oh jeez. i was nearly in tears by the end. i love the twins soooooooooo much. this moment was perfect for a one-shot. i'm glad you did it justice/
Author's Response: Thank you, thats so nice!
Amazing insight into George's mind. I really felt for him the most when Fred died. I cry every time I read that part in the book, and this story made me cry. It was so beautiful, the way George tried to be strong, but he felt so weak and powerless. It was very well-written, as well with good grammar, and I loved teh song at the end.
Author's Response: :D Thank you so much! For the comment about it making you cry and saying that it was well written. The song is called So Far Away if you would like to listen to it. :)
Poor George. Poor Fred. You did a great job on this-- just the right amount of heart-rending emotion. I think you got everyone's reactions down really well. I nearly cried, and I never do that.
Author's Response: :D Thank you so much! I feel honoured that I nearly made you cry.
I'm just crying. Sobbing. You gave George alot of justice here! Good job!
Author's Response: :D Thank you so much! I feel honoured I DID make you cry.
heartbreaking. as it should be - good job
Author's Response: :D Thank you so much! I'm glad you find it heartbreaking. :)