MuggleNet Fan Fiction
Harry Potter stories written by fans!
(Signed) · Date:
11/24/10 6:38 · For:
The Journey to Hogwarts
i really liked this, the rhyming is what made it, and though the syntax and word choice you used in this story, it makes it easy for anyone to relate to. this story could be about anyone, (except maybe the "catching the eyes of pretty witches part", but you never know, some girls might be like that.) good job, and keep writing! :D
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and I definitely will try to keep writing! :)