to adhere to the guidelines of characterisation. It, in my opinion, can make a canon-contradictory ship shine if one can see it happening within the bounds of what we do know happened.

Anyway, thanks for the read and review. :D

~Jess

Reviewer: DramioneFelton
Date: 12/16/11 2:51
Chapter: Chapter 1

oh wow, please make a sequel to this :D

Author's Response:

Hmm, I might do someday, but much to my sadness, I don't think it'll end well for either of them. Anyway, I'm glad you liked it. :D

~Jess

Reviewer: jessieloveshp
Date: 09/10/11 18:26
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow interesting. are you making a sequel?

Author's Response:

Not planning on a sequel as of yet, but one might pop up one of these years. At any rate, thank you for your interest in the story and for reading!

~Jess

Reviewer: lambtoslaughter
Date: 09/04/11 0:21
Chapter: Chapter 1

i really liked this story. sexy without being... vulgar like some stories get. and it made me giggle at first, when they were tryin so hard to fight it... but i esp liked the little twist ending. lol.

Author's Response:

Hehe, this is probably the smuttiest thing I could get away with on MNFF, but you seem to get that it's part of their lost battle with the potion. The description is meant to show how their perceptions of each other in the physical sense were altered by it.

And the story just wouldn't have been Harmony without that little extra nugget to close it out. :D

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Jess

Reviewer: NimbusNox98
Date: 09/03/11 20:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

This story is hilarious! I love it!

Author's Response:

Okay... I'm not sure in what ways the story is humourous, but thank you nonetheless for reading. I'm glad you liked it, or I rather hope that's what you mean, hehe.

~Jess

Reviewer: lady_of_the_mannor
Date: 09/01/11 19:36
Chapter: Chapter 1

oh WOW!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Because I am conceited, I assume this means your approval. In that case... :D Smut is always my pleasure to bring to you, hehe.

~Jess

Reviewer: Radcliffefan07
Date: 07/22/11 7:36
Chapter: Chapter 1

Jess,

You are amazing. I can't believe I haven't stumbled across this before now, but I've been absent in the world of fan fiction for awhile. Please tell me there will be a sequel. I'm dying to know how that conversation goes. You have left my thoughts incomprehensible. All I have to say is wow. Very impressed by this fic. Great job!

-Ash

Author's Response:

I'm very glad you enjoyed the story. Gina and I were plotting via AIM, and the subject of love potion came up. But then my brain spun in different directions and thought, "Potion love doesn't sound very sexy, but passion potion is a different story!" So I wrote that story for Julia's birthday. And it was fun. :D

Thanks for reading and stopping into my little Harmony world! 

~Jess

Reviewer: Seabreeze843
Date: 07/17/11 3:37
Chapter: Chapter 1

Hehehe you're right. Nothin like a smutty little pick-me-up.

Author's Response:

Indeed you are correct. The reviewer below you doesn't seem to agree, but for what it's worth, I love me a bit of smut in the morning. :D

Anyway, thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Jess

Reviewer: yehudisshapiro
Date: 07/03/11 18:42
Chapter: Chapter 1

wow! this was, sexually desturbing!!! I mean you are giving me a whole different prospect of what you think sex is. sex is not barely breathing, and sucking in your partners body like you suck a lollypop. sex is not wanting more and getting it. and sex is certainly not ripping off garments with such force that buttons come off. sex is a process of love. it works slowly. sex means you take your time, you dont just grab eachother like a wolf who hasnt eaten for days. you take clothing of in a regular fashion. just plain old regular, and even if you are excited you do not rip off clothing. now you may be wondering how i know all this, well let me tell you that ive had my own experiences.

-hudilovesbeinggreen :D

Author's Response:

Just so you know, I seriously just LOLed. Rest assured that I am well aware of the process of sex and all of the fluffy garbage commonly associated with it. However, that's not the point of the story. They're under the influence of a passion-inducing potion, and the reason why it wasn't a 'process of love' is because they're not 'in love'. They merely have minute, latent feelings that allows the potion to work. I'm sorry if you didn't get it, but I take exception to my story being called 'dIsturbing' merely because you evidently have only vanilla, cliched sexual experiences.

Have a lovely evening!

~Jess

Reviewer: cancel21
Date: 03/30/11 7:56
Chapter: Chapter 1

Wow, that was intense. Is there a sequel to this?

Author's Response:

Unfortunately, no, there is no sequel to this. It was just a tiny pocket of naughty encased in canon relationships. However, if you're looking for similar stories, I wholly recommend The Colour of Distance and To Make Things Right, To See It All, both by the opaleye (the latter is the sequel to the former), or In His Hollow Eyes by h_vic. Waking by the opaleye focuses more on the relationship between Harry and Hermione after Ron's death, but the ending is the same (squee!). I hope this slakes your thirst for some intense Harmony.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Jess

Reviewer: bekkahtee
Date: 01/24/11 10:05
Chapter: Chapter 1

I love this story, i keep reading it over and over again. I cant get enough! Its just perfect. Are you going to be writing anymore storys? If so you can bet I'll be reading them(: keep up the amazing work deary.

Author's Response:

It's safe to say I'll keep writing. This is only one of 41 stories I have posted, one of which is a chaptered Harmony story (in-progress). I hope to see you again, and I'm glad you enjoyed the story. :D

~Jess

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