Reviews For Humbug!
Reviewer: charmaine23
Date: 01/26/11 16:32
Chapter: Prologue – The Half-Blood Ghost

I love your prologue. It looks like it will be very funny.. I really hope you update

Author's Response: Thank you very much. Hopefully I will get the motivation to continue this (which I will), as I want it to be humorous. ^___^

Reviewer: rachelnotrach
Date: 12/25/10 23:12
Chapter: Prologue – The Half-Blood Ghost

I really liked the prologue and was hoping more would be up soon. I was a little wary when I saw you were using Snape, because everyone seems to be using Snape as Harry's guide, but your characterizations were very good. I'm curious, what exactly made you choose Snape to be his guide?

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I was hoping there would be more, too, but I ended up getting swamped by work and other challenges, so I missed the deadline for this challenge. =/ But, I can say that I don't ever not complete a challenge (well, this will be the first time completing something after the deadline). So this will be finished.

I chose Snape as Harry's guide because I figured that 1) it had the most comedic potential, and 2) it's a good inversion: Snape is normally the Scrooge, and though he is serving as Harry's guide, who is to say that he won't learn something along the way? Maybe that was the point of him coming...

Thank you again for the review. ^^

Reviewer: sam1
Date: 11/30/10 11:29
Chapter: Prologue – The Half-Blood Ghost

NICE STORY HOPE U UPDATE SOON

 



Author's Response: Thank you. I should be updating soon. ^_^

Reviewer: SingingWren
Date: 11/29/10 14:42
Chapter: Prologue – The Half-Blood Ghost

I can't wait to read more of this! I loved the introduction, it was spot on. The whole thing, in fact, was pretty spot on :) I really like your varied use of vocabulary, it adds something special to your writing. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad you like it so far. ^_^ Hopefully, I'll have the next chapter up soon. Thank you. ^^

Reviewer: Gmariam
Date: 11/28/10 17:28
Chapter: Prologue – The Half-Blood Ghost

Awesome start! You've set up Harry's character very well, and Snape's appearance was perfect! You captured his tone and inflection wonderfully - it will be such fun to watch where he takes Harry! Good luck as you continue! ~Gina :)

Author's Response: Aww, thanks, Gina. I'll probably come back and tweak this a bit since I wrote it in an hour. I do plan on adding some humour to this, but since it involves Snape, it will be very dry humour. ^_~

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