Reviewer: ramsteinrider
Date: 04/12/13 0:06
Chapter: Draco's Soliloquy

Please, please, please finish the story! It's so good and i want to read it to the end!

Author's Response: I did finish it! I'm going to post the rest of it on this site now :) I kind of forgot I had this account so I'm happy to be reminded of it

Reviewer: beaflower114
Date: 09/11/12 16:03
Chapter: Chapter 5

HI, i've really enjoyed the fic so far and hope that you consider uploading the next chapter within the next week (because i'm incredibly impatient!)
I hope you don't stop halfway through this fic like many others have, i get very frustrated!!!
good luck with your writing

Reviewer: pavaniw
Date: 08/05/12 1:14
Chapter: Chapter 5

Please finish the story. It's really awesome

Reviewer: BookWorm530
Date: 03/04/12 5:24
Chapter: Chapter 5

Is this the end?? I hope not...I was hoping for more of a happy ending from Draco and Hermione, especially after all they have gone through. I enjoyed the prequel to this one, please write more soon!

Reviewer: baby54boomer
Date: 02/15/12 20:08
Chapter: Draco's Soliloquy

Sorry...too much text and not enough dialogue. The reading gets heavy and frustrating.

Reviewer: Accio Goblet
Date: 08/03/11 8:58
Chapter: Chapter 5

It's so heroic. :)

Reviewer: Melina Malfoy
Date: 07/11/11 10:51
Chapter: Chapter 5

OMG!!!! What a chapter! Fantastic, hon. Can't wait for the next one!! :D

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 07/10/11 11:01
Chapter: Chapter 5

Awesome! Fantastic!!

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 07/10/11 11:01
Chapter: Chapter 5

Awesome! Fantastic!!

Reviewer: pottermania1891
Date: 05/30/11 22:56
Chapter: Escape

I love it! I can't wait for more

Author's Response: Finally posted! In the queue :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: ooCathrynoo
Date: 05/02/11 14:31
Chapter: Escape

New reader! I love it!

Author's Response: Great! I'll keep writing!

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 04/17/11 12:24
Chapter: Escape

Love it!! Love it!!!

Author's Response: Yeah!! Thanks!! :)

Reviewer: SimpleMinds
Date: 04/16/11 3:59
Chapter: Draco's Soliloquy

Nicely done, Draco's clearly being very chivalrous in his old age. ;) I like how you've used Narcissa too. Otherwise, i'd be interested to know the reasoning for Hermione not marrying Ron and living happily ever after. Otherwise i think Dolohov was a good choice for a new dark power, although he probably would have been pretty damn old, not that it matters.

Oh yeah, you've got a guy called Rowel or similar, do you mean Rowle (Thorfin, the big blonde death eater)?

B'yeah, have enjoyed this so far and i look forward to the next chapter! :)

Author's Response: Ha. Old age! I liked including Narcissa because she obviously had a lot of love for her precious son, enough to lie to Voldemort when it most mattered to him. I honestly randomly chose Dolohov. My friend was rereading the books and I asked which Death Eater was still supposedly alive by the end of it and she said him. I think he was probably in his 50's by this time. Not too old! And yeah, I got the spelling wrong on Rowle. Have to go back and change that. Oops :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Melina Malfoy
Date: 04/04/11 22:20
Chapter: Common Ground

Oh my God, what a story! My heart is breaking to pieces!!! Please don't let Hermione believe his note- she has to get Harry and a zillion other people to save Draco and hopefully his mother too. This chapter between Draco and Lucius was absolutely beautiful and heart-wrenching. I can't wait for your next chapter. PAMS!! : )

Author's Response: You are so cute! Thank you for reading and reviewing!! I COMPLETELY appreciate it!! But one thing, I don't understand PAMS

Reviewer: Carmen SanDiego
Date: 04/03/11 18:33
Chapter: Common Ground

i love the whole concept of your story! i love your writing style and i love the way you write the characters. im really excited to see what happens next! keeep up the great work, love the story!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far! It's definitely a piece of work I'm proud of :)

Reviewer: nevilleherosnape
Date: 04/03/11 18:31
Chapter: Common Ground

W. O. W. !!!!!

Author's Response: T.H.X.!!!! ^_^

Reviewer: raquel
Date: 03/31/11 23:34
Chapter: The Value of Family

Evil cliffy. thanks for writing it is VERY interesting and captivating, no pun intended

Author's Response: LOL :) I'm getting to the next chapter!

Reviewer: little_em
Date: 03/27/11 15:20
Chapter: The Value of Family

I love it! An excellent story and beautifully written. Please update soon xxxx

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working to get it through the queue :)

Reviewer: raquel
Date: 03/15/11 0:08
Chapter: Draco's Soliloquy

Ahh that is why he left her. he shows up ragged. how did he escape? great fill in the blank but leave lots of new question. thank you for writing

Author's Response: Ohhhh, I'm definitely getting there! Hang on! :)

Reviewer: hermy008
Date: 12/21/10 6:21
Chapter: Draco's Soliloquy

LOVED IT!! i must admit, im not a big dramione person, but i thought that this story was told in a particularly realistic way. (in terms of how draco and hermione got together that is.) i wish there was more to it though. :(
you really got into dracos head, and you personified him beautifully by what he says and what he does. gold star for you! good job, and keep writing. :)

Author's Response: T H A N K Y O U ! ! ! The story's not done yet madam! :)

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