Reviewer: DogLover4Life
Date: 12/12/10 21:19
Chapter: The Greenhouse Hero

Sequel, please! I didn't like Neville and Hannah at first, but the more I think about them together, the more I like them!

I loved this! The makeover people voiced exactly what ever HP fan ever thought of Neville, "He looks like such a pushover, you know."

The bit about dirt under his nails was so endearing. You should have Hannah dislike it, so he wants to change for her (since he loves her) and clean his nails. Because, really, it's a matter of cleanliness.

Author's Response: Oh, Elle, of course it would be you! My most faithful reviewer. I'll think about that sequel, because it really could turn into a nice story. Thank you!

Reviewer: KarasAunty
Date: 11/17/10 11:27
Chapter: The Greenhouse Hero

Hello Cinderella Angelina,

nice to see another Neville writer about. You got his personality spot-on. I enjoyed the makeover theme, though I wanted to happily smack Terry and the team at time for saying such rude things about Nev - 'cos he's perfect just the way he is!

An engaging, quirky tale. It made me smile to see Nev put those pushy fashionistas in their place!

Kara's Aunty ;)

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