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Name: Manius Pedfore (Signed) · Date: 02/28/12 4:40 · For: Chapter 8 - Slytherin
great story, I really want an evil version of Potter, have him kill voldemort only to take his place, hahaha.

Name: Vasi_Ricki (Signed) · Date: 01/26/12 2:54 · For: Chapter 11 - Cerberus
Can't wait for the next chapters!!

Name: Potter-Green Child (Signed) · Date: 01/16/12 0:39 · For: Chapter 3 - The Letters
At a loss for what to do, Harry said the only thing he could think of.

“Erm…Come in?” oh my god that was soo funnyI i loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, I'm glad you liked this!

Name: Potter-Green Child (Signed) · Date: 01/16/12 0:30 · For: Chapter 2 - Freak
OH my god i hope i never laugh as much as i did for this one hahahaha snake got him one over

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, I'm glad you liked this!

Name: Potter-Green Child (Signed) · Date: 01/16/12 0:19 · For: Chapter 1 - The Dead
it was nice i liked it!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, I'm glad you liked this!

Name: nevilleherosnape (Signed) · Date: 12/11/11 13:54 · For: Chapter 11 - Cerberus
Excellent! Although I miss that he had desire to know his parents though :-/

Author's Response: I think for my Slytherin!Harry, he does want to know his family, but he tends to focus on those things that it is possible for him to achieve. When he grows a little bit more, and learns more things that magic can give to him, and more importantly for Harry, show him, you will get to see Harry's feelings towards his parents, and to their memories. Thank you for the review, I'm glad you liked this so far!

Name: Celinda (Signed) · Date: 12/06/11 21:57 · For: Chapter 10 - House Loyalties
Finally, a new chapter! Wonderful and captivating as always, can't wait for the next one. It's really great how you have an interesting twist to all the important events while at the same time weaving in your own plot, it makes the story very exciting.

Author's Response: Sorry about the delays in getting new chapters up, but it has been very important to me to get every chapter of this beta'd, and to make sure that they're all as perfect as I can write them. The next chapter has already been submitted, so will hopefully appear online in the next few days. I have to admit that most of the twists aren't extensively planned - my idea and plan for this fic was a believable Slytherin!Harry long-fic, and everything else stems from that. Obviously, as Harry is a Slytherin, he does things in a slightly different matter, so his own sub-plots sneak in. I'm glad you're enjoying this story so far, and thank you for the review!

Name: nevilleherosnape (Signed) · Date: 12/04/11 1:47 · For: Chapter 10 - House Loyalties
I like it! I just read all ten chapters and at first I was like no way! But then as I read it and met more characters I could totally see this playing out! Well done!!! I can't wait for more!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying this fic so far, this fic is my baby, and I have so many long plans that will (eventually) feed into it that it sometimes hurts my head. The next chapter is being submitted today, so you'll hopefully be able to see it in a week or so when it gets approved. Thanks for the review!

Name: reneebaudelaire (Signed) · Date: 11/12/11 7:05 · For: Chapter 9 - Head of House
I can't wait until the next chapters!!! This is brillant and I fancy it more than the original version...bizarre right? Your French is pretty good; without many errors, although I have never seen nor heard "j'ont"....Perhaps it is slang? Or an accidental mistake of conjugation avoir? Either way, no worries! I can't wait to read more!!!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, hopefully the next chapters will be up soon, as soon as my beta sends them to me, they'll be posted. Yes, that is a slightly bizarre thought, although I can't say that I'm not deliriously happy to hear it said! As to my French, it is the result of the memories of a GCSE in French, an online translator, and a friend who did GCSE French as well. As ' j'ont ' is pointed out, I begin to assume that is an incorrect conjugation of avoir - if you have any knowledge of French, or how to correct it, please, I beg your help! I'm glad you've enjoyed this so far!

Name: reneebaudelaire (Signed) · Date: 11/12/11 4:45 · For: Chapter 1 - The Dead
This is very well written. Merci :)

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, and the compliment!

Name: Celinda (Signed) · Date: 11/01/11 12:12 · For: Chapter 9 - Head of House
Finally! Been waiting a while for this chapter. I love how Snape seems very in-character, and I have nothing else to say than that this was great. Classes are starting up and things are happening! Wee. Cant wait for the next chapter, hope it will be up soon.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, I'm glad you like this fic so far. It took a while, and a lot of referring back to the books to get Snape sounding Snape-ish. Believe it or not, the first time I started writing Snape's parts, he came across too harsh, then too soft. After Luna Lovegood, I think he's the hardest character to write. The next chapter will be posted as soon as I get it back from my beta - sorry I can't be a little more specific!

Name: The Dark Lords Right Hand (Signed) · Date: 10/29/11 22:20 · For: Chapter 9 - Head of House
Still loving all the twists and switches from the original story, and the large amount of Snape made my day.

Author's Response: Harry Potter wouldn't be Harry Potter without the twists. I couldn't write a Slytherin Harry without a lot of Severus, he's my favourite character and my namesake on here (I'm guessing he's yours too?). Thank you for the review, I'm glad you liked it!

Name: Envy_I_May_Be (Signed) · Date: 10/25/11 16:01 · For: Chapter 9 - Head of House
I love this story! I think the Slytherin Harry has a lot of interesting qualities, and I am really looking forward to the rest of the story :)

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, I'm glad you like this so far. As for Slytherin Harry's 'interesting qualities', I didn't realise he had any... this is just me imagining being an eleven year old boy. It's really quite fun!

