Reviewer: hermionepal98
Date: 05/28/12 13:29
Chapter: Chapter 3

Wow. I love how you really incorporated the actual plot of the goblet of fire. Well done:)

Reviewer: hermionepal98
Date: 05/28/12 13:26
Chapter: Chapter 2

It is really good!

Reviewer: charley1093
Date: 07/08/11 1:36
Chapter: Chapter 7

are you ever going to add more chapters to this? i really liked it :(

Author's Response: Yes I plan to add more chapters, hopefully soon, but I keep running into the worst roadblocks (and writers blocks heheh). I'm almost thinking what I need to do, instead of plowing forward, is to go back and rewrite a lot of what I've done so far. So it might take a while to put more up, but I do want to finish this! Just to give you an idea of my sluggish writing habits, I think I started writing this in like 2007, although I didn't really get going on it until a couple years later.

Reviewer: whorecruxes
Date: 07/04/11 20:02
Chapter: Chapter 7

Please keep on writing this story! It's absolutely amazing, I can't get enough of it!

Author's Response: Thank you very much, and I shall try my best to get more chapters up soon!

Reviewer: vanessaaweasley
Date: 03/13/11 20:07
Chapter: Chapter 1

This is so good!...there's only one problem...I NEED MORE!!!!!!!

Reviewer: charley1093
Date: 01/14/11 3:39
Chapter: Chapter 1

I really love this (:
I'm sad that there aren't many Hermione/Victor fanfics on here as they were a couple through the 4th book
I like the way you have managed to stay true to the book but still adding things to make it more interesting (:

when is the next chaper coming up?

Author's Response: Yeah it surprises me that there are so few Hermione/Viktor fans out there...they're way more believable together than a lot of other pairings I come across. As for the next chapter, I'm not entirely sure when it will be finished. I've tried a few different slants on it and nothing is working very well. I keep running into a dead end somehow haha. But I'll try to get it finished sooner rather than later. :)

Reviewer: Britt15
Date: 01/12/11 10:35
Chapter: Chapter 7

I meant I want more and I am upset that's all:)

Author's Response: Haha I wondered. :) I'm working on the next chapter but it's being a royal pain, so I can't promise it'll be posted soon. I'll try and get it up before too much longer though.

Reviewer: Britt15
Date: 01/12/11 10:35
Chapter: Chapter 7

Noooooooooo moreeeeeee

Reviewer: bk6m
Date: 01/07/11 19:30
Chapter: Chapter 7

I really like this story.

Author's Response: Thanks :) Glad you do.

Reviewer: Kaiserin
Date: 12/16/10 11:33
Chapter: Chapter 4

I liked how you angled this..

He's too shy, she's too close minded to notice, or maybe to realistic. Because, really, who'd have thought Viktor Krum would notice the most unnoticable girl in Hogwarts!

I'm dying to see Neville's reaction to all this! Did he not ask Hermione to the ball as well? I wonder if you're going to explore the relationship a bit before the ball? Have them interact? Or maybe we'll see a bit of bonding with Ginny?? And her own "boy-troubles"??

Keep the good work!

Author's Response: Oh, you're right! I forgot that Neville had also asked Hermione to the ball. Darn. Well maybe I'll fit some Neville reactions in down the road somewhere, and I know there will be more with Ginny. Hermione's got to have a girl-friend to confide in after all. Thanks for your review! :)

Reviewer: chattyswimmer
Date: 12/12/10 16:25
Chapter: Chapter 5

Yay! I am so happy Viktor got the courage to ask her...I have to say, I really looking forward to Ginny getting Hermione ready for the ball, I think that will be quite funny. Obviously, I also can't wait for the ball :). Great job.

Author's Response: Thanks! Hmm, maybe I'll have to add that Ginny scene in. I've submitted the next chapter (which is the Yule Ball) but I didn't actually write the part where they are preparing for it. Maybe that was a mistake on my part...I'll see what I can do. :)

Reviewer: Kaiserin
Date: 12/08/10 19:48
Chapter: Chapter 3

Awwwhhhhh!!! So adorable! The lyrics by James Blunt are particularly suitable...
I'm dying to see this side of Year Four. Honestly. I know the books are from Harry's POV (he's in the tittle after all, right?) But we get SO little information about the rest of the team!! I'm sure it was a rather interesting year for Hermione and meeting Krum... realizing there were boys "out there" must have been quite a surprise! I'm eager to see how you follow this story!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Yes, I was always a bit peeved by how little we heard of the other character's lives, unless it had something to do with Harry. *shrug* I actually had a heck of a time finding lyrics for this chapter, haha.

Reviewer: chattyswimmer
Date: 12/06/10 12:24
Chapter: Chapter 2

Very sweet. I love the idea (even if it is a bit corny) that Viktor immediately could tell that Hermione was special.

Author's Response: Well, what's a romance without a little bit of corniness? :) Thanks very much for the comment.

Reviewer: The_Real_Hermione
Date: 12/02/10 21:16
Chapter: Chapter 1

This looks like it's going to be really interesting! I like how you've set Viktor's character up - especially with the part about how he hates people who only care about him for his fame, which is explore nicely through Simone. It makes it really believable that things could work out between Hermione and him, because she understands fame from beings friends with Harry.

I thought it was a bit strange that you wrote "My goodness, Viktor, you are very vet!" . Presumably at home Viktor and his mother would speak Bulgarian, not accented English, so perhaps you could have written "My goodness, Viktor, you are very wet," his mother said in Bulgarian.

Anway, it's a really promising start and I like the way you've explored Viktor so far :).

Author's Response: Thank you! And yeah, you're write about the what his mother said. Thanks for the tip, and I'll go change that. :)

Reviewer: chattyswimmer
Date: 12/02/10 19:53
Chapter: Chapter 1

This looks like its going to be a good story! Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thanks very much. I'm submitting chapter two right now :)

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