Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 04/05/12 7:45
Chapter: Chapter 1

Deluded.

That is all.

One who shall be nameless.

Reviewer: unjellify
Date: 07/16/11 16:05
Chapter: Chapter 1

This was so great! I particularly liked how Hugo had Hermione's sharp wit combined with Ron's sense of humor. I also enjoyed the camaraderie between the two boys and that they weren't all lovey-dovey with each other, because I don't think Scorpius and Hugo would be. Lastly, loved the title!

Author's Response: Hello!

I am glad to know you saw Hugo's parents in him, and also that you loved the camaraderie between the two boys. As for the title, I will let Kara know as it was her idea. :) Thanks for the review!

~Natalie

Reviewer: Crazycow89
Date: 01/02/11 17:36
Chapter: Chapter 1

Oh that was great. That was a really good story. I'm surprised that it was Hugo instead of Rose with Scorpius like I expected. Of course, you never mentioned Scorpius's name, but who else would have blond hair and be a Malfoy in the next generation? Very well written out-I commend you.

*applause*

Author's Response: Who else? :) Thank you for your review. I am happy you liked it. It was a bit tricky to write.

~Natalie

Reviewer: SingingWren
Date: 12/22/10 19:17
Chapter: Chapter 1

Aww, adorable! I think I may rather like this pairing after all. I loved your description of Hugo. This is the first time I've read a story involving him where I got a clear picture of what he looks like. You did it in a very subtle and non-exposition-like way, which I appreciate.

Love the snappy exchanges between the two characters. I find those almost harder to write than anything, so kudos to you for making it sound so natural.

Oh, and I think the title is very cute. Though I'll confess, simply based on the title, I came into this story expecting something a bit more explicit ;) I'm rather glad that's not what I found, as this was much better.

I'd write a longer review, but I'm afraid my mind is wiped right now. Very cute story, I thoroughly enjoyed it!

~o~ Karen

Author's Response: Hello!

I am glad to hear you bought this pairing. Heehee. That was my intention Ė to snub both Scorose and Scily and slip in Scugo. ;) I normally fail at snappy dialogue, but the God of Fanfic must have blessed me, for I somehow managed to achieve this feat for this status.

The title was deceptive, wasnít it? I usually suck at titles, and my beta-reader had to come up with one. I must say that I planned for the story to have some smut, but the storyline didnít require much in the end, so I scraped it.

~Natalie


Author's Response: Hello!

I am glad to hear you bought this pairing. Heehee. That was my intention Ė to snub both Scorose and Scily and slip in Scugo. ;) I normally fail at snappy dialogue, but the God of Fanfic must have blessed me, for I somehow managed to achieve this feat for this status.

The title was deceptive, wasnít it? I usually suck at titles, and my beta-reader had to come up with one. I must say that I planned for the story to have some smut, but the storyline didnít require much in the end, so I scraped it.

~Natalie

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 12/17/10 10:44
Chapter: Chapter 1

Natalie! Once again you quickly flesh out minor characters in a lovely way. I particularly like Hugo in this story. The dialogue was just so quick and snappy, it really leant him a nice personality. And what a neat pairing - you once again make a rarepair very believable. Nice story, Natalie - I really enjoyed it. :)
~Gina via The Order of the Ravenclaw House Elves :)

Author's Response: GinGin!

Yay! It's great to hear that you liked it. :D I think I might write more of it because I really enjoyed writing them.

Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Natalie

Reviewer: Equinox Chick
Date: 12/16/10 6:22
Chapter: Chapter 1

Awwww, I really like this. I adore Hugo, who is so often written as either a boy version of Hermione, or else another Ron. Here he has a bit of Ron, (his humour) and then something else which is just him (and your amazingness).

Now, apart from the fact that Scorpius is actually seeing Lily *frowns*, I do like the way you've characterised him. He's very Slyth in his wanton selfishness, but it's brilliant when he admits exactly what he wants at the end.

Lovely story, and it had me giggling - a lot _ so thanks for that. ~Carole~

Author's Response: *smacks self for responding late*

I actually completely forgot to reply. I am glad you liked both boys. Hehehe! I think I am on the verge of abandoning Scorose and sailing away with Scugo. Might even write more of it. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

~Natalie

Reviewer: Nitwit Blubber Oddment Tweak x
Date: 12/16/10 3:34
Chapter: Chapter 1

Awww, Nat! You're such a sweetheart! I LOVE IT. I love the sense of camaraderie, the easiness of the friendship, the teasing, the banter, and the transition into something more. It's light, but it's not pure fluff... just a treat to read, honestly, and such a wonderful birthday present! Thank you so much! LOVE YOU x

Author's Response: Hello!

Oh, I am so happy that you liked it! :) I really wouldn't have cared if everyone else didn't enjoy it. And h33 h33, did you like the ship-wrecking? ;) Happy 18th, once again!

~Natalie

Reviewer: Whitlie
Date: 12/15/10 18:14
Chapter: Chapter 1

d'awww :)

Author's Response: :) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: hpfan25
Date: 12/15/10 18:05
Chapter: Chapter 1

Totally not why I expected, I actually thought it was going to be a rose/scorp, but I was plaeasantly surprised. I quite enjoyed it

Author's Response: Ha!

;) Glad to know you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Rislans88
Date: 12/15/10 17:44
Chapter: Chapter 1

this is great!! the first scorpius/hugo i've ever read. it's very believable, and i love how you have the two different characters who should hate each other cross the line into love so naturally. this is really great.

Author's Response: Hey!

I am glad you found it believable. I actually wrote this for a friend who loves slash and, well, the group I am in has this Scorpius/Rose vs. Scorpius/Lily going on. :D I ship the former, but it tickled me to get out of this rivalry for a while and go for something unexpected. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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