Way to end it with an evil cliff hanger... :)
Ah, I absolutely enjoyed this story. And I just love Snape. And I just love how you snuck in facts about Lily there and Destiny still doesn't know that the real reason he hates Harry is because of all that. Teehee! I wonder how she will react when she finds out...
Anyways, this was fabulous! I look forward to more!
Okay, I just loved this chapter! I was laughing so hard! I'm enjoying the little relationships, and on top of that, I just love how you worked in Harry being a Parselmouth. I have always loved that scene- I can't imagine what Snape was thinking at that moment, but now I have an idea of what other kids were thinking. Teehee! :) Love love love it.
Author's Response: Thank you very much. I love reading people's feedback. Hope to hear more from you. :)
Fantastic! I love the bit with Hagrid!
They are JK's characters but the new trio are yours and the brilliance with which you have wrote this story and the first are in an amazing class all their own!! Excellent chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much. Hope you like the last chapter as well.
another great chapper, please keep them coming. like where silver gave in at the end and laughed with drake, and happy that he told her.
Brilliant as usual!!
Yay, lots of Snape in this chapter! Shame he's not making cookies or something equally brilliant. I hope you do continue the series further, as I can't wait to see how you're going to sort out the trio after the return of Voldemort, although you've told us the sides they'll take.
Oh wow!!! Awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Excellent as always! There are a few typos, but nothing major. It just registered in my brain that Snape was kissing. It didn't sink in at the end of the last chapter, but that's the most bizarre image! I love how you make Snape do the most un-Snapelike things, yet make him sound exactly like JK Rowling portrays him. Possibly the indication of time passing could be implicated more? Obviously we've had time indications such as the Gryffindor/Hufflepuff match, but it seemed a bit sudden when you had Ginny get taken into the chamber already.
Ahhhhh, cliffhanger! Hopefully the next part of this chapter will be up very soon, so I can find out. It's definately interested me. I wasn't sure abou the scene with Salazar and Luna at first, as they seemed a bit young to me, but I liked the way it ended. I'm glad you've brought Snape into the end of the chapter, as he's one of you're biggest strengths (and my personal favourite character, real books of fanfics), and no chapter is complete without him popping up.
Author's Response: I completely agree about Severus. He's always been the best character. Sarcasm rules and he uses it so well. I have about two more pages to write to the next part and then I'll try to post it.
With Salazar and Luna I do think that Luna is quite young since she's only like eleven or twelve by now but that's why I had Salazar take the lead. Though, thirteen is still young, Salazar is and always been older in the mind than body. Besides, I made sure it was a very innocent kiss.
Hope you enjoy the second part as well and thanks for commenting. I love reading them.
I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw the next chapter posted already! Very good as usual, and I can't believe how you manage to keep Snape in character and make him hug people.
I love this! Snape baking cookies and putting up christmas trees! I love that you have tapped into a part of Snape that no one seems to bother to admit might exist!! Great job!!
I am speechless! The scene between Des and Snape where they hug is incredibly powerful as are the scenes between him, her, and Drake! Wonderfully done!!
This has to be the best chapter yet! I kept glancing at the scroll bar and getting dissapointed the further down it got as I didn't want it to end. As usual the characterisation is amazing, and I'm looking forward to Silver's revenge on Drake. The little detail about cookies at the end made me burst out laughing (I was picturing Snape in an apron making cookies.... incredible!).
Brilliant to see the next chapter, though there are a few typos which in places make the meaning unclear. It is insignificant and doesn't affect anything major, but it wouldn't hurt to correct it. Also, I respect the fact that in the USA you say 'mom', but it gave that section of the story a bizarre feel, that didn't fit with much of the rest. I would reccomend using 'mum', and appart from that it could almost have been written by Rowling.
Author's Response: Thank you for pointing out the 'mom' vs. 'mum' idea. Being an American, I didn't think about it when I wrote it but I agree with you and I'll make a point to use the British form from now on. Thanks again!
Wonderful! Is it safe to say at this point that the slytherin trio knows a little more about Harry than Harry does? I so love these characters and I can't wait for the chapter on Christmas break!!
Just read the much awaited new chapter and love it! I log on every day hoping your story will have been updated. I can still only guess where all this is going, but I thought Salazar's interview with Dumbledore was very well written and (like the previous chapters, and story of year 1) maintains each character brilliantly. Its also nice to see longer chapters, and more of them, than the first story; it means I get to read more!
Fabulous!! As always! Love it!