Name: Hpfan94 (Signed) · Date: 10/23/11 20:27 · For: Chapter 8 - Slytherin
cant wait to read the next chapter! when are you adding it?

Author's Response: Chapter 9 has now been added, as to further updates, there is no set schedule, it depends a lot on how much free time my beta has in any given week. Thank you for your review!

Name: Celinda (Signed) · Date: 10/10/11 13:30 · For: Chapter 8 - Slytherin
I really love how all the Slytherins are watching out for each other! Combined with your wonderful descriptions of the common room it makes my Slytherin pride bubble up in my chest. I can't wait to read about the dormitories as well. It's true that Slytherin is the least liked house, so it only makes sense that they need to protect each other. I also think you did the storting really well, and I always thought Hermione should've been in Ravenclaw. Looking forward to see how their relationship to her will be as well, and hope there will be new chapter up soon!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, I'm really glad you're liking this so far. If you're wanting dormitory descriptions, you're in luck, the start of Chapter Nine contains one - I even went so far as to draw it out so that I remember who sleeps where! The issue of Hermione should turn up in the next few chapters as well, so keep your eyes open! The next chapter will be posted as soon as I get it back from my beta, as I'm entirely sure there are a wealth of mistakes to be corrected! Thanks again for the review!

Name: Celinda (Signed) · Date: 09/27/11 0:40 · For: Chapter 7 - Consequences
This Harry is so mean! But i kind of understand him though (because of all the abuse). And so far, I like him better than the I'm-so-heroic-and-nobody-understands-me type. I just can't quite imagine Ron hitting a stranger like that, but he does have an awful temper. Anyway, this is an interesting fic! I've often wondered how things would have turned out if Harry hadn't turned Draco down in first year, and I like that you've turned the story backwards, with Harry and Draco eating sweets and Ron coming to offer his friendship instead. Over all, I like it! Hope the next part will be up soon.

Author's Response: Harry isn't really supposed to be mean here, he just doesn't know how to trust people... everybody he's ever known so far has let him down, and as you said that's mostly because of all of the abuse. I admit, I have made it worse that it is portrayed in canon, as I don't see the Dursley's taking half-measures. This story is written up to Chapter 12, Chapters 9 through 12 are with my beta, and Chapter 8 is on its way to being validated on this site, due to the most pedantic mod I've seen so far. With any luck it will be properly posted here in the next few days. Thank you for the review, I'm so glad you enjoyed reading this so far!

Name: beastmaster (Signed) · Date: 09/03/11 19:49 · For: Chapter 5 - Gringotts
i noticed you put an element from the movie into this chapter with quirrels fear to shake harrys hand and his turbin... its a good inclusion cause it adds to harrys personallity and how he enjoyed torturing him

Author's Response: In all honestly, I didn't realise that the whole shaking hands issue was in the film - I just reread that chapter, and found it a little odd that everybody shook his hand, and then Quirrell didn't. And, let's face it, if you were an eleven year old boy, you'd probably enjoy pushing people's limits. I do, and I'm (clearly) much more mature than an eleven year old Harry!

Name: beastmaster (Signed) · Date: 09/03/11 16:08 · For: Chapter 7 - Consequences
this story is awesome... i look foward to seeing how it ends... i hope you do all the books in the series with a "evil harry" twist

Author's Response: The eventual plan is to work through all of the books, with a possible eighth, but as of yet, I've not even written up to Christmas of Harry's first year, due to RL issues, and other commitments, however the next chapter should (hopefully) be posted within the next week or so. Thanks for the review, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Name: izzylupin (Signed) · Date: 07/18/11 9:38 · For: Chapter 1 - The Dead
Wow.... this was really intense. I LOVED the scenes with the Malfoys, thought they wre really in character.The moments where Harry will say the same thing he oes in canon, but with totally differet meanings ("e.g. "Harry didn't look it, but he was fast") are seriously chilling.

Basically, I feel the same way about this as I do about really good angst- I love it, but I'm so glad it's not true.

Author's Response: I'm very glad you enjoyed this, I have to admit that the Malfoy family were my favourite part to write, and they will be returning later in the story. As for the moments that are similar to canon, I will say this; When I first started writing this fanfic, it was with the intention of keeping the Potterverse as close to canon as I could with the only changed variable being a more Slytherin Harry, so the story moves away from canon dependent on Slytherin!Harry's reactions to the world. As for the 'Angst' and the 'chilling' comments, don't worry. As Harry moves onto Hogwarts things get somewhat easier for him, and much less Dark, although I must admit that may not mean much as I am currently 13 chapters in, and still haven't reached Christmas of Harry's first year! Thank you very much for the review, please keep reading as more chapters get posted.

Name: The Dark Lords Right Hand (Signed) · Date: 06/23/11 14:45 · For: Chapter 4 - Magic
I'm having trouble with the more 'evil' Harry, but I the story is incredibly clever. Any chance of an update soon?

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the fic so far, there are currently a total of ten completed chapters. I am currently having a few issues getting Chapter 5 validated here, but my beta and I are working to try and get it posted. With any luck, the next chapter will be up in the next couple of weeks :)

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