Reviewer: Celinda
Date: 09/27/11 0:40
Chapter: Chapter 7 - Consequences

This Harry is so mean! But i kind of understand him though (because of all the abuse). And so far, I like him better than the I'm-so-heroic-and-nobody-understands-me type. I just can't quite imagine Ron hitting a stranger like that, but he does have an awful temper. Anyway, this is an interesting fic! I've often wondered how things would have turned out if Harry hadn't turned Draco down in first year, and I like that you've turned the story backwards, with Harry and Draco eating sweets and Ron coming to offer his friendship instead. Over all, I like it! Hope the next part will be up soon.

Author's Response: Harry isn't really supposed to be mean here, he just doesn't know how to trust people... everybody he's ever known so far has let him down, and as you said that's mostly because of all of the abuse. I admit, I have made it worse that it is portrayed in canon, as I don't see the Dursley's taking half-measures. This story is written up to Chapter 12, Chapters 9 through 12 are with my beta, and Chapter 8 is on its way to being validated on this site, due to the most pedantic mod I've seen so far. With any luck it will be properly posted here in the next few days. Thank you for the review, I'm so glad you enjoyed reading this so far!

Reviewer: beastmaster
Date: 09/03/11 19:49
Chapter: Chapter 5 - Gringotts

i noticed you put an element from the movie into this chapter with quirrels fear to shake harrys hand and his turbin... its a good inclusion cause it adds to harrys personallity and how he enjoyed torturing him

Author's Response: In all honestly, I didn't realise that the whole shaking hands issue was in the film - I just reread that chapter, and found it a little odd that everybody shook his hand, and then Quirrell didn't. And, let's face it, if you were an eleven year old boy, you'd probably enjoy pushing people's limits. I do, and I'm (clearly) much more mature than an eleven year old Harry!

Reviewer: beastmaster
Date: 09/03/11 16:08
Chapter: Chapter 7 - Consequences

this story is awesome... i look foward to seeing how it ends... i hope you do all the books in the series with a "evil harry" twist

Author's Response: The eventual plan is to work through all of the books, with a possible eighth, but as of yet, I've not even written up to Christmas of Harry's first year, due to RL issues, and other commitments, however the next chapter should (hopefully) be posted within the next week or so. Thanks for the review, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: izzylupin
Date: 07/18/11 9:38
Chapter: Chapter 1 - The Dead

Wow.... this was really intense. I LOVED the scenes with the Malfoys, thought they wre really in character.The moments where Harry will say the same thing he oes in canon, but with totally differet meanings ("e.g. "Harry didn't look it, but he was fast") are seriously chilling.

Basically, I feel the same way about this as I do about really good angst- I love it, but I'm so glad it's not true.

Author's Response: I'm very glad you enjoyed this, I have to admit that the Malfoy family were my favourite part to write, and they will be returning later in the story. As for the moments that are similar to canon, I will say this; When I first started writing this fanfic, it was with the intention of keeping the Potterverse as close to canon as I could with the only changed variable being a more Slytherin Harry, so the story moves away from canon dependent on Slytherin!Harry's reactions to the world. As for the 'Angst' and the 'chilling' comments, don't worry. As Harry moves onto Hogwarts things get somewhat easier for him, and much less Dark, although I must admit that may not mean much as I am currently 13 chapters in, and still haven't reached Christmas of Harry's first year! Thank you very much for the review, please keep reading as more chapters get posted.

Reviewer: The Dark Lords Right Hand
Date: 06/23/11 14:45
Chapter: Chapter 4 - Magic

I'm having trouble with the more 'evil' Harry, but I the story is incredibly clever. Any chance of an update soon?

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the fic so far, there are currently a total of ten completed chapters. I am currently having a few issues getting Chapter 5 validated here, but my beta and I are working to try and get it posted. With any luck, the next chapter will be up in the next couple of weeks :)

Reviewer: The Dark Lords Right Hand
Date: 06/23/11 14:45
Chapter: Chapter 4 - Magic

I'm having trouble with the more 'evil' Harry, but I the story is incredibly clever. Any chance of an update soon?

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the fic so far, there are currently a total of ten completed chapters. I am currently having a few issues getting Chapter 5 validated here, but my beta and I are working to try and get it posted. With any luck, the next chapter will be up in the next couple of weeks :)

Reviewer: Lendor
Date: 03/22/11 15:54
Chapter: Chapter 4 - Magic

This story is very good
I see a much better representation of how an abused child would react in Harry's situation than was displayed in cannon. I am studying sociology at school and I know that there is not a shred of believability behind how cannon Harry acted after the abuse he suffered at the Dursleys.
Keep up the good writing
can't wait for the next chapter
I personally hope this story does not follow the cliché of Harry becoming best friends with Draco but rather you chose for Harry to have no friends or a more secondary character like Theo Nott as his best friend.
- Lendon

Author's Response: I'm glad you like how my Harry behaves, I made him a bit more anti-social and etc. as in my fic he's abused to a much higher degree than is ever mentioned in Canon. I'm sorry to tell you that I do follow the cliché, but that's partly because I can't see the Slytherins not accepting Harry, if only because of his fame, let alone the fact that he's a powerful wizard. I do, however, have Harry close friends with Blaise Zabini, and the Slytherins seem to stick together more than the Gryffindors, so other characters, such as Theodore Nott will become enrolled in some parts of Harry's adventures. The next chapter will go up pretty much as soon as my beta gets it back to me, which should hopefully be soon. Much thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: Moody
Date: 02/27/11 2:21
Chapter: Chapter 3 - The Letters

Just finished all your three chapters and I must say; it really looks like quite a good story. Harry with a little more vengeful twist is something I had never really read before and your AU portrayal of the Dursleys is also very interesting to read.

Good job and I'm waiting for your next chapter!

Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed reading it :) Unfortunately, I'm pretty sure that I'm not the first to utilise a vengeful Harry, a lot of Slytherin!Harry stories have the same sort of idea too :). As to more chapters, I have up to chapter 8 completely finished, just awaiting the skills of my beta, so should hopefully be up soon. Much thanks for the review!

Reviewer: One Lily
Date: 02/02/11 10:01
Chapter: Chapter 1 - The Dead

cant wait for more!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm glad you enjoyed it enough to want more. Chapter two is now up, and chapters 3 - 7 are completed and awaiting beta-ing :) xx

Reviewer: Sunset_Gazer
Date: 12/18/10 14:06
Chapter: Chapter 1 - The Dead

Nicely done, so far. You're right, it's not so different right now, but I know that will change as you progress with the story, and I'm eager to know where you will take it!

Author's Response: Thank you very much. The second chapter, Freak, has been submitted, but not yet validated. Hopefully you'll enjoy it, it's quite dark, as the name may imply.

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